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Voted For: final

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Final -
Dope Piece here, ur gettin beta all the time n i like the thought that went into some of ya barz here, cud feel a certain amount of emotion also which was gud, vocab was above average and ya flow was on point throughout.

Personify-
Again nice piece here, flow was flawless n it was quite original the thing that let it down for me was the simplisity of some of ur rhymes, i found myself bein able to predict wot the next line wud end in, i don't like that, n also ya vocab cud be uppin, but apart from that nice piece


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Voted For: final

i was feeling finals drop more...he work good with the topic...final got my picturing a image of what he was saying...structure was good...he stayed on topic...he had some tite metas in there aswell...shit was dope...

Personify you had a good drop also but not as good as da other kat...i thought you were rough on some points in ya verse...structure i thought was bad...but ya had good metas aswell...dope shit fam but not dope enuff to take my vote

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Voted For: final

i think final got this. i think he came harder with creativetie and imagination in this one. i was feelin this whole verse. i think it was flawless. it started off right, and i think it ended tha same way.
personify-u had a good drop. i was feelin ur verse a lot too. i think u came hard with structure and rhyming, but i think u lacked in originality and interest. i think u should work on ur imagination. u had no imagination in this one, that caught me, and no sensory detail. ur verse was just boring to me.
overall- this was a close one, but i went with interest in this one, and i think final got it. he came hard wit that, and i think u got mad skillz, but just elevate still.

plz rtf on battle link in sig, and plz make it explained, cause i took my time out to vote on this one, n explain it....


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No originality? What the hell are you talking about? J, I don't know what the hell you are smoking, but you need to lay off it. That verse was original, did you not get the metaphors? Man you are retarded.

Voted For: final

final nice job man i thought you took this one because it was very descriptive.. nice wordplay and vocab.. what i liked the most was that you had honesty in it.. you can visualize whats going on in your head as your reading it so it is a hot drop nice job

golden days- also a nice drop it just wasnt as powerful as finals i thought. you had alot of good aspects like your vocab but it wasnt as straight to the point as finals was.. no hate though i liked it alot i just thought finals was a little more deep than yours


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