Originally Posted by Nemesis

heres a wack ass verse i freestyled vs 1mic




1mic huh? u couldnt touch this even if u had 2 mics
cuz ya rhymes are like gay protestors on strike
0 wins 10 losses u reppin dat shit like ja rule wit 2 pac crosses
have you changing up ya shit like a girl & her eye glosses
my punches all ready K.O'ed u causin ya brain damage
your a bloody mess u need a couple of bandage
Ill leave ya dropped like a dead raped prostitute
merk ya so much its just like a 9/11 tribute
ya lines are played like a same song over
merkin me is like finding a 4 leaf clover

heres a open mic

Verse 1

i drop this shit, killin all these fools
bombin like Iraq, stealin jewels
thiefs theme like Nas was back
hittin up techs hard like crack
check the name, im scene stealin
killa boi, doin shit up like da twin tower buildin
im ridin on wheels spinnin like da G-Unit piece
u dont want, u a vegetarion how u gone want beef
u fuck around, them hollows take flight
and leave u lit up like a light bright

Verse 2

droppin my verse higher then bombs over baghdad
killin more ppl then blood cells on a fuckin maxipad
bombs are burstin harder then a nuclear warfare
shit so damn bright u cant even get a good glare
got ppl so scared even worse then a closterphobic
have ya lose ya eye only 1 left like a fuckin slick rick
fuck around with me ill have ya fellin the 12 gauge
goin on a rampage causing ya to lose ya WAGE
punches hittin harder then planes hittin at 7A.M
PPL causin more beef? u only causin a condemn


then last one with a battle vs pleim



No one looks at ya callouts cuz all u are is a herb
couldnt spit a perfect verse if all u said was verb
dude look ya punchin ya self just look at your name
cuz all ya lines are the same merkin u & takin fame
u only got 1 u havin 2-0?? Naw bitch its slim to none
this battle is for shits and giggles im doin it for fun
messin wit me ill have ya shot more then columbine
break ya spine got ya twisted more then a intertwine
bars so bright thinkin u just saw a nuclear explosion
Cuz u still wouldnt elavate with help from a erosion


so DV lemme know if im in or not cuz im close as hell to being very good ok. :thumbup:

Originally Posted by DeadlyVision

Interestin.

Retired crews dont come back, its amazing how many of em claim to be back...and went stupidly wack.