cmon pplz stop sleepin and leave some votes on this dammit...lol

Voted For: Pen N' Paper

Pen N' Paper was more creative on this muthafucka, even his structure n flow wasn't as good as Kein, Creativity on this battles is tha winner:

fav lines:

Kein:
"EVERY[b] minute of his meaningless life was always so boringly methodic.
People were alarmed by his day dreams and black-outs, gave him tonics.
He'd imagine he was battling monsters, when really beating old seniles.
When friends told him it was make-believe he just shook his head, smiled. "

Pen:

"This is just an average life everything the same
Nothing in our powers can do to help it change
There’s always an average up and an average down
Everything that we live for is what happens now"

Kein - 8/10
Pen - 8.5/10

V/Pen

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battles on my sig:

hey i got a vote finally...lol uppin this shit cmon peeps

cmon uppin this man ok lets get this closed finally aight

652 views and 3 votes...isn't that just wonderful...

Voted For: Kein Witz

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ok thnx for DQed vote^^

uppin this for more vote cmon im gettin tired of uppin trying to close this down

...wtf? Where does this say it's a poetry battle, bro? It's a TOP-I-CAL. Big difference. One is telling a story. The other isn't. See how that works? Very confusing. << That's like saying I need the basics of chemistry to mow a lawn.

uppin this cmon pplz lets get this closed uppin 4 votes

i kno its late but uppin for more votes plz thnx u

uppoin this man cmon been like 3 weeks already and still havent been colsed cmon votes plz

This was feedback posted for Pen N' Paper
 

I just want to check polls right quick...

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This was feedback posted for Kein Witz
 

just checkin pollz....

uppin this fo votes lets go pplz votes plz

yo kein agree wit diss man whoever gets next vote wins aight man im gettin tired of this i want to start new battles aight man im all full so whoever gets next vote wins ok mna its tied.... uppin this

yo kein accept my stipulation aight ma cuz i want this closed aight man^^^

uppin this

yo kein u online so answer my question aight man^^^


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cmon kein answer............ uppin

wurr u at kein cmon answer the question this is gettin borin fast....lol

dammit kein answer me if u dont answer me by 2day i guess ill PM u then ok man....lol

o_O Huh? You want it to end in a draw?

>< Start paying people to vote or something, bro.

nah just whoever gets the next vote wins then aight man lets do this ok man agree wit it.....

uppin this and waitin for ur answer aight man

answer this aight kein let me kno just to end this battle ok man we tie so whoever gets the next vote wins ok man

I don't want this closed, because if someone who actually knows a damn thing about topicals comes in here I'll get this easy win.

ok wuteva......

uppin this lets get sum more votes plz votes upppin

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Voted For: Kein Witz

ok, heres the deal

i liked kein's approach better....he was more creative and expressed his thoughts/feelings with more perspective and detail....i was really attatched to his storyline; kept me interested the whole way through, which is what you need to be able to accomplish....overall, nice verse....could be better with emotion though, but that wasn't the focal point....well done

pen and pape...took the basic approach here, sometimes thats okay, if you get involved/detailed into the topic, but you didn't, so much anyways....weren't that consistent, i thought, which took away alot from the piece....you had that lilttle thinking quote after each verse, which was pretty cool....but i thought some verses really lacked in imagery and emotion.....although a couple were really intuative; you just need to keep a consistency through your piece.....keep up, you had a nice piece

overall, both came good, but kein came more creative and more aspects stood out...i.e. imagery and such....well done to both, keep up to both

v/kein witz

uppin this cmon votes plz stopsleepin

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uppin this like always dammit.......lol when is this gonna get closed?????........lol

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Voted For: Kein Witz

Pen N Paper - i dunno from ya genereal demeanour on RV i expected more from you lol, your verse lacked structure and this took away from ots flow, which made your idas hard to follow, i think you took the simplist approach to the topic and u did cover it well tho, vocab was decent - 7/10

Kein - didnt know u waz dope like dis wid topicals cuz, the vocabulary was on a level just below mine :thumbup: which is still dope, and u used it effectively, ur drop hada nice story to it, structure was itght and oncise n shizzle flowed well, ur approach was not as simplistic as pen n paper, you went into detail and left a very enjoyable topical - 8.5/10

Vote- Kein Witz