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ModrnDayScrface 07-21-05 08:24 PM

man what the fuck your from memphis
wouldn't u be better off in the countrey bussiness
do me a favor say hi to Tim Mcgraw
and ur steel cant even compare to what i draw
i got aks in the closet fully loaded
and what u know bout scarface i bet uve never seen coke much less sold it
.........
i know last lines a lil long but i had to say it

Opposed 1 07-21-05 08:28 PM

ColdSTEEL has got no appeal, his prose it just blows
like handkerchiefs, lesbian quiefs, and Scarfaces Nose!
Your lack of ability is a truth held self evident
You got no agility, the lack of quickness is previlent
Dont get me wrong CS - Coz yo I dont really know you
But keep dropping dribble like that - and Opposed 1 will "dro" you
What's "dro you" you ask? It meanz I'll chop up ya lines
To match every line I leave - you gotta post three times
I invite you to come back at me with your hardest of quills
But dont even bother posting less your displaying the skillz

Pro. 07-21-05 08:58 PM

what R U?........ sum sorta cat thats beyond bitter!
2 diss's..."3's company".... an all I get is tha gay black John Ritter.
That wasnt even a punch line..more like Advice.
Wanna Battle?.....This aint beef,Im just throwin RICE!
Lets take it ta tha front lines,Let me know if you 4-real!
My name stays in ur mouth...YOu prolly bite! so you can get a Cold~SteaL(SteeL)

Dont Make This Serious,BOI


and dude below Opposed1...."I told you a long time ago...Not to Fuck wit Me!!!,You lil fuckin Monkey!"

Lol....juss havin fun wit it,Get At Me!

spiky 07-23-05 02:16 PM

yea sure ima get at you
sorry boo...but its the sad truth
that it had to be ur mouth in which i blew
u be wrigglin lyk a trout while i screw you
how can i make this not too serious....
u say ur cold steel but infact ur a silly wuss

Night_Walker 07-23-05 02:57 PM

^^yo written these 12 lines will be a waste of my time
cause da nigga above me doesn't know how to rhyme
nigga u couldn't beat barney in a freesyle don't try me
i'll be walking around at night just to haunt ur dreams
go buy all the jewlery u can so u can just try to shine
if u come across me then ur jewlery will become mine
just hurry up mothafucka cause ur time is very short
because i'm comin to end ur carrer without any effort
i rhyme like 50 cent i might hurt ur feelins jus a lil bit
get over it pussy da nigga above me is a str8 bitch
and my raps are deadly they are str8 lyrically killen
my raps make spiky curl up and start to catch feelins

Night_Walker 07-23-05 06:22 PM

wat nobody wanna diss me

spiky 07-24-05 06:50 AM

one line is all that i need to finish this bitch off
comparin himself to 50...just makes me laugh
hes been typin those 12 lines with tha same hands
that been night walkin on the bulge in my pants
i knew my dick was too big 4 his throat...
but he was the only "bottom" cheap enough when i was broke

TheCritic 07-24-05 09:42 AM

Okay!,This actor is wack let me make this fuckin quick.
If you aint gay,Then why would you like a man suckin dick?
Dont answer that......Please! at least for my sake!
An 6 lines is 2 much just ta diss-mantle any 1 of these Fly-weights.
So next time you drop a line make sure it sounds good!
And sayin you~ influenced by crymz~Dont make you sound Hood.


Spiky?......Hah!

MexicanGuy89 07-24-05 05:46 PM

TheCritic?, Who the Fuck are ya nigga,
Dont Know?, RapVerse is for murderous killas,
Who are you to say if his lines is wack or hot,
Look at your's cuz muthafucka they not,
Ya like that Jewish kid on mtv that wanted to rap,
Fell down cuz you been lyrically capped,
By a muthafucka with killa skills, Ready to spill,
Ya brains out, Knock ya face out,
Wouldn't sell a record if one ever came out,

TheCritic 07-24-05 06:29 PM

Hah!!

Ur Text record tells me either you scared or very un-capable..
You just another Mr.Glass,while My rec's like Bruce-Willis on Un-Breakable!
These lines I throw are meant ta catch tha biggest fish...
I pulled up a mino...Mexicanguy rappin..Damn sayin that is tha biggest diss!
Really,I think you need sum directions...R.V. "This kids Loss!"
Me write better lines...Why?, ta beat up on this Fake ass Kid Frost!

Lol....Chump!

MexicanGuy89 07-25-05 08:02 PM

TheCritic, Thinks he be dropping lyrics,
But he aint drop shit,
Thinking he make hits,
But he ain't make nothing but babies cry,
Says he don't talk to girls cuz he shy,
But we all know he's gay,
Noone in the world that could make him straight,
Even if they gave him permanent bitches, My wishes to ya,
Leave ya fucking weak ass to my sista to school ya,
In the fucking art of rapping, You could learn something,
Inspiration for Pharells "Frontin",
So stop fucking rapping, Cuz you suck,
Little sugar coated muthafucka got me heated now you stuck,

Opposed 1 07-27-05 02:13 AM

Mexican Guy 89 tries to rhyme
but he keeps on droppin the mic - time after time
He's like a mime, mixed with a new emcee in training
no real lyrics come out - even tho he seems to be straining
What's significant here is a lack of originality
Like an autistic prom date - he aint got no personality
Frugality's apparent cause your rhymes are cheap
When it comes to rap I'm a machine - so leave ya messsage at the beep
What a creep! He tried to finger fuck little miss Bo Peep
But couldn't catch her so he settled for one of her sheep!

Ecko-D 07-27-05 05:51 PM

U sound like a Idiotic Gothic tryin to rap so Stop-it
666 printed on ur head and u still dont know the meanin of-it
ur a Bitch Jus like ur 'Rapper' ur a "Hitchhiker"
Cant support urself, ur a Dick-rider
Locked up every weekend in the past
Wasnt cuz he was bad, its cuz he loved it in the ass

MexicanGuy89 07-27-05 06:15 PM

Ecko-D put fake pics of herself cus in real life she Horrendous,
Leave everybody that she know trying to guess genders,
But for now Hermaphrodite up in the muthafucking house,
Now enough to fill down south, And not enough to fill the Blouse,
Ugly muthafucka, How'd ya mom's get pregnant,
Some nigga got some pussy left ya moms all stranded,
Tell that bitch to wear protection when she out riding,
And tell her to put a roof and some brand new siding,
Round ha pussy cuz its getting broken into,
And stop prostituting herself cuz she aint fit to,

Sik Wit It 07-27-05 06:46 PM

look kid ya wack.. nobody wants to hear ya tracks
tell u the truth.. i didnt even know mexican's could rap
get back.. this shit is in full effect.. & ur just a whore
i bought his style.. & took that shit back to the store
u want more?.. & ur gonna get wacker & wacker
he's mexican..
for all i know.. there isn't a famous mexican rapper

Fiend 07-27-05 08:31 PM

Yousa gay dude, fruity bitch with absolutely no wit.
& i won't hold a grudge..
i'll basically beat you with it.
Face it, ya verse make people cringe. You won't win.
He can't bring fire, i'd be too embarrased to be seen w/ him.

Macreep 07-28-05 02:10 PM

Shut the fuck up,talkin shit,sayin he got no wit?
Well look to your left,and see the name you picked
That lame alias couldn't give kicks if you was Mr. Mijagi
Why'ma doin this?elementary,but this bitch can't tag-me
Flyeweight but his wings broken like the I'ma bird killer
1 win?WOW,now I seen it all,but he done,like Reggie Miller

spiky 07-28-05 03:07 PM

Mr. Macreep is getin ready to go six deep......
coz my words burn this pussy like third degree
yall will agree...all he got is a stinkin pedigree
came to rv for big deeds...now hes runnin away full speed
one more thing bout this creep....hes six feet
and his mama still gives him a breast feed....

Macreep 07-28-05 03:35 PM

Mad cause I'm 6 feet?why,cause ya can't reach my balls?
Only you,I know,neva get some votes for you,without a call
My mama may breatstfeed me,but you mama sucks ya ding-ding
And she neva gets ''off'',a new meaning to deepthroating "springs"
Stinking pedigree,shut up,damn wrestling fan bring up triphle H
EVeryone escapes ur wrath,like a prison cell with a briddle cage

PLease.........go elevate kiddo

Big Dangerous 07-28-05 10:12 PM

MC creep's level is six feet deep under me
makes you wonder how he never realised his blunder
you should never post befor me. you'll never detour me
cuz puttin us in a batlle like a medevil tail
his flow drag-on i spit hot fire, it will never fail.

Macreep 07-28-05 11:01 PM

How you sopposed to leave me 6 feet when ya can't even plaster me
And if ya don't like me postin before you,well then,don't post after me
C"mon,....look at your last line....you only tryna self glorify yourself
Click right here cause based on your verse,your lame ass needs some help
So to keep hip-hop's credible...I'll refrain myself from callin ya shit a verse
Because seriously,I thought that Spiky fag was whack.,but you proved ya worse


Don't even respond kiddo......go elevate........

MexicanGuy89 07-29-05 12:41 AM

Spittin Bitten Shit Nigga That's Ya Style,
No Penis Pussy Muthafucka... Don't Deny,
Well All Know It, You Show It,
Think You Got Game So Throw It,
Lyrical Razors Spitten At You, Got Wounds... Sew Them,
In The Ass So Much It Leaves Ya Anus Constanty Open,
MaCreep?, ...MaCreep over and Fuck Ya Mother, No Rubber,
While She Screams Of How You Guys Always Fuck Each Other,
Man, Got That Fake Bling Trying To Be All Gangsta In Ya Ear,
But That Penis Got Ya Feelin Like Ya Moms Pussy After A Pap Smear,
And Don't Come Back Saying Shit About Me Being Mexican,
Rough Ya Ass Up And Stay Elegant,
And Scare Ya So Much Shitout Some Shit The Size of an Elephants,

Macreep 07-29-05 01:07 AM

^^^wtf is this bullshit?

First 2 bars sums it up,you dun deserve responce,you a goof
If I spitten bitten shit,then come on faggot,post some proof
I feel asleep during ya shit,only talkin about beatin me up
WHile we on the net,so stab the computer screen,you dumb fuck
I fuck my mom?,hmm,well it's still better than wat you got
Sittin at home using ya palm,jacking off to a video of PAc
If you so ill...then why haven't ya got into some battles yet?
But I get it,you busy making raps fantasing about gettin wet
And I bet you want my anus constantly open too,don't lie
Cause as soon as I unbuckle my belt,you the first running to say hi!!!!!

MexicanGuy89 07-29-05 01:35 AM

I don't say hi to fags like you cuz you don't deserve it,
Got exited when you cummed one drop and went to preserve it,
Faggot remarks about me, Stop please, I ain't into to that,
Racist, Yes, So fuck all you god damn niggers from Trinidad,
I know you gonna come back about some shit about Mexico,
When you know you like it....My Dick?, Never wanna let it go,
And you the one who sit at home and jack off to Pac,
And think about dicks when you look at ya fucking clock,
Cuz you can picture the ones, Look like that fat ass shit in ya ass,
Cum so hard cause you to fucking spaz,
When the cum came out,
Started to cry when the dick came out,
Cuz knew it was ya time to pay out,
Ya pimp cuz ya afraid I'll fucking hurt you,
Cry like a baby make me wanna burp you,

Macreep 07-29-05 01:55 AM

^^^Lmao.........just stop....

Talking bout me preserving cum,hmm,I see why mad for it
Cause I murded ya ass and not even ya moms gave a shit
Mexican line AGAIN?,damn,recycling bullshit,cause you suck cock
And tell me this.....homo....how does a dick relate to clocks?
Exaxtly...spittin random shit,and ya wanna go gainst me?
And all those dick and cum jokes's a sign,ya want sumtin from me
^^Lmao...true talk right here

Faggot....

spiky 07-29-05 02:43 PM

aah macreep we meet again...u fukin birdbrain...u try in vain only to get slain
this man flys like an airplane high on champagne...but dont worry g il be humane...
u think u sprayin but everythin u b sayin is plain lame...goddamn..please refrain
u aint getin no gain or fame....coz this is not ur game....ur outta the frame
but u have no shame....thats why i came....my aim to burn u like flame
plz rename coz uve been stained....and never proclaim on rv again

Opposed 1 07-29-05 09:19 PM

spiky hair and brown underwear, smeared up with shit stains way down under there
the same damn place from which you rap, the same damn place from which you crap
your ass, but not the kind the gentlemen payin fo
even in a dollar store, your still a discounted ho
your flo? its like a chia pet that just wont grow
you give it away as a present and the gifted say - "this blows"

MexicanGuy89 07-29-05 10:51 PM

Little nigga slapped up, capped up, Just talking pure shit,
Facing the Mexican with the fat ass dick,
If I was ya moms I'd fucking throw you in the garbage,
I wouldn't waste my time with this $ Store nonsense,
Ya bush, Is like ya penis it doesn't grow,
Like ya girls "Orgasm", You erect too slow,
Ya think having sex is getting in bed, making out, ready to go,
But it's too advanced so ya don't understand you lil ho,
Molesting little kids, Even touching ya Lil Bro,
Dumb ass bastard, I'll see ya while we burn in hell,
HaHa, Make a record, Even then still be waiting to sell,

$wollzilla™ 07-29-05 10:55 PM

lil mexican thinkin he tony montana
false claimin could get ya wig split like uh banana
you whack n ima eat u up like uh tamale
wen u see me...u betta run like im uh federale
so be easy lil man b4 u get ya back wetted up
cuz lil niggas like u could get ya whole block jetted up

MexicanGuy89 07-30-05 01:44 AM

Wannabe Tony?, Who homie,
It ain't me cuz you don't know me,
And what's this talking about tamales,
You talk, You still in your Panales,
That's spanish for Diaper,
Nigger, Shut up for I send you back to Niger,
And lynch all you blacks still in the U.S.,
You know ya like my dick, so confess,
It's gushy, yummy, yummy, how you like it,
See me, get huge boners and try to hide it,
But don't, it could be bad for ya health,
Walk up through ya hood, kill ya with bomber stealth,

snipes 07-30-05 01:50 AM

u a bitch
leave ya in a ditch
and then fuck ya bitch

Macreep 07-30-05 03:41 AM

you ain't tryna be funny...bitch,that the best you can do
stomped up and down so bad ya actually breathing shoes
only you,i know,allow blue suits,to grab ya hose off loose
then ya go around braggin and shit...and sayin it not abuse
why ya wanna fuck that guy's bitch?...cause find a girl yaself?
well post here again,i'll make it worse,and make ya lip all swell

¤ÐÅž¤ 07-30-05 03:46 AM

lyrically, skillfully, technically your just simple minded
ya basically you got offered wackness...n fuckin signed it.
i dunno if your a bitch, man... but i know your a loser too
so ill leave ya black n blue like how ya sig'd ya damn crew
on the real though, i wont pick on you for just nothing..
unless i wanna lose.. then i just may pick you for something..
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Macreep 07-30-05 03:56 AM

wtf dawg...ya whack,nobody told you come back to the site
Unless I'm descibing the state of ya clit,then damn you ain't tight
swearing you the shit...with bullshit about pick for nothing?
when ya spittin bitten shit from RM in that last bar and struttin
but wat i wanna know...is why you pre-writting in the cypher?
And It's 4:00 AM,yet you here,hands on cock being all hypher

¤ÐÅž¤ 07-30-05 12:09 PM

lol,............ so i prewrite n bite..?, then send the links in,
ill drown ya thought of wins...... bitch just sink to swim,
this cats fake ass is wack, the epitomy of thats the fact,
plus this dudes always stalkin me for the skill that he lacks,
your wording sucks, so ill go retro n deliver old day beatings
i mean its obvious ya bars are week enough to hold AA meetings,
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2min

Macreep 07-30-05 12:17 PM

fuck outta here..why must I put link,you know you bite
how ya gon call me fake...and think it diss,when you white?
so yeah,i made a rasist comment,wtf your ass gon do then?
so take that biting outta here,ang go sink like a row-dent
I thought you had skills that i lacked,but i was dead wrong
cause my verse spanked ur worse than a hot chick in a thong
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1 min. ....bitch

¤ÐÅž¤ 07-30-05 12:29 PM

great fake personals.....lol.
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pure wackness at its finest...congrats

Macreep 07-30-05 12:30 PM

^^wat fake personal?
you ain't white then?
i thought you were....my bad then

spiky 07-30-05 06:00 PM

i see macreep one more time....his nursery rhymes still aint worth a dime....
everywhere he sees a dick....he goes blind....its time for a rapid climb....
like a gay queen in his prime....everyone wanna get behind
his lines all mistimed...he should resign...coz his frame of mind not of the kind....
his brains not aligned...wanted to be my bitch but i declined
today he a victim of organized crime....coz he aint half the rapper that i'm....

Pro. 07-30-05 07:05 PM

Spiky,What kinda name?...Fuck it,Never mind!
I see you kinda lame,Like you typin this verse everytime.
Diss you!?!...Hah!Your punches are like havin a Frogs reach!
Wit a name like spiky!...........I dont know if I should throw u ah bone
or put cha back on a dog leash!
----->Really,stop and think about what you write...instead of just droppin.
Those lines are so old!....My aunty started Buss stoppin!(lol.)


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