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Voted For: ColdSTEEL

I gotta spit form the end in reverse for u to finish me
U sippin Hennessey …..and from anywhere but Memphis cause it aint a ten-I-see(Tennessee)
3...played out wordplay
True name cause u aint hot and you steel rhymes that’s a true fact
Saying he wanna “CHANGE” the game so he lined up “4 QBS” to get a “DOLLAR BACK”
4...again..played wordplay
This kid is wack…. He only win one liners and no shows unless he battling sorry cats
Name of a fake rap hero cold steel save your life the villains sending me
3....didn't rhyme
He so slow he walked to “McDonalds” to try to find his “arch enemy’
I aint gonna spit gun talk cause I really don’t need to spray
3...not rhyming....no punch
Forget a clip to the head his brains already where defeat lay( the feet)
Never in~vite-a-man (vitamin) to battle its not good for your heath
5...start rhyming...good punch tho
Reflecting back ova your dead body so in your avatar you see yourself
Let hell freeze ova so u can get a breath of fresh air like a pack of mints
4....Ok punch...but yes..again...RHYME!
So fuck using pen-n-paper ur crews just dead people like the sixth sense
Mislead Meager Mother fuckers no wonder u don’t get respect
3...weak punch
Not to mention half of your damn crew is a bunch of R.A.W. rejects
1...gonna finish that bar?

Look at the chump of the crew,Claims himself the boss!
This battle is over even Randy Mcnally cant help ur "Loss!".
5...decent
"Drop quicker!"...Why?...We know your fake son!
Take this "L" like vitamins...cuz ur gonna be lookin like he Ate 1.(8-1)
7...DOPE
He aint even a worthy fighter,sorta like Bernard Hopkins.
Ur punches been seen ery'where,sorta like bird droppins!
4....played
Imma make this real eazy...like Wit built in strategy!
Cuz the only time you get close ta ah crown is if you filled in cavity's!
6....OK

Well...very awkard battle...but cold steel got this

Now MC Phil got better concepts n shit..but he barely rhymed.I don't know if it was the way I read it or not.But in text..you sopposed to type it up in bar couplets.Went above the line limit too...but coldsteel didn't DQ you..so..I guess it didn't matter.Had some played shit like the Ten-I-see and 4 QBS.The rhyming fuked ya verse up.

Vote-Coldsteel
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206909

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Voted For: ColdSTEEL

you got this in the bag

MR:you said TEN I SEE, lol that was wack as hell that is what made you a looser and him a winner, lol you are not good you need to elevate in so many ways, that 1 line lost you the battle wasnt even gonna read the rest of your verse, lol

COLD:aight you where ok alot better than that other battle i read you need to just take more time to write and make your lines more witty and maybe a lil more komplex but other than that you had this battle won

vote=cold

RTF
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=207228