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Deranged 09-15-05 07:18 PM

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Dickard. 09-15-05 09:03 PM

meh, i guess uppin............................................. ..........

wyteknyte 09-17-05 11:53 AM

Voted For: Deranged

ok, this was a pretty decent batttle.

deranged-Your verse was well structurized and i felt that you were on point with your creativity.But damn man your vocab was hottt. felt you enhanced your verse with it which made it so much better to flow with.your creativity in the verse was good...helped me keep reading...and your emotion as well as imagery was on point as well overall 7/10

mystic chaos-To me your verse was nothing that special, i feel your creativity lacked. I sorta felt the ending coming due to the lack of intensity in your verse..vocab coulda been enhanced...your imagery was ok though must admit that...your emotion....eh wasnt so clear, felt you could up on that.......yea ive seen better from you overall 4/10

v/deranged

%%%% 09-17-05 12:28 PM

This was feedback posted for Deranged
 
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%%%% 09-18-05 06:06 PM

uppin for a win...................................

Dickard. 09-18-05 07:15 PM

^automatically my win.........deranged is banned=my win.........ask anyone

noname 09-18-05 07:18 PM

This was feedback posted for Deranged
 
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noname 09-18-05 07:18 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Mystic Chaos
^automatically my win.........deranged is banned=my win.........ask anyone


umm...no...wait till 2morrow when strobe sees it..you ain't dodging no loss.

k?

Deranged 09-19-05 02:55 PM

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noname 09-19-05 05:32 PM

uppin this mutha fucker.

noname 09-20-05 02:47 PM

uppin.............................................


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