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Conceptions 10-23-05 08:32 PM

Aii This Is What I Tihnk


I Think That Daubs Is The over comer in this battle which is awfully Long I must Say I Think That Daubs Punchez were more origional and more complex than those of NK and the Personals that Daubs used were nicely worded why on the other hand NK was Strecthin out his personals and punchez also so i feel that Daubs has the over hand in this battle Not beein favoritive you know this is an honest vote

PM strobe and tell him to make it a valid vote im bout to bounce

J.D 10-24-05 04:28 PM

Voted For: Natural killa

fuck man, this is close as a battle between Em and canibus (and that wud be pretty fuckin close!).

both your verses were so gud, and its hard votin for one of you, but imma have to give this to NT, simply because he did what Daubs did (a verse with hot personals), and put multi's in it, and made it flow well. Daubs edged it with the structure i think, cuz a couple of NT's lines fell off, but i still gotta give it to him. i preferred NT's punches aswell, as i think quite a few of Daubs's punches weren't really hittin that hard, especially the alphabet one lol.

this battle was absolute dopeness, and its hard to vote really, but imma give this to natural killa for addin multis. no hate.......................

P.S. sorry i forgot i had to rtf for you NT, i wud've done it sooner

noname 10-24-05 04:53 PM

good looks on the vote dawg........................

WhoAmI 10-24-05 05:22 PM

daymn mayn this ish is still goin.....

k lemme say who i thought won on this one

i really wasn't feelin NK verse i saw everything i hate in text verses. you had forced wordplay, for example "so" and "sew" are not homonymns meaning they don't sound the same so shit like that didn't work. and the lines you extended didn't hit nowhere near hard enough to justify doing so. and overall your punches were generally weaker than daubs' IMO. even though you didn't really run out of steam i think you should have come harder intsead of coming consistenly mediocre. and i appreciate you did have some ok personals in there but the structure was basic and they just didn't hit hard enough....

daubs i thought you came a whole lot harder in this battle. you had more creativity in your punches and i was getting into your flow more. i thought you came with more intelligent wittier punches than NK although i wasn't feelin the grab and squeeze your throat opener because i thought you coulda come with something more original on that line just to keep things more consistent but other than that i don't think you really fell off. your punches were on point and i liked the wordplay, especially the part about Nat (natasha beddingfield) i thought that was amusing....

but anyway i personally thought daubs took this one

~peace~

WhoAmI 10-24-05 05:23 PM

^^^get strobe to make that a vote

%%%% 10-24-05 05:28 PM

Uhh..souljah...your in his crew............................

Daubs 10-24-05 05:30 PM

cheers for vote.


And he aint trini,

left time ago.

Il find thread if you need proof.

WhoAmI 10-24-05 05:36 PM

fuck it here's the thread trini:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=209989

check the date i made that ish

~peace~

noname 10-24-05 09:46 PM

but you've polled the battle already haven't you?

Daubs 10-25-05 06:25 AM

that aint matter,

he voted now aint he,
ima get strobe to turn it iunto a vote.

noname 10-25-05 03:16 PM

uppin.............................................

Daubs 10-25-05 03:27 PM

please confirm it in battle forum problems NK...
...be strate bout this please.

noname 10-25-05 07:55 PM

uppin.............................................

Daubs 10-25-05 08:16 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Daubs
please confirm it in battle forum problems NK...
...be strate bout this please.


please..........................................

FlowIntelligent. 10-25-05 10:17 PM

Voted For: Daubs

NK:

ur a bitch...no lie....so only if I could..i'd strike ur balls 'n tease
cuz daubs,i raped a girl last night,and it wuz all forced...
.........just like your multis..........
^^ok opener not too great 4/10
the polls are tied wit u 'n teph,but ur sig says something different instead
like desperate salesman,daubs,you always tryna put falseness into our head
^^ehh decent meta thats it 4/10
better off,u dead...cos they all rootin for me..yet u the one pullin stems
cuz while trini lines are played....ur gonna make 40 lines full of them
^^alright 5/10
ur brain thicker than wool 'n flem..ur crew got us all barking 'n strife
cos a member of LL's in the pen
......so no wonder everyone's started to type...
^^ok 5/10
this shit's hardly even a fight...like ur mom's ass,i'm just left untouched
& ur passin to beg...cos whackness 'an egg..'n u got the nest in thrust
^^good shit 7/10
dressed in dust...ur rhymes are old news..'n yet u'd pay to hug that 'n kiss it
and i ain't talkin bout african surveys...when i say u love the blacklisting
^^dope 8/10
u bite styles 'n dickride vets..but i'll still leave ya jaw fructured at the end of this
cos really... I ain't trying to play doctor...but ur structure's like a mimesis
^^ok 5/10
don't try to make any lines on pre-writing..YOU made a bitch move,stallin bouts
cos take a look at bitch slapped...it took you 5 days to accept my call-out
^^no 2/10
i'm winnin wit small doubt cuz ur rhymes affectin none,it don't hurt
and you claim to bring sickness to rap....but infectin no one but the herbs
^^no 2/10
die from the gun unheard..you UK pussies,you all stay mellow with the beef
dickridin the vets so much....shit....it's almost as yellow as ya'll teeth
^^ok 6/10
say hello to defeat...fuckin pussy....better get ready to go through heat
must have missed a loop with the stitches..the way ur flow "SEW" weak
^^good meta ok punch 6/10
cappin this song..u rappin so long and u ain't groom anything that'd blow
ur forkin ur lame raps to everyone...but you still ain't spoon any of the hoes
^^ehh 3/10
there's no room for ur shows...ur a waste...but u lying on the laps too soon
pokin this girl..cuz ur a joke to the whole world...but you still won't rap with toon(tune)
^^ok meta 4/10
capped 'n strewn...u got no balls...a woman'd have to push-ya to measure
fire comes to u 'n u try to squash beef faster than butchers under pressure
^^ok but butcher lines are played 5/10
all comes as pleasure...shock u up..have u hawking up some tazers
but u blow RAYS with ur verses
..........and I'm not talking about lasers....
^^ok 5/10
I'ma stalk this hater 'n bruise hiz letters cos i seen newbs spit better 'n demure
and he's been here as long as some 'a the vets...but still considered an amatuer
^^no weak closer 2/10

Overall: 73/160 (46%)


Daubs:

Now you swear you gonna win this,it takes more to phase Daubs
But i am connecting with nature...like trees with chain-saws
^^good opener 7/10
Maybe I have one weak bar a verse, but this time my luck aint shut
But Natural Killa.....Shite...I already gone and fucked it up
^^lol humor bar 5/10
Natural kills-A...so "lphabet" is now missing its pressence
And your words flow well.......when your spittin on letters
^^ok 5/10
4,000 posts in a month, aint it time somebody found the outdoors
And my talent is a great find...but RV still hasn't found yours
^^no 2/10
Gonna kill us all, your killing yaself, RV is your fuckin life
& ya verse could emigrate to india...and still struggle findin spice
^^oo nice 8/10
Second place is where u be-heading...so take off the neck shield
And im eatin nat up...like porn shows featuring mrs beddingfield
^^ok set up punch was weak 4/10
NK thought literacy lessons included pickin up rubbish with glasses (litter i see)
But he's quick to take "it"..........like he was rushing mathmatics
^^ok 5/10
Talkin about school classes, why, this bitch was never clever to begin
I mean the only thing trini can count.........is on me takin the win
^^good bar 7/10
I aint talkin about chocolate when i say NK's bars are fillers
And a-lik on the mirror...is the only time trinis ever a killa
^^ok 4/10
Fuck, how is this the "final battle" when trini never even won one
And i know this wack cat aint NYC (nice) so erase where you come from
^^dope personal 9/10
Grab and squeeze ya throat il take away your breathing fool
& its not unbelievable but, ive seen eggs that get less beat than you
^^dope bar good consistency 7/10
Im leaving NK green and envious, like bread thats stale
And am not tossin coins when i say trini gives head 2 tails
^^ok bar 5/10
Hes dull to look at, like he were visiably impaired
& most of RV dont get your shit...the others just dont care
^^no 3/10
He looks like, smells of and acts like shit...but we already knew this
Because NK don't live by the sword......he just lives by the sewers
^^good bar 7/10
Killa aint got dope concepts,but the lad he steels em from does
And he could be a surgeon with his heart in hand...and still feel no love
^^dope 8/10
Its generic to say NK gets less claps than wack empty shows do
But i cant get too personal....cos none of RV even knows you
^^true 5/10
He's dumb so i told him to fuck learnin,he tried to hit books
Again im takin Trini out easily...like a hoe in a strip club
^^ehh 3/10
when we said natural was killin the flow, we meant a dead rhythm
I offered peace of mind,but trini had different ideas of head giving
^^oooh 7/10
You rappin text, and i aint talkin websites when i say i gotta soundclique *sound>uk slang for good
id search his house, and even if his fam were women...id still find dicks
^^no 1/10
Look, this never has been hasnt been here long, n he'salready past it
& girls hate on trini...cos posting on RV is the only time hes active
^^good closer 7/10

Overall: 107/200 (54%)

Gotta give this one to Daubs better punches and more consistent.


Please RTF with an honest explained vote on this battle.... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=212569

noname 10-26-05 07:44 PM

aah...fuk....uppin................................

Daubs 10-26-05 07:54 PM

so you aint gonna allow the souljah vote?.


and dont forget to rtf on pressence account please.

Daubs 10-27-05 07:19 PM

thought not.

your e-pride too much matey?
....

noname 10-27-05 07:55 PM

if it wuz the other way 'round...and souljah voted for me...

would you have confirmed it?

I have a hard time seeing you do it to be honest...

Daubs 10-30-05 08:28 AM

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noname 10-31-05 02:21 PM

uppin.............................................

Daubs 11-01-05 01:07 PM

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noname 11-01-05 03:33 PM

uppin.............................................

noname 11-02-05 03:37 PM

uppin.............................................

Daubs 11-03-05 12:56 PM

uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp ppppppp

noname 11-03-05 03:53 PM

uppin.............................................

noname 11-04-05 09:02 AM

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noname 11-08-05 09:36 AM

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noname 11-09-05 03:48 PM

uppin.............................................

Daubs 11-09-05 03:49 PM

fuck sake...........................................

noname 11-09-05 07:57 PM

uppin.............................................

noname 11-10-05 10:22 PM

uppin.............................................

noname 11-11-05 01:53 PM

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noname 11-12-05 10:10 AM

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noname 11-12-05 03:07 PM

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noname 11-13-05 01:30 PM

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noname 11-14-05 03:12 PM

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noname 11-15-05 12:14 PM

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phive 11-15-05 03:51 PM

Voted For: Daubs

aight nice battle playas

natural killaz nice rhymes but i had to read them over and over for it to make sense cuz ya structure was everywhere
werk on ya flow too, everything else looked good though

Daubs nice battle man you had the flow and ya rhymes were dope man but your structure could use a bit of a tune up aswell, anyway i give this to daubs cuz his rhymes flow and his werdplay were hands down better than natural killaz

noname 11-16-05 04:02 PM

uppin.............................................


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