first bar didnt ryme or make sense
tha rest was mehhhhh average but it aint up to me i have no say.......gluck i guess

yo i dont battle much because im not good at it but i guess im a new audio head so here is something i did a couple months back.

javascript:Player('../player/single_player.cfm?songid=2898640&q=lo');

or just go to soundclick.com/bozeman and then click on brainstorm

ummm...WAY rhymes with K





lol

Tha first bar rhymes...Way and "K"...It was suppose to be like while your reading it instead of sayin tha word deck, your actually spelling it out...D-E-C-K...Thats what i meant by it..thanks for tha gluck comment G...Iight i guess im uppin on this

lol werd though it was bein said as a whole werd my bad

I dunno I'mma let Robby decide this one...

i see potential in him

To be honest I don't...

lmao i was thinkin tha same yo snipes hows that sig cpoming dogg
ohh and yall should check out my clap bakk remix third audio drop its def my best yet

im not talkin to u like u some otha shorty im talkin to u like i talk to every otha muthafucka dont try to clown somebody when u havent seen his skills really cus it was an alright bar he cudda came harder he prolly was playin around u act like he came with some simple as rhyme scheme or something that didnt make sense he came ok with that bar but w/e dont feel like being bother with that bullshit

1 n onli B idk u elevate a lil more

To Be Honest Hopefully there isnt Beef gonna on here...

i think he should up it too though if your coming to try out u shouldnt spit half assed u should sho yer crew wut u bringin to tha table nah mean?

yo Ryda is in this crew?

wat's dis crew's roster?

-[leaders]-
-[robby-mccallister]-
x,t,a
-[g-deuce]-
x,t,a,g

-[co-leader]-
-[blackmage]-
x,t,a

-[text-leader]-
-[black-queen]-
x

-[topical-leader]-
-[aimez]-
x,t,p

-[audio-leader]-
-[tha-q]-
a

-[graphix-leader]-
-[diligence]-
x,t,p

-[dynasty-lineage]-
-[excetera]-
a
-[l-veracity]-
a
-[macca]-
x
-[non-fixon]-
-[past-tense]-
t,a
-[shodown]-
x,t
-[snipes]-
g
-[tony-green]-
Executive Recruiter,a
-[u-n-f]-
x,a,g
-[venture]-
t,p
-[wicked-one]-
x
-[young-dollar]-
x
-[young-montana]-
t
-[zig-zag]-
Crew Representative,x,t,g

I Say Yes To Tha One And Onli B ......................I See Potentail and loyalty In him/her

Dont know the sex lol

bumpin............................................ .........

No beef if the nigga garbage he garbage and he garbage to me...

AIGHT..just sayin...its cool...

like i said if your coming to try out.........why would u spit a half assed verse
it makes no sense if yer tryin to get in a crew show em wut u bring to tha TABLe :thumbup:

yoo, im'a drop a tryout for this, becuz my crew, gods of war, is basically dead loll

yo yo, im rippin this, droppin ill shit on the mic with metaphors
half of y'all could spit for hours, and still not even get applause
killin emcee's is what i use verbs for
fuckin with me, is almost like startin another world war
i am hot, step to me in a battle, and get fried
i aint james bond, but still, im'a "live and let die"
whenever im on the mic, im always spittin mad bars
im'a true 'owner' on the microphone, just like 'gang starr'

thats probly my wackest 4 bars ever, but its just sumthin quick. i'd advise checkin out my recent battles, to see how good i am though lool

werd i say in cause ya audio u should drop an audio tryout though.................

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=459856

check out the track that says "i got 5 on it freeverse"............. :thumbup:

nice beat and voice**getz exited**
u need to up your emotion sound like u sad but werd id say in we could make u illy
what everyone else thinkin

thanx for the feed man :thumbup:

Let's get Q's opinion for audio...

alrite im down for text so ima drop a freestyle. Keep in mind that i am 13 and i have only been rapping for 2 months.

im from the midwest but i lrap like i'm feeling the south
listen to my verse, i know what im rapping about
lemme in i'll hold up the p-s-a, i rap my own way
i dont have to try, rapping for me is like childs play
naw im just palying i live for this rapping game
and afta i drop this verse all PSA will know ma name
all other crews are quite lame, and they disses are lame
if y'all my want ma rhymes, if ya wanna pick am brain
i can drop ape disses like the game does ta 50
even thugh im on gunitforum i still think they shitty
if y gots fans i got more forum, poaints for PSA, i score 'em
i can flow foreever like 300 bars and runnin
if you want a g, you know i'm gunning
lemme in i can wait, know i wanna elevtae
i drop flows you cant hate and songs you appreciate
dumb oppppents im drooping them like key car compents
i'll 187 while the cops are gattin donughts
when im done with this you'll be swayed
i roll V.I.G like a caddilac and escalade (VIG=very important gangsta..LOL)
but i can rap soft like baby blue suade
to let me im gonna try yo persuade
im lookun slick leik paul wall with a southside fade
my name be d-mat, know how ya like that,
bustin sucka's until bitches liek flat
im knocking them down wit a gat
killin suckas with fists, got reflexes of a cat
sorry this iu gettin long but i wanna do it right
im rhyming from dawn till the end of night
and y'all dont undersatnd my plight
but im trasporting white ona red eye flight
and thats at 13. for it i got some major CREAM
makin a million green for most dudes is just a dream
but liek jeezy i leik to trap, unlike jeezy i know how ta rap (jk i love jeezy)
all i do wit my money is but new era base ball caps
i got LA, Philly, new york, atlanta, ask me i got it
these nad rhymes i transmit, hope ya love this rhyme i submit
i love the soutehrn shit, like all the undaground
i dotn like mike jones, that sucka is a clown
he repeats his shit but it dotn sound good
miek been rich, he aint livin in no hood
the dude is aitn h-town he hollywood
im lovin CHAM, he knows how to bring the pain
im lovin paul wall baby, him and his silver chain
im lovin scarface, him and cham was tight on rain
im lovin slim thugga, addicted on his shit liek cocaine
im lovin lil troy, on limw wire they put his under the name lil zane
im lovin lil flip, hes a hustla, hes in the rap and crack game
im lovin big pokey, i listened to his SS verse again and again
im lovin lil keke, his screwed and chopped shit is insane
im lovin cootabang, gotta undastand im swisha house mang
im lovin aquela, once again he brings the swisha house pain
alright enough of that, you get i like h-town
think this tokk me a while, man i just sat down
i keep flowin and flowin this is ma thang
plese just lemme in mang
if this is too long i can shorten shit down
once you read shit, you'll want me around
just let me in a really need a sig
PSA the best, on RV thy real big
you know ima baller shot caller, im 20 inch crawler
i'll hustle anything to make a hundred dolla
dont ask why i go so long
dont ask why i flow so long
that was gay, it sounded redundant
murder on RV, you know whodunnit
im crazyer, fuckin than roger rabbit
and merkin cats is simple like a habit
im king of s-town, y'all know its going down
keep thsi rap world going around and around
im 13 and i can flow betta than mike jones, WHO mike jones
ima rapping and im still flowin and going on homes
my raps take ya ona journey liek lewis and clark
dont even try to bite me if ya aint got a bark
i'll kill anyone with one snide remark
impecceble time, wu-tang rhyming, spotlight shining
its past mid night nigga and im still rhyming
my shit is long like mountain climbing
bad situation, to it ima silver lining
this aint a word but im criming
shit this is like a rapping run on
ima rapper, like cha and 50s spawn
i dotn give a fuck, i did you baby mom
im a lot more than a regular rap pawn
im like a king, fuckin my queen all night long
Ooooooooo shit im gonna turn this goofy liek afroman
thought i was serious but mess around i can
thats what i leik to call yoda speak
dont make me bust my fuckin heat
just kiddin i dont kill i just do girls
im mad wit power i own 2 worlds
im flowing for more bars than i know
i'd liek to say welcoem to the d-amt show
incredible flow and im a g not a snitch ho
part of salinas finest wit magic g and lil red
you never met a super mc till you and i met
man do i love this song, i know its to long
o well long raps, theres nothing wrong
only good long rap wpuld be tha shit runnin
my rhymes are intelligent cuz im mad cunning
well ima bout done so let me in
we'll have a party and ill bring the gin
liek snoop i i love tangueray and a jay
if im in than just pm me away

That was long... and basic...

I don't know... props for typing all of that... cuz... I wouldn't.... not because I can't, but cuz I don't feel like it... lol

that was super long............................................i think u could be elevated not sure though this forums been pretty dead no one active

robbie u wanna hop on this asap remix me and unf is doin for tha crew????????
get at me quik

uh... yeah... gimme a link to the beat...

do you have msn foo????it would be way easier then we could discuss details too

Nah man I'm at work... I got aim and RV lol... PM me...

alrite tight shit. well yea idk why i typed all that. and yea i know it was basic. but i just felt like flowing.

It's cool....

...-[p-S-a]- looking for more...

Do i have the talent? Or no

Waddup Lookin for any text/topical?

alwayz fam drop a link to a topical or drop a quik verse now in here and tha crew will decide..................and peep my new song:shoot:

killah noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooou dont well u havent droped a tryout but yer record says a bit..............drop a verse

somin old of mine.