atty be owning kids by not even reading there posts. :)

The main reason Para was in and out like 4 times was because Will booted him about 4 times. Beef with another member or some shit, I don't remember.

mentalz can u view my beat in my sig click the soundclick.

Yeah, give me a moment.

Was alright... Wasnt very complex, but it wasnt bad man.

If you feel Para should be brought back than it's fine with me... I was just worried cuz it seems like he's be in and out alot. Para, go to the forum and try out man

^^^bump...bump...bump...


s.v., big bad c.s.

CS back to the top

what about me can i get a tryout

drop a tryout in here

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225249

*S.V. uppercuts the thread just to bump it up.*

^^^pure gangstaness.....lol.


...the super...

to the top were we stay

^^^wordola.


s.v. almighty, big bad c.s.

bounce .

Wats up Chrimes?

Im currently in process of elavation still and I was wondering since i need help kinda if I could join and get help from the best? :thumbup:

And P.S I've changed no more bullshit from me i've matured.

Who are you?...

kings.... me and s.V. Are coo and shit so yea this is my old fam as well. :thumbup:

see i dissed raw kings in a quick keystyle

what a wack bitch..... you a raw king?
your wackness exposes the real thing.
fuck this kid and his fuckin mugshot pics.
only thing on rv you gettin is a post full of dick.
believe the hype man its tru you fuckin suck.
think your ego's blown up.. bt your wack shit still shows up!


i've elavated since last time i was in C.S so wat u say guys am i in?

and also my topical i've wrote recently which i need to add more to it but heres what i got so far.

Imagine the world with no War or death.
or killing someone in there very footsteps.
and only Imagine if the world one day was pleasent.
and for once people followed religion to one day seek heaven.
children with needs imagine what such real life brings.
with all the hate mixed with volient and racial things.
kids are born into gangs and a war over turf.
in gods eyes wasn't this 1 life, 1 love and 1 earth?
imagine no slavery getting beat for something you feel isnt free.
or killing a innocent black man because of his future dreams.

Text= NO..
Topical= Not really feeling..

But def. no for text.

can i join as a beatmaker/topical head?

yall lookin for a new member holla at me

and me plz. :thumbup:

can i join plz?

i'm comin back as well. and just to ensure that i stay active i joined 2 leagues/tournies on the site. n of course im still doin this audio thing as well

mc philosopher: no disrespect brutha...but i dont recall any of your work off-hand, however, my impression is that you are tough with yours. i might be accidentily confusing you with someone else...(but in case im not) you might be an eligible accomplice to crhyme. word. hollar back folks.

theory: yes bruh...we do talk occassionally, but you shouldnt use that as a crutch to roc with the crhyme fam. i dont mean it to be a ruthless dick....trust me, because theres no disrespect in me towards you. you've definately gotten alot better with what you do than before, but you should come up to us as a hungry and established soldier...and not like your trying to get juiced in off of the wave of a hand, word. think about it for a while cutty. i want YOU here when YOU deserve to be HERE with US...no more...no less. my answer to you isnt a 'no' or a 'yes'. i will rely on the word of my team...and you should too. if its a 'yes'...i want you to ride till your heart gives out. if its a 'no', i want to elevete till your heart gives out.......and maybe then you will die and become potential crhyme material. we wouldnt want any less from crew/overall dedication.

mak: you know the deal my crhymie. go over and confirm things with atty and mentz.....then we'll go from there. p.m. me in a few days if you dont hear back from me about a collab. right on my dude.

oner.

BOOST THE CRHYME RATE!!!


...s.v. the tyrant...big bad crhyme sin...

I wont comment on text, as I dont do it really, and don't want to point you in the wrong direction.

However your topical is fairly basic. I noticed you use an aa/bb rhyme scheme, and that isnt bad but its boring. Your subject matter isnt very appealing either. It isnt very interesting. It flows well, but like I said its very basic. Try adding in a few multies, mixing up the wordplay... dont be so basic.

A few pointers to help you but as it stands I would have to pass on you joining the fams my man.

Peace.

Mak man, you know where I stand on this... Atty and I are complete opposite in decision as far as I know. I don't mind having you back in the fams as long as you stay active. I'm aware of previous reasons you went inactive and everyone does it. Thats life, no big deal.

If you want to come back, first and foremost you need to get with Atty. Secondly I want to see that you're consistantly active for a time.

Peace man.

so i can't join and have someone like S.V elavate me because i really wanna be in a dope crew and all and get elavated rather than bein in a dead fricken crew with barley any elavation. :thumbup:

:huh:

no responce? :huh:

^^ you fucking suck

Don't let "LIL' CALI" into your crew, f'real, you guys gonna lose soooooo much respect if you do.

no u fuckin faggot actually ima get elavation and then after that ima fuckin RIP you.

It's not that I don't want him in the crew, I just don't trust the fact that he says he's going to stay active. I mean, he's been in like twice I think, both times to which he really didn't do all to much. So it's not benifits C.S. in anyway. I dont know, maybe we can set up like a probationary period or something, but Im not just going to let him in because I can't trust him on word alone after having that falter in the past.

Theory, first of all, the whole Sv name mention thing really just bothered me. That just worked in the complete oposite direction for you, because I could careless who you know... Sv could personally Pm me requesting that I let you in and the only thing that will accomplish is that I'll actually look at your try-out. But I'm still going to decide based on whats best for the crew, not who's Sv's buddy. Even so, your writing isn't up to par, and realistically even if someone said they would help you elevate I would still say no. If you can get Sv to help you elevate, that's great, do it... And after you've worked with him and you've elevated feel free to come back to try out and we'll move on from there. Having someone below a nessisary standard on the roster does no good for CS, so when you reach that standard, only then will you even be concidered.

CS is not an elevation crew... We're not here to babysit and play mommy to aspiring writers. Elevation is a pain in the ass, but we've all gone through it and gotten to where we're at. So, sorry but, you're not getting any breaks from me.

Will you elevate me atty. :(

Oh I'll elevate you good baby mmmmmm ;)

^homo .

^^^wow with a capital W.

i really had nothing to do with this dude theory's previous comments (peep my earlier post in this thread)...
...however, (for some reason) this post felt like it was a partial slap in my face (like I have NO SAY with MY FAMILY if I wanted to).

but, im sure it was just a simple misunderstanding with words, right atty???


s.v.

Plain and fuckin' simple, theory, fuck off and elevate. No disrespect but you need too ^.

SV, I dont think Atty ment to disrespect you bro, just trying to get it across that just because you know someone doesnt mean youget into the fams.

Peace.

Thats exactly what im doin cus C.S Is my old fam and i wanna get in this.

Then continue to do it and stop asking to be in over and over again.

^^^right on mentz. thats pretty much what i figured.

have a great day gentlemen. :thumbup:


s.v.