Additional, U have to follow the topic given, U should post what ure "thinkin rite now" in freestyle. :)


Ive got a .. Napsack filled to the brim wit em stacks,
A corpse of a man, that I trapped and killed with a shank
Clogged their visions so cams couldnt catch a pic if they tried
robbed the system, this bank, so now Ima escape and then hide.
But wait.. that bitch "Grace" jus pushed an alarm, hidden.
My boy Richard, got killed from the guard, whose arms missin
So "swarm bitches, stay low on the floor" While I
-Run outta the door "Ya'll fuckas be screaming for mo?"
Hesitation is overwhelmed with sheer adrenaline, im skeltering.
Runnin between these hostages and corners where they shelter in.
Grabbing their purses, screaming for watches, and wallets,
At this moment Im tradin my fucken greed for my knowledge.
I shoula known better, but instead I stayed with it...
*sirens.. Fuck.. Now im caged...... :( DIPSHIT!

Next topic: Ure in the spiderhole with Saddam, wats he doin or saying? Lols

LMAO at the topic

saddam's thoughts:

i should've gave up my weapons, sad lesson
I have no food, and air begins to lessen
why are we even at war?just goerge bush boostin
i have the right to bear arms, its in there constitution
burning on my arm, and my face contnues bruisin
my legs caught between the walls no future plans of movin
he's jus angry at the fact that he's frightened
shaking at the thought of the nuclear pricing
so he's going to ventelate his anger by fighting
he's a phyco, neccecery needs in a asylum

next topic: fear of death

I'm one paranoid mother fugga, I'm scared of death
When I go swimming, I make damn sure I catch my breath
When someone pulls out they nine, I shoot bullets and run
I run until they can't seem me or point at me with they gun
I ain't exactly the type a dude to go out in a club and start fightin
'Cuz I know I'll get jumped there too, I'd storm out faster than lightnin
Hop in my car and take off at 100 miles an hour
You can't call me a bitch, but you can call me a coward

Next Topic : Being Jumped

^^pretty good topic


exiting the bank, countin my bundles
3 GD's rush me, using strenghth in numbers
i try to call for help, but my words translate as mumbles
kicked in the stomach, blood on the concrete
people watch, but no one wants to stop G's
i struggle to make it to my feet, balance broken
eyes burning and swelled, foot on my throat choken
tried fighting, but repetition of being knocked is notice
they ran off with my money, body numb for a couple moments



topic:*cop harrasment*

being harassed by cops

harassed by cops, another pitfall of livin' on the block
in days old, being a nigga wud've disadvantaged myself
now wateva race u r, u best run like hell
wen u c a cop comin with his hand on his shoulder
hiding tha numberz on his badge so u cant identify him l8r
"protect and serve" ,thats wat we call stretching the truth
"seek out and kill" is more apllicable to u
wen u c us on tha streetz mindin our bizness
leave us alone, even though u cant c a witness
dusn't mean u got tha right to extinguish tha light
of youth who have it burning so bright
u dont c it, but "stop n search" gradually hurts a brotha,
deep down inside where it can b seen by no otha.

being harassed by cops

harassed by cops, another pitfall of livin' on the block
in days old, being a nigga wud've disadvantaged myself
now wateva race u r, u best run like hell
wen u c a cop comin with his hand on his shoulder
hiding tha numberz on his badge so u cant identify him l8r
"protect and serve" ,thats wat we call stretching the truth
"seek out and kill" is more apllicable to u
wen u c us on tha streetz mindin our bizness
leave us alone, even though u cant c a witness
dusn't mean u got tha right to extinguish tha light
of youth who have it burning so bright
u dont c it, but "stop n search" gradually hurts a brotha,
deep down inside where it can b seen by no otha.

next topic:
stereotypes

Check my battles
Elusiv G vs. Invader_ZIM

constantly i enter a store, watchful eyes appear
peaking around corners, spyin, checkin if i didnt steal
rushing me to buy, shouts telling be 2 hurry, thinkin ima theive
undecided on a purchase, so don't think that ima leave
cameras seem to point at me, its not a coincidence
don't judge me by my skin, when will you racist bitches be convenced
don't prosicute me when theres a lack of evidence
comparin me with TV, to me is assumed to be erelevant
times hasn't changed at all, people haven't grown
they speak racial slurrs while in the privacy of there home


crit dis b4 u spit next topic plzzzzzzz

topic: cheated ina battle (we all relate to this)

Pretty good drop pro... id say 7.5/10
If u wana do a topical battle pm me

I set up the battle against this nigga wit some beef~
He went an accepted it... then i knocked out his teeth~
My punches and overall flow murdered him like a serialkiller~
Couldnt tell if he was tryin 2 diss or puttin in a filler~
Then i got KO'ed 5-0... all his votes by newbs wit 5 posts~
Then after they voted they faded out like they were ghosts~
Reported it 2 the mod after i noticed what hed done~
He had to make 5 new names cuz he knew i had won~

^off the top lemme know wat u think
next topic:escaping a burning building

I woke up one night to a loud smoke detecta
Appartment was on fire, musta been the money collecta
I still owed the bitch a shit load of cash
And to this day, I'm like one big rash
Anyways back to this quick little rhyme
Fire was all over, I knew I didn't have much time
So I ran out on to my balcony
I jumped, and fell on my knees
Broke them both, ended up in the hospital
It was a crazy day for me, holla back yo

Forgot topic.. like ALWAYS! Haha
Next Topic - Carry drugs and getting caught from the cops

it was 5 in the mornin ...just had finished stormin//
I had hustled my last pack soon as I looked up I saw the narcs swarm in//
told me "Put Ur Fuckin hands in the air....nigger"
"Now start touchin land" wit his finger on his hair trigger//
I was scared Niggah!!So I started ta panic//
Grabbin for my tools like I was a automechanic//
Cop blast....I Dashed an ran for Cover//
before I made it I got slammed by 2 Undercovers//
the same ones I pitched my work to//
I thought they was loyal ..the same ones wit tha pots of oil//
cooked up yam I saw em smokin dope wit blots of oil//
we had the blocks on boil..now I got set up//
Gettin knocked for blocks of foil concealin the raw..that was jus finna get wet up//
sizzled an baked//
chemistry style watch it fizzle when i shake..but its 2 late//
ive been locked upstate in a box//
gorillah style wit con's wit scrapes an a Ox...

-ColdSteeL"the BOSS" :shoot:

the next topic:"setting up a bank robbery" :banghead:

1st in our plan, purchase a all white van,
make sure no lights are on, turn off your cellular phone
if we get caught we're gone, sent to prisin alone
cuz we are all for one and all is gone if we are shown

stick to the showdows, creep and use stealth
no more frontin, if completed we can prove our wealth
the theats in effect, getin money from a bank
except this time, no worries of interest, we'll be ranked

no hesitation-whatever moves- its a target
shoot anything in motion-our hearts gotta stay at its hardest

sorry for no topic..

topic: thoughts after a fucking a girl wit AIDS :laugh:

Oh my god i just got the news,
i got aids no wonder my dick is broused,
i cant believe this dude,
i thought i was neva gonna get it,
no wonder her pussy was dented,
looked like the doctor had skinned it,
but i did it any way what the fuck was i thinkin,
her pussy was leakin in the back of the lincoln,
so thats why her pussy was stinkin,
and looked like her shit was blinkin,
it was broused all black and dark red,
why oh why didnt i just let her give me head.


Next Topic: shitting uncontrollibly (irratible boul syndrome)

^^LMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

iight ima try this even if its a fucked up topic :laugh:

seems now my mouth collects more spit-
constant swallowing
both of my feet went numb-once i lead with one foot-
can't tell if the other is following-
i seem heavier too- and then it hits me-
quick sheer of stomach pain-seems my food now is history
i jet to the bathroom- knocked my sister down-she cries
yells that i attacked her-but those were lies-
i quick breeze of relief-when i finally i meet the seat and rest
ahh....done- i was cool to i realized theres no toilet paper left

^^crit that

next topic: woke up in jail

i woke up confused, dress in orange, surrounded by bars/
seen a big baulky nigga face full of scars, callin da guards/
he was scaired of somtin so i walk over to make him calm/
then i get rushed knocked to da floor they took the shank from my palm/
i didnt know wut happened or wut to do or wut i did/
i pleeded i was inisint but in-a-since everyone is/
i get carried away wit a lump on my head and dont know where i goin/
so i panick and take a swing now punches bein thrown and/
kicks hittin my chin the gaurds knocked my lights out/
and carry me back to my cell im out for da count/
then i woke up confused, dressed in orange, surrounded by bars/

^^^crit please^^^

next topic: u at war

'Legalizing The Draft'again Just turned 18 year's old'
Praying to god it was a dream'But the best was yet-2-hold'
Bootcamp' Was alright' Till the real world, Was super-ceding'
Is this a video Game, Or did I just kill another human Being'


Critic that^

Topic: Lesbians, But in the end are transvestites....

^^^^Gotta love how it has that twist

i undersand that th topical cypher has been slept o cuz of the topic

so the topic is:

surrounded by Death

(everyone you know dies)

man wahts goin on is it somthing i did?
everyones been dyin since i was a kid
look at me age two, heart attack he collasped
right as i sat in his lap, and there goes my pap
look at me age seven, heat stroke in teh summer
lost my brother, next week blood clots there goes my mother
look at me age 12, this really is the one tahts sad
one day he was too mad, commit suicide there goes my dad

everywhere i look someone is dying
thats why everywhere there are people crying
white man goes through the wrong hood
doesnt know he could get shot wehn really he could
but hes tryin to impress his friends cuase hes real tough
till he gets shot up then theres more broken love
- you really cant stop all the murder -


next topic - waht violent raps do to kids at home

topic - what violent raps do to kids at home

heres a story of a girl named kelsie...
she spent all here money on the marshall matters LP
she loved eminem-he was her favorite rapper
she bought 8mile cuz she was loving him as a actor
she believe he can do no harm-he's her star
she was thrown off of what rappers persona's really are
she ran to her room ripped the plastic open
it said EXPLICIT CONTENT but she quickly ignored the notice
she believed she can handle it-out of 3 kids she was the oldest
she turn the lights of and just lossed herself in the cd
she thought emienem acted the way he did on MTV
she was wrong- on this one song-
he spoke of raping his mother-and having her hung
she ingored the heat only was listening to the beats
her subconcious mind heard the lyrics while she was asleep
3 in the mourning everyone was in bed-
she quietly open her parents door-tried not to trip over the peg
had a knife in the left and in the right hand with led
dad wasn't home- so the last words the girls said
i know what's on your mind ma so off with your head

(eminem says that on his song about his mom)

next topic: thoughts on your deathbed

i see the light is it time for that yet
hope im forgivin for all the times i blast tecks
hope i havent wasted the time now that im faced with demize
ive got no places to rise i pray that im placed in the sky
nurse pull the plug im literally dyin to meet the lord
and on my trip speak with hoards of people who had to meet the sword
momma dont cry im really livin better now
no bodys heart is cold no need for a sweater now
i feel no pain its all love no slugs
naturally high dont need no drugs
guess i was forgavin or god just forgot
about the deadly sins and how ive lusted a lot
as i rise i feel tension then a cord breaks and snaps
then i feel some arms come and graze my back
im thrown to the ground then through and down some more
am i goin to hell just cuz of adultry with one whore
this cant be happenin i must be dreamin
so i test it out, but i can hear my screamin
i hear a dark laugh and see a sinister grin
and remember that in all my quarrels i never let my minister win
all of the sudden its hot theres fire all around me
and every single person i see is mad the guys are all just grouchy
now i see that all my shortcomings and my fallings costly
i utter my last words....my god im sorry
just before i hit the floor i see a rush of light
here my father "thats just like my son to fight"
i hear the moniters beepin loudly
and see my whole family start to meet around me
minister in my ear "sinnin a lot will cost ya"
then the words of my mother.."god, we thought we lost ya"
now dedicated to go to church and participate in pleasent chants
no more concernin myself with peasent rants
thank the lord...hes just givin me a second chance


next topic..... your shootin up a school

my friend grabbed his piece and i grabbed mine..
we would forever be known as the next columbine
we came until school the metal detectors screeched
the teachers regretted all the lectures they teached
we ran thru the halls with our guns a blaze
this would be remebered for days and days
thats what happen when u shoot up ur school..
so remember that... GUNS ARE NOT COOL...

peein on an electrical fence

^not my best
but plz crit niggas dont listen
everytime i ask for crits i get no god damn crits

now plz crit :laugh:

anyway topic: uncontrolible aggresion

i lost my mind im here to attack the bums in-line
on-line i lews my touch so fine i break yah spines
my agression has built ill kill anytin in my path
ill have the last laugh when i break and cut yah calf
ill slit yah writs and hits yah bits with a chain saw
my minds gone less then a screw to lose i thro in in the floor
my control has turnt to the hulk i turn green and bust u mfker up
i lokk myself away and break yah pay if i creep to break yah lay

yo what-a-bout a topic?

i swear tey should jus make me mod lol

i be in here more then anybody
its cool tho


iight i'll change it since no-one is postin here

how about: Life Threatning choice


~1~luv

peace

uppin this shit

uppin what shit the unmagnifcent not rippes you conduct i make niggas tuck they dick in like they was bitchs so they dont get merked or for me to put them out like light switches

i hate to freepost in here, but what the hell is that guy doin^^??

mods should delete all the bullshit from here

AS if i aint gonna play this mUdafuckin game
make these playas kNow.. this IS my DOmain?!
anD aint Nobodi gonna lock ME down..
cause iM a born free solider
Just playin around..? haha ;)
and Ya'll may know abou how to rap and Ryhme
but i know the ways Of just that..Bump and grind!
although my voice be heard in a different way
makin all the gurls say
boi?..Was ur NamE.?
id be telling them
uhh.. damn id bE sOul>?
Would u Liek a autograph
OR coudl I be ur Boo ?
no matta wat
we know its tru..


sorri couldnt finish gf called
gtg
still earing to put my stuff togetha right if u get any sugestions give us a shout im always up to learn thanks latas..

lol i did liek a random subject cause ididnt knowwathte topic was in here..?
my bad.. sorri

its coo


the topic:Lost reason for living

mayn fuck this shit why do i even bother
get put down all the time, by my father
the guy i should depend on, are turnin to my enemy
my whole life is fallin arpart, cant you see?
to my father im always sassin back
so my face gets slapped
doesnt give a fuck, as he takes another whack
swings so hard, the cold airs got my lips chapped
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------
haterd and shit, is the only thing he is giving
now im stuck, with a lost reason for living

Topic?

next Topic:Last Verse b4 you retire

^^^sorry about that no topic

its coo mayn at least u keep active here

i been here for a while, no sure if its me
im famous on here, thats easy to see
ive even been compared to fuckin easy e
no one even battles anymore cause im straight G
im thinkin about leavin so im writin this verse
a guy as good as me leavin, now tahts a first
cause this whole site might shut down, dissappointment
or at least a gash thatll defiently need some ointment
i even made a thread aoubt leavin, htey called me a liar
but why else would i be makin this verse, that im gonna retire?

next topic, gettin caught up in drugs..........

crit please
 

what the topic yo???????????