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OneMeanSaltine 12-20-03 07:47 PM

Born addicted to dick thats why yer avatar resembles a penus,
Theres a lotta distance between+us, idiot, I'll let you remember the genius,
I spit heat whil you just swallow warmth,
get it staight like the swimmer headed down yer throat,
Out of 1 billion sperm you were the first there?
Bet Daddy wishes he kept you in his underwear,
Homosexuality and me is a falicy,
In actuality it's your reality,
Battle me? Lose to a new B? You see,
Your lines more played than re runs of I LOVE LUCY,
Shoot me? The way I'm slappin this bitch look like a domestic dispute G,
CALL THE POLICE PLEASE, dawg release me,
FGrom yer silly lines and hillbilly rhymes in this cypher division,
Kick yer dad in the jaw and give you a circumcission...

Peace

Harlem's Finest 12-20-03 08:08 PM

Doggydogs avy explains alot..........his lyrical talents conditional
'Cos basically since birth he's been frontin a dick thats artificial
Pussy....Over a thousand posts 'n one win?.....Thats plain wack
The reason you spit shit is simply 'cos you talk out ya ass crack
Ya sig personifies the type of lyrical skill ya tryna em-ulate
I dunno how you became a mod with such simple played punch traits
Straight up....I can tell from here you got no real-life personal protection
I mean this kid elevatin on the street....blah....its just an involuntary erection

CrackaBox187 12-20-03 11:57 PM

this is pathetic, what the fuck are yall talkin,
get up, turn around and get your ass to walkin,
im stalkin, cops outlinin your body with chalk in,
dumped in the alley, for months, your body rots,
lucky i didn't just tye you to cinder blocks,
grip the glock, poppin with no respect,
im cuttin everything but your throat n wrist,
toatin the set, scopein the set,
scope on ya neck, blowin the tech,
but this only text, bes show me respect,
cuz the next time we meet,
ain't gonna be just a rap

Kaz Killinger 12-21-03 05:08 AM

nigga i rip the freestyles... you?
well he could, well he should, well he would rap
drop the roof on the coupe still they say
where the hood, where the hood, where the hood at

know kaz pack revolvers, black... leave ya dome peice intact
wit clips that give 99 problems, fuck it, just fade to black
got me battlin kelly roland ass niggas.... just play the back
kings eat feast.... peasants just mingle wit scraps
plus i roll wit thugs, pop slugs and will jack a crackabox
cop his chick, then let her hold nuts like the cracker jacker box

Dev 12-21-03 05:29 AM

your shit's bout as hard hitting as the anorexic
are you dislexic, ya couldn't 'kill' a germ with antiseptic
ya vocabs pathetic, ima cut and discect it
im killin-jer like aids if ya was infected
so pack ya shit up ya jus started aint got nuthin to lose
leave rb, before ya really start getting .... abused!

|>SWIFTWAKYA<| 12-21-03 09:56 AM

lolz
feeble at least u can tell me y? i don think ma verse was that bad

debaser 12-21-03 05:11 PM

lettuce watch this turnip gettin' tossed like a salad bar
tupac lookin' sad becuz he trapped inside your avatar
ya limerics is lyricless and blank against my battle scars
ya queerest hits have made the merit list at all the faggot bars
so cherish this before i chench my fist and make you tattle on
this bovine murda i'ma fuck ya herd up with my cattle prod

aB-SaLute 12-21-03 05:18 PM

Only sac you been in, racin potatoe bags-
Couldnt ketchup to my speed pacin tomato smash-
Only time u bust a cap when shatter'd ya knee-
Ya girl preg w/ a girl, Dont mind if i splatter ya seed-
Kill ya two birds wit one stone, Watch you go nuts-
Above ya wifes corpse, Lookin just like a doughnut-

ThaYOcutee 12-21-03 05:44 PM

abSalute stop ur rhymin
im at tha top and still im climbin
ill spray ya ass out make ya light go down
they call me tha YO cutee but still i can clown
keep tryin ur style cuz rite now ya shit aint even mild
u down at tha bottom wit tha rest them hoes
rite now im jus givin u my low blows
im ova tha limit thas how i am
next person go head spit ya flame

Dev 12-21-03 05:46 PM

ab-salute wak.. ya got flow like an iced river
the way you deliver.. would make a good little filler
for some real talent n hard hittin punches
not the lame attempt you gave.. shit, thats for dunses!
i 'salute' nuthin.. ya cant even rhyme ya lines
more like a 'recipe' for a snack.. inbetween reading the worthy kinds!

this is for ab-salute

OneMeanSaltine 12-21-03 10:46 PM

I'm leave-a deva to decieive ya?
Naw I'm the truth retrieva,
Your verse was more wack than Nicoles parents wearin OJs Jersey
You act hard, but want beef? Naw yer like GO HEAD HURT ME,
You ain't worthy don't even try to serve me,
Bitch ya heard me, you can't hurt me,
Stay suckin dicks like slurpys, Pickin up herpys,
I knew ust from lookin at ya yer dirty.

Dev 12-22-03 05:00 AM

onemeansaltine, a seen ya done edited ya post
if i was you id get a new fucking ghost
at most ya verse is novice, even for a pre-school
its dEva not deeva, cant ya fucking read ya fool
with a battle record of 0-1 tha reppin ya hood well
bunch of dumb ass fags... couldnt drop hot from the gates fo hell!

Anonymous Mike 12-22-03 08:40 AM

I'm like sex wit no condom basically I’m Fuckin raw, no chance ya luck is lost,//
You talk, but how you gonna win when you ain’t got no flow like menopause, //
have ya mentals sauced when I strangle you wit dental floss, it's regretable, //
how a 1 man wreckin crew, gets the best of you'n chewz u like a vegetable,//
You're verbally crippled, while my style stands out like an excited bitch's nipples,//
The only time deva is considered 'tight' is when he bends over and spreads 'em,//
I'm too much for him to handle, shit, he couldn't beat me if I let him,//

Dev 12-22-03 10:09 AM

who's this jak off, coming in with stretched lines
didnt ya read my verse, im a 'man' you'll find
so fuck off with ya shit, with ya skills of the handicaped
ya couldnt rap fast if a gave you some prozac
so go home 'burt' i think ernies waiting
hes got some fury meat... ready for ya taking!
......fag!

COM 12-22-03 04:20 PM

What the fuck is this?....is that Deva tryna battle?
Gonna make you feel sore like you arrived via saddle
You get shown the red card... when your hard verses flop
You couldn't pull it out the bag... if you bought it at the shop!
So stop get on track... and prepare to be smothered
And I know for a fact... this guy lives with his mother!

Dev 12-22-03 04:46 PM

Wow! COM recently got a woman…now thinks he’s the big man
But for 4 years before it… he was beating with his hand!
In 1990 we went to camp… most had fun and went crazy
Guess who was homesick… phoned grandma crying like a baby!
COMedian a fitting name… for someone with your luck
Couldn’t judge the longhurst barrier... left us tripping,, laughing to fuck!

COM 12-22-03 05:06 PM

I'm at the end of my tether with Deva... I'll feel no guilt
How can you hold yourself together?.... You're only partially built!
You won't grow you'll just wilt... all your stories sport stilts
You had a few girls... but they all got rid of ya
At least one gave you sumthin... a dose of climidia!
When I spit at ya you freeze...Light is faster than sound
Thats why you seem bright... till you open your mouth!

Dev 12-22-03 05:09 PM

This guy saying I live with my mom…but he jus moved out
He’s so weak… he’s been threatened to get his windows put out
He cant handle life… his girl fights his fights
Seen more beef on a turkey… after Boxing Day’s night
Go home COM… don’t try to act hard
Remember I seen ya on a whitey… being burned like a retard!

Mr W.Rite 12-22-03 06:41 PM

Dont need publicity...then get out the public bitch...
Pain in the ass..nah...........he barely a fucking itch...
This guys a nusense......worse than nats and flies...
And fallin harder.......than when two shaqs collide...
Seen not one good verse from u...no one else has either....
Go join Aretha...Whitney...Pattie to be wit the other DEVA's...

GIVEN 12-22-03 11:49 PM

you think ur too cool
well you a damn fool
dog you supposed to diss em
not bitch up and kiss um
you rappin to him like u miss him
now bitch payattention and listen
there must be something ur missen
cause ya rhymes suck more than you do
what did ya parents do to you
damn fuu you dont have a damn clue
that you cant rap and thats true

Sergeant_Barwak 12-23-03 12:03 AM

so Mr Rite's a fool who should not be livin
but he a fucking genius compared to young Given
'Given', damn, whatchoo gotta give?
a 3" dick and a brain like a sieve
won't help you rap hot (not wit whatchoo got)
keep wankin off until ya die from cock-rot
and even then you won't stop
coz you da biggest wanker since the day yo Mom dropped
Stop

Ferris 12-23-03 12:19 AM

danger danger watch out for the sergeant /im ready to kill and hes my first target/barwak more like bullshit/ ive heard better rhymes from a chinese immigrant/im so quick to kill and im on this/ your vision is so blurry you should see and optomitrist/you battle yeah in your dreams/your ass couldnt find the means to pick coffe beans/ im spittin quick and thats that /well this kid is definatley whack and thats a fact

deser_eagle 12-23-03 08:05 PM

oh shit! faggot ferris is in da thread...
"will u ride my dick?" he said. FUCK NO!
my lines are "dizzyin" they'll keep
ya "head spinnin in circles" like
"ferris wheels"
he think he hard, but he's just a fuckin seal...

Straight Ace 12-23-03 08:22 PM

Rhyme is a concept often neglected..ah what the hell..
Six-six record may explain that after 3 rounds......
................he's always 'saved by the bell'
Only statin his wins in his sig, his losses wont quite fit..
On two pages, so they created the [move] tag for it..
Beggin' for ban, but u aint worth the effort..ur of no use..
This man faced the mirror and the loser called a truce..
Snap outta ecstasy ur bubble been burst..ur now clowned..
And u cant escape it,not even if u read it the other way 'round

IceMan187 12-23-03 09:05 PM

str8 ace
your a disgrace
youll catch slugs str8 to the face
get off this site your wastin web space
im first so you must be in last place
cus theres a million cats worse than me but can open ya face
you reppin the windy city
blow ya scalp back back so you can feel the breeze shit aint pretty
leave nothing on ya head but a patch of hair like diddy
you sicken me severely
you prolly wana call truce "Dear IceMan, Sincerely"
all of yall cats on this site should fear me
killin anyone hatin who even steps near me
so lets hope yall wanna bees understand clearly

Straight Ace 12-23-03 09:45 PM

Structure uneven played lines to many to quote..
Only +point of ur post is the one above u wrote..
I slap sense into u with words that have meanin'..
Your hard? ur screename reminds me of skeeing..
We fear bein infected with whatever did your brain..
Cause ur scripts more square then a tetris game..
Got urself impressed with big talk n a pac avy its n act..
kid thinks he's a negro..but everyone got a black ass crack..

IceMan187 12-23-03 10:06 PM

fuck a black ass crack youll get a black eye
str8 ace hit wit the pump paralyzed starin up at the sky
the only + point of this battle is me makin u choke
whats a lie
everything ace just spoke,
it must be rat poison cus weed dont fuck you up that much
fuckin wit me when u sweet like a vanilla dutch
you not scared yet cus the guns didnt touch
mac 10's m-4s and such
the red on your face is blood not your blush
and the blood aint myne its the result of a slug the size of a hockey puck
you sloppy fuck
only words of advice is mutherfucker duck
cus ill break you in 2 bits like graphics on atari
i aint hard not me sorry
cus i seen your whole fam on an african safari
full body armor your bullets wont even scar me
i think im a negro and you wack u think u sum rap super hero
wannabee robert de niro
runnin around your crib wearin sum underwear and a towel as a cape
face the facts dogg u fake
sayin u better than me dogg u wouldn't
wanna bee super man who looks like wonder woman

Straight Ace 12-23-03 10:19 PM

Did I, or did i not, pointed out your structure..lil kid'..
To be honest, i did not, n wud not..read what u spit..
I spit, blind..with 'black shades' so to me your equal..
Tho ur next drop is not appreciated like a 'MIB' sequal..
You need ur mouth attached to ur spine for 'back-up'..
Up your game all day n still be to 'short' to be on top..
Im like 'landmindz' u dont c me, but watch ur step..!!
Cause a 'mis-step' cud position ur neck in your crack..
Your shits stretched, doesnt contain punches..or rhyme
This is number 10, dont matter.. i had u done by ^nine..

Feeble Minded 12-23-03 10:57 PM

i'll crack ya neck, move back a step. .
and send you the fuck back after it. .
this bastard bit, cant fuck w/ feeble. .
cuz its obvious he's a fukin dweeble. .
i'll touch w/ needles, & poke ya vein. .
& funny no one ever spoke ya name. .
ya tokens vain. . & you're often shit. .
i'd say this is a cliff, but ud fall ofa it. .

Daz 12-23-03 11:59 PM

i stomp this hoe,strangle with thorns and break his nose/
chuz hellen keller got a better chance of seeing flows/
i always recognised this with text-ers/
when u wack u make up words like"dweeble"..get a webster/
feeble minded?of course its exactly what i see/
couldnt make up ur mind likes transvestites wanting to pee/

Kaz Killinger 12-24-03 12:48 AM

typin a diss is worthless when comin to trash like you
so to balance it out, imma diss feeble, straight ace and iceman too
leaking garbage from mouf, you been done since you spoke
fuck it, im rippin the whole thread, plus the next nigga that post
while you and broad makeout, im on the corner pullin stakeouts
your squad be on the streets claimin false beef like takeouts
im the rap rendition of the hades life.... uhm... you just lady like
i been pullin scapers on your type before you wuz rockin whitey tights.

Slim Thug 12-24-03 02:29 AM

Next up to bat is ya boy slim thugg
Tha kid above me give flat head jus like a pug
he starts to shrug when he sees tha topic
but oh well im killinger my flow u cant stop it
ya u cant stop it cuz u wont shutup
havent u realized 0-0 nobodys givin a fuck
about you, see you droppin "LIKE ITS HOT"
we put u on tha spot tested what u got and its not hott...

JCNY 12-24-03 02:38 AM

This is ridiculous, Kaz is sufferin from syphilis-
thats what you get for ridin dick of J kid, Fanam and Infamous-
little bitch, from now on dog dont let down your guard-
you like a Homo sexual havin sex with J-lo... YOU AINT HARD-
Cant you hear Kaz right now whining "But JC this is hard for us"-
I respond "just keep at it lil guy, someday you could be MARVOLOUS-

Tolerant Level 12-24-03 03:47 AM

JNCY u couldnt even ~Produce Punchlines~ that drop above made u ~Reduce to Flatines~ ur drop was weak ill ~Defuse ur Sublime~//
as i Currupt us sould and ~Drag ur skull~ u can fight bak cause u u like a ~fag in Dull~ and ill stomp ur face while ~smokin da Mull~//
even tho u try i ~Eliminate ur process~JNCY i walk up to u with spell that are bound so i ~Donate some curses~ if u wanna fight ill ~Bury u while u in Merges~//
i ~Detect Fear~ in ur eyes that wont ~Protect ur Peers~ but my cerbral assians ~Infected ur Careers~ //

Straight Ace 12-24-03 08:35 AM

Badspots, locate..n exterminate, ur the one in this aisle..
As for your 'style'...lets just say its been dead for a while..
Kaz, like acrobats, balancin on 'thin lines' ur skills fall of..
Cud be disectin' Cupid on valentines day n still dont find love..
U've been pullin 'blanks', hardly whitey's..let alone blacks..
Its a 'murder case' cuz this man is often found next to 'tracks'..
ya keyboard's disfigured..n ur 'spacebar' n 'enter' are switched..
Cause ill be honest, Level..
...Your~Scripts~Look~Like~The~Subtitles~From~Lilo & Stitch..

JCNY 12-24-03 03:16 PM

whats the name, straight ace ya say?-
so two pair, who cares not me, not today-
not to get off the topic but Tolerant Levels a parasite-
Eatin off of other emcees, Ands its J C N Y, so spell it right-
you people amuse me always playin ya selves-
Read that book that says WEBSTERS on your grandmothers shelf-
Than come back later and write whatever you want-
Its like i can see the humiliation in your eyes...but in your font.

IceMan187 12-24-03 03:23 PM

shit stare at my font and your pupils will get burned
shakin the alive and the dead ill make ya grandmother turn
i wish ya daddy could have choked back that sperm
and saved me a murder case and a life term
cus the j is for jester cus you are a joke
the c for wat you do fuckin wit me: choke
n describes the talent you have: none
and y is for why would you even test me son?

IceMan187 12-24-03 03:32 PM

as for kaz killinger
imma stay fillin ya
wit lead till ya dead
and all types of organisms start to grow in ya head
cut you so fast when you bled it wasnt red
too hot describes everything i said
cus your nursery school rhymes are being fed
to the rap prodigy
try so hard but u cant even follow me
let alone resemble
a cat taht in a flash will leave blood leakin out ya temple
this shit is simple
yall whiteheads r gonna get popped like a pimple
and on your forehead i'll leave 50 cents dimple!


what!?!

fuck kaz killinger

2 in a row mutherfucker

Daz 12-24-03 05:09 PM

this kid above me must be groping pipes/
he cyphers good but his battles look like open mics/
with woords and verbs i leave u with broken sight/
u a rapper?haha this kid gotta be joking right?/
destroy ur emotions and devour ur soul in flight/
and speak in mob terms chuz dis man gotta be iced/

IceMan187 12-24-03 05:22 PM

dazasta hatin on me when he got me in laughter
i think you want sumone below your skill level to go after
cus no matter how high you get youll always be below
the 13 year old from philly with murderous cypher flow
im like michael johnson and your a turtle your too slow
the iceman my heart is so cold i sneezed mutherfuckers thought it was snow
remove ya teeth and fingerprints the precinct dubs you "John Doe"
cus the only thing thats a dazasta is this mans flow


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