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text head?....hit me up............my overall web text is 23 and 2......1 was a dq and the other loss i just got merked so whats good?............
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legion check your pm.
others- roundtable is discussing your outcome. |
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Yes for him. Distilled, Ghost, and I should help each other get better. Then TC will rule graphics. :) |
yall know me vinci you were asking me to join before. so whats my chances now?
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?.............whats good with me gettin in?................ill battle any one to get in it dont matter and i dont mean in the crew i mean on the site
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Its funny parallels title says true loyalty, hes with a crew, and yet he wants to join TC. lmao.
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yea True Loyalty is a like chat crew, we aint gonna be battling. and Legendary status is cool but idk. nm then
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This was a topical I wrote for a battle I was supposed to have in V.E. on delicate decisions Pulling Tha Plug Drivin down I-75, grain grippin and lane switchin Next thing a nigga know…I’m on the ground twitchin Sirens blarin in my ear, shards of glass everywhere Lookin at tha paramedic wit a blank stare of despair Last thing I remember I was passin tha blunt to my mans Now as I lay motionless all a nigga thinkin is …“damn” I’m in tha back of tha truck…now they takin my vitals They on tha RV talking to medics waitin for our arrival I’m blackin in and out, can’t keep a grip on consciousness Everytime I wake up I’m thinkin “I must be blessed” I’m in the hospital now, can’t even remember tha ride I awoke and all my family was right by my side I prayed to tha lord…thanked him I was still alive Still had movement in my head but I couldn’t vocalize But that’s o.k. I’m livin and that’s all that mattered Until the doctor came in and my whole world jus shattered Told me I’d never walk again that I’d never talk again Only way I’d bring sin into this world is by thinkin it in “Do u understand what I’m saying…blink if you get the point” Tried to say yes….…but could only blink with disappoint Day one I cried for hours and I couldn’t wipe my tears Wondered what my life would be like in a couple of years Mom and dad came on day two, to soothe and console But nothing could soothe me…I had no body control Life as a vegetable…mom and dad carryin quite a load And I’m cryin everyday…I’m at the end of the road My parents loved me and they did this to show their love Not wantin me to suffer…told doc “PULL THA PLUG” |
hnic sorry no.
ghost...can you make a TC sig that I can show the rest of fam please. |
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haha check out the Mag im makin itz dope |
go drop some feed on tha mag....hahah i threw some of ya names in derre if u want i'll make dat crew sig later na mean not really in the mood lately 1
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can u link me to it? cause i have no clue what the mag is..
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yea fo sho heres the link http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=184445
holla at me fam 1 |
something he may-be re-gretin lookin at porn
cause thats all he be gettin talk about 24 seven, next time ill just decline this kid must be high while my quick fists fly he starts to cry untill his tears wilt and dry, i told you bitch this win is mine ill spit far less than he did if this was any easieri would have cheated this bitch is already defeated in the second bar let the results show, so in the future this kid will know dont chanlenge someone whose seven and 0, or youll lose by far/ its said you are what you eat and this mans speaking beef, let alone eating dick this bitch has his own male recipie/ told you not to mess wit me, or you end up dressin me cause real life relatin to polls cause youll always be less-than-me/ im getting bored of this, your gonna end up getting whored and dissed, lets put it simple i have have scored you missed/ so i sat down and waited, for this bitch who thought i was overrated if you elaborated people could see through the mist/ im just waisting lyrics, when you see a vet next time youll fear us and i hope you werent serious when you spit your verse/ this must have a curse, after this youll need a nurse, tell her your just got merked and give her a dollar from your purse/ i put some of the bars into this -------------- _--------------- ---------------- cuz people might think their stretched but their not you just have to read them aloud __________________________________________________ __________________________ i guess two hours wasnt enough half of your shit didnt rhyme/ now all i gotta say to you is better luck next time/ o yeah and about your crew i was one of the first selected/ i told them no so now your ass is the one feeling rejected/ read my verse slowly than write your self a little note/ cause first ima show you it them ima shove it down your throat/ your the kind of person i look at and you hear sighs/ i didnt back away take this money and get a doc to check your eyes/ another thing ill "throw back" is the mic to you so you can spit something intelegint/ your rhymes our wack and your structure needs to be more elegant/ the only shit that you will ever wreck is your own verse/ cause when spitacular spits it's a known curse.(people dont wanna hear it) ill give you some advise if your gonna continue rappin/ next time dont just sit there like how the fuck could this happen/ __________________________________________________ ______________________________ holla at me |
heck no ^^^^^^^
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yes................... |
yea..... no to majestic
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someone pm me the password.
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I'd like to tryout, hit up my link to my latest battle,
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willl have an answer soon^^
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your link doesnt work.....but i will review your posts n battles n tell ya wassup
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Murcinal can you please fix your link o we can check outyour skill.thanks.
aurora we will have an answer soon. |
MURC'S...I BROUGHT UP YA LAST battle, decent shit,ya closer won ya the battle...
. fi-del-heres the link....post ya opinion in the tc forum...... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=185218 |
Whud UP, Whud UP. new to TC and wanted to introduce MySelf. Daz invited me to this site and I am just tryin' to figure this out. :itching head:
Well, check ya'll out.. LATE Sweft |
lol,.man you are confuzed...lol....ill get at ya laters....
. murcinal your in...........pm me or fi-del...... |
ight yo i wanna tryout here. Da Vinci asked me so much before so heres some shit i tried i got bad imagery because of writing so much. i dont usually write so much but its for a tourney on rb so heres the verse
Running Water.. As the water runs smoothly I began to run Roughly It seems as if I’m being chased by everyone around Me All the pain just feels like god is bowling on my Soul Lots tell lies, its hard not knowing I cant achieve my Goal As I reminisce it seems like I aint moving Occupations Its hard to tell, surely its hard proving my Frustrations I held in the pain enough, its about time I shed a Tear Cant this misery just stop, at least loves ahead of my Fear Surely I will break and cry, even if there’s no Relation If I don’t watch myself, the bad will hit & show Frustration But no matter what the water never pushes me Harder I’ll be defending myself cause I got the key to my Armor All the lies can be lies, I’m still going to act Sarcastic It seems like a habit, I cant surpass it and react Erratic Hopefully I could get help with my troubles and Fears Surpass my peers, stuck in doubles without a Career Being 14 with parents that got Issues, dads on Welfare Now he’s saying he has to move back to Ontario is Unfair Moms trying to get money that he doesn’t even Got Going to court, I know dad will win but thats a Thought As the water runs down the stream I begin to Scream People say im a fiend, well I wanna win cause im Extreme Lots of lies but some truth but nothing is ever Relinquished When I think my thoughts vanish, I seem to never Finish No matter how hard I try my best to get good and Elevate Someone always says don’t bother, even if I could Relate No matter what I’ll never stop even if im covered in Hate I’m sick of the critical statements, were the hell is Fate! I tried to run, now I understand all this damn Confusion Well I came up to a conclusion, stay tall its an Illusion Theres no end to my life even when I die, I’ll be Resurrected But no matter what I need to be ready for Unexpected I’m gonna be around, even when the water ends it Peek People call me unique, only because I fight, I aint Weak All the lies are behind me so don’t bother it’ll never Work The past few years were alright, still I sever being a Jerk I preyed enough, why doesn’t God ever pay Attention I’ve had many infections, still I try to obey his Ascension The water line is soon to end, good-thing im Prepared I’ve asked for a little attention and everything is Declared |
couple questions
how long have you been writing? are you really 14? n how long ago did vinci ask ya to tryout? . the verse was aight, i was feeling a couple bars that seemed real personal n real to you(from a readers aspect)your direction was a bit cloudy but overall i think rb has a lil different writing style the rv.........ill mention this to him sit tight, should only take a day or so to get an answer on ya.. |
well i know you hate me Daz but im willing to drop the beef because its my fault we have beef. ive been writing topicals for 6 monthes. and i know this verse wasnt very great my imagery was on there cause i usually write a stroey out and then write my verse to each sentence i have on the story. it works better but in this case i had to write 40 lines and that would take to damn long and i have this shit for school today and shit. da vinci asked me 3 times he pmed me. does Parallel ring a bell;)
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:thumbup: well at least you were mature n honest enough to admit it was you.......vinci still aint been on today....but i would like you to write a 10 line verse on why you wanna be part of tc...i will forward it to vinci's desk n if i like it i will put in a good word for you n my vote from the roundtable... sound suffice...?...i just dont only wanna go on this piece alone get me?.........(also include why you were bannedin the pm) |
he was banned for cheating, and it's the second time it's happened to him...
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cant i explain tho?. i didnt cheat, i battled some guy with the same IP as me, its like how eternal ahs the same IP and he got banned to for somin possibly he never did too. i swear i never cheated. i aint lieing either. but if ya dont want me cuz of that then fine. ill spit them lines in a sec.
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Ayo...whadd up yall......Seein what i got to do to get in this crew...but yall know what iam capable of SO?................
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read my post not anyone elses.....i set out a task for you n if you wanna be considered for tc.complete the task...that is all i hold no grudges para.....stay focused on what ya want man... now pm me that 10 line verse or post it up here :thumbup: |
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hit up fi-del for an answer,..................... |
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i will when i have time i have school n shit, bunch of shit to do. ill get it to yall as soon as possible |
Yo Wicked !
thought you was down with L.S, Hommie.. |
parellel you gto banned for cheating didnt you...
roundtable will have to seriously discuss you!....still drop those lines daz asked for. wicked one....I say in.....check your pm. |
yo fi-del u replied to my free agent thread this is (judicial) by the way yeah..changed my name.....here is a link to my latest topical battle....
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...325#post2084325 i think its council worthy |
nelson^
I say yes...just waiting for roundtable to give me the word... will have an answer shortly. |
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