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Harley Quinn 01-27-05 12:20 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by New Era
thats a girl damn u tight juss dont rhyme three times like 3 lines rhyme than just change it it dont work it sound bad like

yeah im sickkkkk blah blah blah u can stop
blah blah blah blha blha the tightest fan hood hop
hadhaudhau hblah blah blah sicker than wood shop
and than fuck you im sick and you like me im like MONEY

right there u cant just change it it sound stupid just give advice.... H/B ... p.s H/b Holla back



Well, it does make sense when u rap fast like I do...but in text...yeah i see whatchu mean..

most of yall are iffy just like a composite sketch
im here to smash cats and some neurotic vets
but naw im no alias, my name aint jennifer Garner
yall kiddies done fell off, like wal mart carrying STARTER
harley will have you up the CREEK like ya name was Tyson Hicks
typical males battle me and half ya verse is about dykes n dick

~Luciano~ 01-27-05 03:08 AM

Im 2 good 4 a cypher
<<<<<<<Asshole.......*Nuff Said*

GSpoof 01-27-05 01:14 PM

NIGGA,Nigga,NIGGA,Nigga.
See how i pull this trigger?
You gon be the next nigga appointed to my trigger.

MetEoR-K 01-27-05 03:12 PM

I look through these forum all I see is wack cats
A buncha wanksta wannabe's who just can't rap
Whats that, 1:00 p m , time for your nap nap
So lyrical, i can hide your skills in a back pack
If a hot girl walks by, you think you can tap that?
Color doesn't matter, black, white, asian or half black
You dudes ain't a gangsta, what you gonna stab at?
I'll just use my mind against you to attack raps

villagepimp 01-27-05 03:42 PM

Man... it's villagepimp... he's back...
With a gat to kill all you kids who rap...
I smack girls across the face with the soul clap...
When I walk in... kids run 40's like they run track...
Run girls... like a mafizzlin' train on tracks...
Yes join my posse yeh we good in the sack...
VP puttin' the sizzlin' lawson hood on the map...
And get away cuz you won't like me when I snap...

this was wack... but oh well

Data 01-27-05 03:48 PM

Text? Huh, I dont understand what you mean?
Would you prefer your bananna float with chicken..or with cream?
Id take the chicken, but you know what? you aint me.
I used "?"'s alot in that rap, bitches on they hands slobbing my knee.
So i had to clean it, with bounty, because it was slimey when i touched it.
And while writing this I was in the process of cooking pancakes, and I burnt it.
Yeah, my raps are vicous, grab a tissue...repeat that again nigga!
Quote:
Originally Posted by Data
raps are vicous

And the track keeps drawling, call me a "black cat", but know what? I aint superstitous.

That was like putting lighters to rulers - Straight fire! And yous know it.

Ysdat 01-27-05 03:49 PM

controling thoughts drunk guys be holding ports
taking a swim in stolen shorts,menolins courts
wak mulits atract faulti's,back i still set back adultry.
my chips are salty,like the pacific ocean
I never claim to be the best,so Im never specific boasting.

wak..blah.

Data 01-27-05 03:51 PM

Everyone, gaze at my rap.

Ysdat 01-30-05 01:44 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Data
Everyone, gaze at my rap.

please dont freepost

a bitch switch,with lipstick,this chicks thick
my kicks fit,i spit wit,so get wid it
stupid chrome pipes like blown lights
i own rights to clone fights

blah

DQ 01-30-05 06:02 AM

This fatal night proves that drinking and driving don't match
Innocent child left to patch but to you,it doesn't mean scratch
Cause your head is still up in space because of all that weed
And the alcohol growing like an evil seed,forcing you to speed
Black and cold heart,so coarse,in your eyes no sign of remorse
You don't belong here,got created out of an evil unknown source

DQ

Ysdat 01-30-05 07:26 PM

I will never die
every evidential breath test ive past
guys say i should of had a sentimental death yet last....
year i passed fear without a blink of an eye
i wann help rv, what you think i dont try?
why would you ever claim to own some one
im a prince,to me my ma's a queen on a throne
you dumb enoughto sit ay home alone acting like a net thug,
yet hug
onto a dream of being sucessfull
i live life never settle for less yo
one thing i gotta confees though
i love the real but dislike the rest
if that discrimination then call me racial prejidist
please talk shit about me cause i never let a diss
go without an answer
my lyric's will hit you so hard,youll end up being a back up dancer.
or bed dridden with a breth of cancer

verbal illness 01-30-05 09:04 PM

fuck every last one of you who cant be real......
fucking wit verbal illness ah get ya self killed.... i aint a mean guy i just fuck wit the weak..
like to blast on them niggas who afraid to speak...

Ysdat 01-30-05 09:47 PM

Its a 6 line minimum^

possesing a lesson in discresion to get a confession..
facts lact they back track the crack sack
im searching an lurching to make or break
mc's relized battling me is a mistake
this aint a movie..you fukt up.. no second take
you must be made a silicone..because your that fake
your rhymes are disleksic and handicapped
like his clothes..rhymes are all hand me back
you relise now instead a battling me you .shoulda just left ha?
this bitch couldnt pimp a hoe ..if his name was hue hefna
you being creative
is as likley as a bush being an african native

blah......

DQ 01-31-05 02:06 PM

Why do we continue to play this foolish game of hide and seek?
Don't wanna wait another week so get ya ass over here and speak
Going back and forth,who am I to you?Ya actions make me derange
Be a man for a change n don't tell me I'm the one actin strange
I'm not the one that's flipping sides every single day n night
Don't worry though,I'll be all right but you need to act right
Do you want me in your life forever or just to bump and grind?
Make up your own mind,ya homies aren't enough to hide behind

DQ

Ysdat 01-31-05 06:47 PM

how many times can you swim up the wrong creek
many men make the wrong desicion even as i speak
i feel weak yet strong,is the weekend gone?
I want to go home,but there's more trouble there
How come i get home,and i feel more fear??
fuck it,death to hip hop.death to rap..i no longer care.

blah..bunch a b/s


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