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Ragnarok 10-11-04 09:37 PM

u r a not a verb u's a herb dat lives in da suburbs//
so stop rapping herb//
i will cut u up into onions and make u cri, u fagoot ass crakhead guy//
u r not sly, u r not fly//
dunt suck my dik you prick//
you wack off a stick, i'll hit you hard with a brick//
i'm the best emcee//
your nowhere near me// im invincible
i'll send you to the principal//

WACKNESS DISS...
Person below ME shud post a wack verse too...

eph 10-11-04 09:44 PM

your not worth my time.
get out of here, you cant rhyme.
your dealing crack, while im hittin hoes.
your worse doped than i retard with pigeon toes.
your like a black sopt on a striped tail.
if your so smart, than go to yale.
i hate dealing with these cowards.
you cant match up to me, im a tree and your a flower.

wack diss to Falukun

Ragnarok 10-11-04 09:51 PM

hitting hoes, i though you wasa woman///
but i'll crack you so hard, ya voice willl sound like a man///
you need to get a tan, you pale as fuck//
i'ma do the birdcall in bitchslapped and watch you duck//
i'm better, you are a homeless girl that need money//
but you cant be sweet if you were covered in honey//

wack

eph 10-11-04 10:26 PM


im done playing with temperate spits, ya couldnt lip a kiss.
cause with the opposite sex ya gentle, like the rules ya wouldnt hit a chick.
thats why ya spits get ripped. your an easy KO, a left hander.
ya punches hit nothing real, if ya aimed at nipples ya couldnt give breast cancer.
theres purpose for ya absence, ya a marksmen without a target.
murder on these purple boards. im mrs. plum, ya scarlet.
ya destined to choke dopely. wackness, either ya gift or ya talented virtue.
like ya said yaself, wack. it ends here at Falukun Merk II.

Ill-Grammatix 10-11-04 11:35 PM

YO Verbal!!!
 
Quote:
Originally Posted by Verbal Abuse
Ill-Gramatix:

what dont ya marquees understand? ya suppose to diss the folk.
but instead ya drop some feedback, n came home with a fisted throat.
sayin ya flow needs a vaccine, so ya got a urine problem?
no one responds ya open mics, though it best to keep this herb a solumn.
ya act like denis rodman. ya masculine but ya have bisexual moments.
ya use battles as a chat arena. its why ya text opponents.
yet still the baddest, with a knife and scisorrs ya couldnt kill a matress.
bet ya feel dramatic, cause the only emcee youve beat is ill-grammatix.


LMAO... come see me in bitchslapped or elevated bitchslapped!

The forum is "Diss the person above you". Did I strike a nerve or sum'n? lol... Y'all take shyt too seriously around here... all ya did was boost my ego by responding so late...lmao again... when ya ready to holla at me just say the word... shyt'll be up in bitchslapped .... either accept the battle or go about ya business....and stop being so bitter....ctfu

*KiRô-æ-PhY§iX* 10-12-04 12:11 AM

aight seriously....
ill couldnt spit sick if ya had aids and i ''cut-ya-tounge''
bitch is so stupid he dont even kno where the ''fuck-his-from'' [check b/lo av]
if ya sneeze on crack thats the only way ya ''grams-ill''
hes book of rhymes is labeled dump b/c its full of trash like ''land-fills''
after this quik diss this ''herb-will-be-confused''
b/c now he knows he doesnt have to pick on chicks to get ''verbally-abused''

comeback no beef

Ill-Grammatix 10-12-04 12:30 AM

didn't mean to mess shyt up for you but I've become the latest victim of hate for some reason... and uhh... since ya name happens to be above me...lol..


talkin bout i couldn't spit?... but you ain't spittin' nothing either
you "weaker" than "7 days" ... no effort used for me to beat ya
i'll eat ya in text, beat ya to death, creep where ya rep
keep you in check ... y'all kill me with ya'll beef on the net
this just a quic-"key" to show you that niggaz ain't gettin with me
if ya wrote ya reply on paper with my name ya couldn't rip me

Trentorican 10-12-04 10:43 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by streetryda
tentorican

fucking newbs always act like the strap on heat
the only thing you click is the straps on slip on meat*
tuck your dick between you legs acting all feminine
your fav game is fender bendin cuz you love all rear endin**
these knucles will come to you faster than sonic***
leave you comostosed and then needing hooked~on~phonics


i'm a veteran rapper, apocolypse novelist and a deep writer
i dont act i'm severin' actors....you dont ride da streets you a meat ryda
so take those coks out ya ass i only pull the glock out to blast
bettin' against me......will have you diggin' ya pockets out for cash
i dont play no games my flow flames your a no-name
your so lame go train battlin you is no gain like handicap and ya retarded wit a slow brain

Trentorican 10-12-04 02:23 PM

ill grammatix:

wack niggas get wet from what da hammer spill
u call ya self ill grammatix when MY grammar ill
son ya not sick you just a crackfiend
cus u be stickin' needles up da ass and it aint vaccine

Ill-Grammatix 10-12-04 05:37 PM

how da fuck you wanna diss? what da hell is a trentorican?
stay in ya place and shut ya face when older men are speaking
you running off at the mouth? that's how ya get ya body leaking
defeating me ain't an option...dick's the only thing you beatin!

riddlemethat 10-13-04 02:00 AM

Hey man, I can say "Trash" cos thats what you are//
Vaccines are pointless for you, needless to say you won't go far//
We need the vaccines to block your poor rhymes out our minds//
You irritatin as nappy rash, you give asprin a headache an thats jus bein kind//
I think you'll find, if words you try to rhyme, are made up they'll be out of time//
Trentorican ain't a word it's a name, that put you to shame cos you jus mime//
Immitate madonna cos ya wanna be her lover, white chicks don't bite//
But you be suckin dicks an givin licks to pricks, so don't even try to fight//

archieDX 10-13-04 06:50 AM

illmatic, never that
when arch brings the static, gat
set scences tragic, that
have you vanish like magic,
ive had it,
you had your 2 cents that was the bad bit
but bitch bustin's like cussin
im tryna kick the habbit
a hazy baby?
white rabbit raps got you goin crazy
your flow fails to amaze me
its like your writing in a daze G
cos YOUR flows tooo :nono: crazy

Trentorican 10-13-04 12:18 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Ill-Grammatix
how da fuck you wanna diss? what da hell is a trentorican?
stay in ya place and shut ya face when older men are speaking
you running off at the mouth? that's how ya get ya body leaking
defeating me ain't an option...dick's the only thing you beatin!


i heat you up fucka keep ya cool
"diss da person above"....read da rules
who am i? da puerto rican from trenton
steppin' to me will have you leakin from weapons
sleepin' from wessons...get left jointless
ya bullshit is dull bitch to pull a full clip is pointless

ill bing aka U.G 10-13-04 08:54 PM

look all destroy any toppice place in front of my iris's//
detoxify it like a copp bustin tweek viris's//
i leek sick flows //
got more ecmees thinking about it mor then a fat boy thinkin about his bakery rolls//

World War 10-13-04 11:42 PM

I see ill bling aka UG, ignorant arrogant lightweight MC, steppin' to peeps that I can not believe...
Now Jesus, be gone your wack lyrics are takin' too much room in this cypher thread
Leave typin' to real textee beasts before we leave key prints on your head
I see that you 'leek' sick flows
Better get your sinuses checked homes, or blow your nose
I'll be the baker, and you can be my dough
Get heated by these lyrics and rise in my stove

riddlemethat 10-14-04 02:34 AM

World War? is that one or the repeat//
Makes no difference, you still easy to defeat//
Cypher beats that heat the greetin, adversary to foe//
From fourty fives to meat cleavers, we'll see to it you don't grow//
I rise above, I know cos I see you below, like the love of André//
Keep ya whack rap to yaself, 15 posts in 8 months, you nothin compadré//

Dirty Nigga 10-14-04 08:30 AM

i got a riddle, what cant diss an would pop a gun to only miss?
what type of mc would wear there moms panties an pretend to be female..?
this is a rap attack on full scale..
all hail, the lord of the ring....
i aint talkin bout the movie i mean riddle whips out his dick n does his thing..
with the opposite sex..........
this just text, an ya still closin ya eyes......
i aint even hit the caps lock yet an ya still prayin to the skies....
''lord help me, dope is gonna commit a sin''..
but 'merkin' aint in the 10 commandments so once again i win!

Trentorican 10-14-04 01:52 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by ill bing aka U.G
look all destroy any toppice place in front of my iris's//
detoxify it like a copp bustin tweek viris's//
i leek sick flows //
got more ecmees thinking about it mor then a fat boy thinkin about his bakery rolls//


u gon' leek loads of blood
i'm top notch so see like you know whats up
get dropped 4/5th clip pop till u flow a flood
blizzard hearted vains cold as fuk u cant cope wit da rough
become da bottom of a joke aim tough wit da scope to hope is not enough

Tha Unknown (Uk) 10-15-04 12:45 AM

u get treated like a dog in da worst way
ill feed u a doggy treat da day of ya birthday
bitch den blow out all of yo candles
u put mo beef on yo plate dan u can handle
hit chu n da gut wit dis sawed off handle
have ya tastin dese hollw tips
swallow it and watch ya choke on ya ribs
trent u get treated like a family at a bbq i got 1st
dibs............By Lady T

shake-spear 10-15-04 01:52 AM

this dude is trash y spit no ones gon read it/
i could merk him wit ease but he like please keep it a secret/

riddlemethat 10-15-04 12:57 PM

Shake spear quivvers in his lil "puss in boots" 'afore I shoot//
Got no loot so left in puddles of blood, laugh then I skoot//
Why fear shakespear he done told you a love story//
Nigga's so childish i'm surprised he ain't lead presenter on ballamory//
I'm bout to make this shit get gory an shoot ya down in a blaze of glory//
Live in public housing right next to mister singh he's so annoying//
Welcome to the layer cake son, an you done started at the bottom//
But you ain't ascending cos you ain't a legend, you forgotten//

eph 10-15-04 08:32 PM

punchline diss to riddlemethat:

my hearts with the lord and mind in the books, the rest of me's poudin the keys.
make you a pound of debris, im no virgin... 1 on 1 with me and youll textually transmit disease.

LOL. spit back.

streetryda 10-15-04 11:40 PM

bells ringing everyone look at the hunchback
in the corner getting laughed at, wearing that dunce hat

Tha Unknown (Uk) 10-16-04 03:58 AM

streetryda state tha truth
u ain't know ryda in tha streets
I heard you's a dickryda
in between tha sheets

Colobus 10-16-04 05:14 AM

Yo Unknown, I'll get your face blown, while u packin a cone, when I see you I lock n load.
Your hidin becos your a wife abuser, matter fact Double L stands for Lucked-Out Loser.
Your words are flat and unoriginal, I always get reminded when Im eating a Pringle.

Tha Unknown (Uk) 10-16-04 07:26 AM

Yo Colobus, U not ready fo a king
I went soft on dickryda
But I'm a scope u wit tha beam
Then tag u up wit these bullets
on a bulletin board
U don't wanna fuk wit tha L nicca
we Lock-N-Load it an ready fa more...............

Colobus 10-16-04 07:54 AM

Man that diss was mildy entertaining, I know when u type u were really straining, u got parkinson so I know u were really shaking.
Tryin act mysterious but ur an average chump, bet u got worse lookin hair than Donald Trump.
Don't mess with me, I can be decievin, my raps belong in the Bible, it's somethin everyone will be believin.

eXpLiCiT CoNtEnT 10-16-04 11:02 AM

101 pages gone, eXpLiCiT cOnTeNt one colobus... none,
your hypes gone, your nothing but a sizzled out bomb,
i use multie confectional punchlines, leave you dead in the dirt,
make you dress in a skirt, syllables leaving you nothin but hurt.

streetryda 10-16-04 12:33 PM

your unkown cuzm your rhymes as extremely weak
take that dick out of your mouth, then try to speak
just being discrete to excrete the shit of of this ass
shattered your dreams cuz this nightmare shatters glass
askin people to start passin a lil more dick your way
virgin emergin from the uk strivin to find some male forplay
i could shit on you all day wait till you spit somethin more gay
i aint got the time to waste on this fag, so ill smoke you quick*
lickin some dick like all those male on male prono flicks
shit thats gona be the only way you spit something slick

*in the UK a cigarette is called a fag

Pro. 10-16-04 06:30 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Paramik
FUCK you your soft... you got no punches in ya verse.......




^^^look at this shit here....2 critics that happen ta rap^^

battle me then...thats where shit gets real untill then shut tha fuck up...an put sumthan down.

an this aint punch line cypher..yall niggaz must really like tha taste of dick.HATIN ON A CYPHER..this aint a real battle nigga..LIKE I REPLIED*BATTLE ME!!!THEN TALK SHIT LATER!

Tha Unknown (Uk) 10-16-04 08:18 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Colobus
Man that diss was mildy entertaining, I know when u type u were really straining, u got parkinson so I know u were really shaking.
Tryin act mysterious but ur an average chump, bet u got worse lookin hair than Donald Trump.
Don't mess with me, I can be decievin, my raps belong in the Bible, it's somethin everyone will be believin.



So Trump is yo Idol
bitch nicca u my rival
I'll scope yo ass down
wit tha oke 6 on a rifle
C u a lightweight
but I'm a grand champ
I'll shoot u in yo leg
an make yo dick stay limp
Uhh Ohh
I'm spreadin roomas
I got a headache
an it's not a tuma
Colobus u don't stand a chance
cuz yo wife told me
late nite was yo last dance

Tha Unknown (Uk) 10-16-04 08:31 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by streetryda
your unkown cuzm your rhymes as extremely weak
take that dick out of your mouth, then try to speak
just being discrete to excrete the shit of of this ass
shattered your dreams cuz this nightmare shatters glass
askin people to start passin a lil more dick your way
virgin emergin from the uk strivin to find some male forplay
i could shit on you all day wait till you spit somethin more gay
i aint got the time to waste on this fag, so ill smoke you quick*
lickin some dick like all those male on male prono flicks
shit thats gona be the only way you spit something slick

*in the UK a cigarette is called a fag


Dickryda, in tha U.S. a fag is something
dat got past down from ya dad
an I'm from Tennessee nicca
so u know dat I'm serious
Cashville's on tha map 4 rap
so I know dat chu feelin dis
hot breaf ass nicca
yo gal won't let u eat tha twat
conseder jackin off
wit them pron flicks yo ass watch.

Scareface 10-16-04 09:50 PM

Let Me Jus Say Damn Homey You Couldnt Spit If yA Mouth Was Full of Slob
U Got Them FAgs eatin Ya Dick Like Corn On A Cob
U Say U Unknown Wit Lines Like That I Understand
how Im really The champ And u Wanna B A Man
im The Realist So u feel dis ....u Wanna take A stand
like kerry Did bush im gettin Jokez outa This Debate
Frie You up N Serve You On A Pussy Smellin Fish Plate
Dont Hate

Tha Unknown (Uk) 10-17-04 12:58 AM

U Claim u a King
when u really ain't shit
Cripset murfukka
u can't make a man outta a bitch
Hold up wah I'm doin
wastin fukin tyme, u a
Funky
Ignorent
Show
Hoe
dat took a bite outta crime
yeah nicca dis yo murfukkin feedbac
don't eva challenge a champ
when yo ass is a rap reject

SUPERVILLAIN 10-17-04 09:29 AM

nothing personal...but your name says it all...

eee-gads!!!...with talent like that you'll remain "the unknown artist"
no flows is a no go, no petrol...ya roll slow, get out the vehic and park it!
see the behemoth and start shit...then you'll get eaten like sharks bit...
r u even this retarded??? regardless, i decease fools, n ur leavin' departed
pleez believe n ur thots bitch, conscience and inner demons, dont start shit
i make more then scars kid, u'll be hard hit like targets when im armed wit...
arms that rip off ur armpits, alarms hit...and im still dumpin' 'till disarmed clips
gosh darnit!! i'll keep it simple imbecile, not invisible like hidden compartments
...plain and simple, ur pitiful...dont procreate, if u do, jus' keep 'em from r kids
i'd hate to have to harm them for your tacky, whack and pathetic garbage

.....'nuff said.
nah, im just playin' with ya homie. keep on keeping on. one.

super...of crhyme sindicate

illmatico 10-17-04 06:52 PM

Batman! Robin! Someone hit the bat-light!
this cats gone need professional help if he put up a fight
This mans supposed to be big ballin but he just fat bummin
if he had to be his favorite villain- he'd prolly pick catwoman
"stop" "pumpin" "ya" "lines" "with" "quotes"... you need a steriod lesson
Talkin bout "EEEGADDS?" its the hip hop ELROY JETSON
you was made for cartoons so bitch stay in ya place
cuz you just a punk clown tryin to rap- i can tell by your face

i know yall caught that "the joker" punch

Pro. 10-17-04 07:15 PM

illmatico like nas...but you rap like pras from the fugees//
some suckah from a movie..you ill you couldve fooled me//
trully...I know its already been told...//
im sick like cancer patients facin death... you just ah common cold//
this situation is lovelly...cuz im replacin the odd//
this cypher is diss the person above me!...I couldnt cuz then Ill be facin GOD!!//
with ur fertalizer lines Ill turn ur rhymes into sod..//
this niggas bitin..hes the rappin body snatcher his ass should be placed in a pod!!

archieDX 10-18-04 09:06 AM

Quote:
illmatico like nas...but you rap like pras from the fugees//
some suckah from a movie..you ill you couldve fooled me//
trully...I know its already been told...//
im sick like cancer patients facin death... you just ah common cold//
this situation is lovelly...cuz im replacin the odd//
this cypher is diss the person above me!...I couldnt cuz then Ill be facin GOD!!//
with ur fertalizer lines Ill turn ur rhymes into sod..//
this niggas bitin..hes the rappin body snatcher his ass should be placed in a pod!!


I aint a killa, but don't push me,
trust me, tin man muchin pussy
up in his grill, the girls gush thrush, see
my games unloaded,
my steels far from cold it
took the holes in you flow
and unloaded
now hold it!
ya need to bow down,
a clown,
-your flow needs christening...
praise the lord,
for forgiveness
-and hope that he's still listening...
you rhyme on rations
let reality crash in
cold steel's jammin
lights, camera, Action
now front
or face my faction
cos shit CAN happen!

-arch out

Terse. 10-18-04 11:02 AM

Quick dawg, ya spit needs a fix, ya structure's a mess
u lethargic about rappin....what, is u fuckin depressed?
i'ma leave ya heart wit no beat--dead n stuck in ya chest
serious--u oughta be slain fo bein so wack, it's nothin ta' jest
i think it's funny the way u spit.....as if u claim the best
well u dead wrong bitch, keep elevatin cuz i aint impressed

riddlemethat 10-18-04 11:18 AM

You just a pussy, so I'll push ya. I'm tellin him//
Bitch bitin lines from hip hop master Eminem//
Whack ass wannabe style, what you writin with?//
Dyslexia or paranoia? Either way ya style's just a myth//
Incomplete sentences that run together, are you an amateur?//
I hammer ya, with constant confrontation that hails for elevation//
But you jus masturbatin, to that 8mile tape you tapin//
This fight I'm instigatin's gon deal with your frustration//
Cos in the end you nothin an this game I'm the king in//

This was for "archieDX"


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