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D523 05-14-05 06:07 PM

This bitch is so stupid, cant even remember his own age
shit sucks so bad, they had to put you on another page


* in his pro it says Age: ??? *

^--- i edited because i had to add that in

Pro. 05-14-05 06:41 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by D523
This bitch is so stupid, cant even remember his own age
shit sucks so bad, they had to put you on another page


* in his pro it says Age: ??? *

^--- i edited because i had to add that in


6 lines minimum,So damn you cant read that!
Is that ah personal,FAg! lookin in my Cp just tah give me feed back
Well I got Feed back For sum1 as slow as you
You dont spit you known ta chew,Then swallow so it goes threw you!
you know its true,look at ur record ur like 0~n~2
who's Ownin you,prolly Stanza thats tha nigga that K.o'd this dude!
Bitch..you need ta get out that sprung phaze
He's been FALSE yall!!,ever since he lost tah youg blaze!

^^Now thats personal!!..Next!?!^^

Chris Stylez 05-14-05 06:56 PM

Coldsteel ripped em and apreciate the vote man keep doing ya thing

riddlemethat 05-15-05 01:28 PM

Straight outa GangstAtlanta with a wannnabe Pac Image...
Not even a verse left, seems all ya styles bin diminished...
Freeposting on diss the person above is bad for ya health...
Cos the people up in here shoot in broad daylight without stealth...
Wanna get back at a person in on the site ya send him a personal message...
YoungDollar left without a penny stripped bare and then left in the garbage...

Pro. 05-15-05 03:05 PM

your lines are crossed,they need ta be fixed
You already loss,Your bars are candy they should come wit ah Twix
You aim but missed,Get ur scope right before shootin
Cuz you pollutin this thread,Cuz what you said was stupid
It didnt even rhyme,Plus ur bars are stretched
Theres so many holes in ur lines,I swear it was meshed!
Whats ur next step,goin for ah low blow?
Then set up a battle,"Wit his Rec!", you'll know he'll be a No-Show!

Cannibal Sativa 05-15-05 07:23 PM

haha this kid is soft like fresh baked donuts
his flows so so and he blows but fuck it, so what?
i go nuts and blow up the whole spot, ya so shocked!
ya girls a hunchback who needs the camel toe popped
the toast pops and heat speaks, this creep bleeds
for three weeks cuz he leaks speech to precints
pigs is only swine disguised and this bitch is just as bad
so fucka cop just one shot would probly bust his ass

Pro. 05-15-05 08:31 PM

really?....Calm down kid before you get merked
Topical for a diss?,Shit!An you say thats ur best work
dudes phony,(pause)only pretendin ta hold gats
Your wack,yes ur whole act,In fact Im only trytah hold back
from sayin that you just a lil frail kid
Talkin bout empty'n clips,Yeah?,in the ashtray after he gets his nails did!
Fag you better off gettin attention.... at another site!
I know Im not a good father,and "YES!" your mothers right!

I apologize 4 not payin child support...Hah!

J.R.Killa 05-15-05 08:54 PM

this is a fukin depression another rip session on who?...cold steel//
wut a name dude u must think u hot when u r more like a cold meal//
this dude says he didnt pay child support and he banged a mans mom//
i kno already wut this guy story is hes a very sad story gets it from watchin sitcom//
ok so im a nice guy a lil word of advice never suck dick twice//
oh i forgot yall dont kno cold steel did this already once in his life//

Pro. 05-15-05 09:24 PM

With those lines,I hope you arent tryin ta get paid
I had rhymes just like that!,Yeah!,Back in tha 5th Grade
That shits played,(pause)U throwin bad rice
Talkin bout suckin dick,(pause)but he say's its advice
So I guess if you give it,Then you must've did it
So just admit it!,You like sauage in ur mouth an mustard wit it

Advice comes from experience,Dont it!

stop wit tha gay punchlines...that shit is played out. :thumbup:

Ecko-D 05-16-05 03:42 AM

Whats with all ur fuckin "Pauses", Why-Trench?
Ur only gunna need 1 moment of Silence
Ur prolly still a Virgin, u've Lost-it-Dude
Ur only chance of havin sex before u die is a Prostitute
So go to ur Piggybank and get ur last £10 Note
And find a Shemale Man to Rock ur Boat

riddlemethat 05-16-05 01:40 PM

Whats with all the usless little lines you sat down to write?..
You've shortened the words in ya verse so much it sounds white...
That guy's gona need a lot of shit the way you make him out to sound...
Take heed to my shit cos I ain't clownin around, I set out to astound...
That means to leave you in a haze all dazed and confused with the way I spit...
I could proof read ya shit 5 times and all i'd still see infront of me is a pile of grit...
Or should I say shit, as produced throught the fingertips of the clown Ecko-D...
With the help of his mind and his mouth layed to the mat for the 1-2-3...

SleepedOn2 05-16-05 04:23 PM

he asks who you know fresher than hov
nigga wut up wit you how fresh r u concerning yo flow
from wut i just seen it was average n i gave you that
so how come u clame to be so hot wit the grit line riddle yourself that
that last punch was weak ass hell can u even count to 3
well maybe u can but then why cudnt u make it out past 1st grade easily

youngin-Fresh3 05-16-05 05:00 PM

First post ,Okay...Imma give you your First-Beating
Can you please make a verse that is Worth-Reading
Im not tryna delcare Beef-On-you
Why you dissing riddlemethat? It's Obvious you get "SleepedOn2"//
I hit with the MOst-Presizion, my rhymes are unfake
unlike MOst-ur-Writtens!!

Abnormalâ„¢ 05-16-05 05:02 PM



u ain raisin da tephlon... i see da reason y u get slept on/
niggas take SHOTS AT YA SCREEN... to leave ya HEAD-GONE/
u weak its true... u comin at me jerk? i'll leave ya balls blue/
no homo, this faggets life is rusty... kinda like old farm tools/

chill... u not worth 6

Ecko-D 05-16-05 07:23 PM

U suck so hard u tell-us u'll make his balls blue?
I bet even Girls are Jealous of You
U should Make like ur Video of MTV Jams
And walk away before I turn Abnormal and get Bloody-Hands
Dont bother postin again id rather hear Less-of-it
and 1 word of advice, Never underestimate


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