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thanks for the feedback man...
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damm shitz tight blood nice flow an shit you doin this to audio if not you should nice vocab an shit good read
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thanks man...
Remember people, the Awardz always need votes each month, and every vote counts. |
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no problem.....
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I was likin it. big time. you stretched the lines a bit, but it worked, really well.
Good imagination, real good vocab. I was feeling the emotion. This is real heavy. Im gonna steal it and tell all my mates i wrote it...lol |
this was hot, yo.....good use of multis and vocab...this really caught my attention from tha jump...and thats rare, cuz most people dont warm up until a few barz in...so mad props on that....keep droppin tha fiyah mayne....
return tha favor, please.....'one wish'.... |
lol... thanks man...
uppin'... |
ok good ass flow and vocab first verse was the best one but whole thing was real good your best no but good here all the same nice visuale i see your still mad about that damn suspension :nono: good drop a 8/10
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thanks for the feedback Empire... just read your poetry battles... damn you still got it dawg... welcome back.
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Painful Times at Lawson High...
^^^nice chorus...but i got an ear for rhyme...so, i would have worded it "awful times" and "lawson high"...get it? ne way...i feel like shit...so imma make this quick see...rhyming is in my genes damn...there's another one ne way... some of the rhyming seemed forced...including your diction...it's as if you were using words just to rhyme...try rhyming like that in complete sentences... otherwise...this was creative...I like some of your multies...needed more concrete imagery (similies, metas) vocab was extensive I arose from the ashes of hate clashes to attend classes and spit acid and hit bastards... Im a phoenix... so you could call me state capitol... I got the ears of the people... white, black and all... Three X I'm under rated leavin' whole cities evacuated when I come on tour cuz I'm flat out nasty... ^^^ That caught my eye Good Job dawg 7.5/10 |
thanks man... appreciate it...
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Yo... upping....
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Still busy at the Om vp...nice Playing off the school paper name..i really dislike school..damn nazis and jus..if you can get all these people to vote for you on the Award you would landslide it..
Cart pushing...i am now famous |
lmao... I know... mafuckers 9th Degree put the link on page 3... y'all should drop an honest vote on the award.
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