This wasn't that bad man.

You need to work on your flow, but everybody has to start somewhere.

Just work on smoothing your flow out more, and getting the delivery down.

Just keep at it bro.

thx for all the feed guys .... i am tryin' to work on some issues .. i was usin' a 1 dollar mic when I recorded this...

1 dollar? At least it's worth more than what anybody would pay to see you perform b!


ZING! :hump:

your a genius son...