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Ghetto_poet 01-02-04 12:33 PM

ur on the right train nigga, juss on the wrong path/
u call urself straight ace wit 2 crooked dicks up ur ass/
ya records 4-0 and ya egos in tha way/
them battles waz give aways likely on gay pride day/
youz a fly weight blowing in the windy city/
thoze dots at the end of ya line dont make ya rhymes witty

Dialect OTYP 01-02-04 01:49 PM

in real life id prolly cock back and leave ya neck a wreck
im bout ta take this 'poet' of da site and he aint got a record yet
dont forget who be stompin niggas like a jump or a club fight
im takin ya breath ta death because i love life

CareFree 01-02-04 01:53 PM

For the way you were rhymin, you should watch wut you say/
You pay too much attention to straight ace/You must be gay/
Talkin bout dicks up the ass, your just pissed/
He wont give you nothin hard but you want that dick/
Dont try to explain it by replying right back/
Cuz my mind dont work like yours, get it right jack/

Ghetto_poet 01-02-04 02:12 PM

first of all bitch i cant even find ya rhyme scheme/
takin up 4 straight ace tryin to make a place in his wet dream?/
im not even going to ask...../
when i see ya ima blast,blow my semen on ya mask/
lyrics i spit fast so fast the make ya gag/
unload 2 with the mag and blow ya brains out ya ass

Straight Ace 01-02-04 03:10 PM

Aimed at Ghetto_poet
Silly kid ill double ya losses & drop twelve..
Wants to be a stand-up comedian..
..Just to prove he can stand up for himself..
Thinkin' he has a chance of victory vs me..
..Elevate by selectin' ur text & hit the delete key..
I could care less 'bout you to me ur..well shit..
..Only way he'll stand out..
Is typin' his scripts while holdin in 'SHIFT'..
Just a regular newbie..they come & go..so do u..
..Heres another fact.. 1 plus 1 is...:thefinger..2..
For him..a street immediately represents ghetto..
Ill make u lose twice.. by makin' my words echo..
You're a joke kid..

- k ! L L z - 01-02-04 03:23 PM

Chicagoe's a Loosin State. Bulls And Sox..
Ace you really Aint Straught. Full of Cocks..
Stick and Move - Im Hot Like Potatoes..
One On One Equals, rambo's Death SequeL's..
My Heat-Will..Kill Ignorant People..

730 01-02-04 03:27 PM

^^Aimed for straight Ace....^^kid you dissed him terribly
 
^^you wack fuck, kid just stop 'fore i put five on it
N throw away an S.A like i got a bad mark on it
you got it that's true, but these newbs are better than u
while u still stay locked under 7.....like ya fuckin crew
you suckin too, N i don't need a paragraph dick head
all i need to do Is call the pussy outta his weak legs
N please beg, as i strap bombs over u who sway
:gfy:<--N count down on Straight Ace like new years day

- k ! L L z - 01-02-04 03:44 PM

:thefinger
^^
It's That TIME to beat Kid's Around SEVEN-THIRTY. .
Say Hi To JESUS Kid. You Goin-Ta Heaven EARLY. . .
Wack at Rap So Just Stop, SkiLL Is what You Dont Got.
Kill Crack Heads Over Electronics. guess My PHONES HOT.
While your Flow's Not. SHUT UP just DON'T TALK. . .
^^
:shoot:

Straight Ace 01-02-04 03:59 PM

Soley created with the purpose to attack 730
When pressed submit, might not have known..
Ur not fully developed yet Like Chingy's vocal tone..
Kid is a statistic, bound to get sonned..& clowned..
To me ur first of all a zero like i read the other way round..
Damn myself i think as i reply & know u'll wont grasp..
....See ur post? it'll be deleted..it's a admin task....
^ Cause freeposts & wack shit will destroyed..Its true..
Go ahead & clown mine..but u & ur alias..dont make a crew..
..Kid your skill is nothin, empty kinda like your sig...
& while ur impact is nowhere..mine is this
BIG!..

..Now seriously before u even consider replyin'..
..at least put some effort into ur work..u take all the fun out of this..

derekpacisalive 01-02-04 04:48 PM

..
 
Straight Ace is a fag who dresses in drag
brags bout how he lost a pound on jenny craig
searching the net for help on how to rap right.
typing to his homeys on a WEBSIYEET!
I mise well clone me so there can be two D's
and you can be me and finally compete!

730 01-02-04 05:06 PM

Directed to Straight Ace::

you're a fake, blah this shit's easy as cake
w/ cold text, cuz even nomads crossed some ice when Barin Straight
you caught on late, So i'll swing him till he's blue in the face
N throw him straight, Until i create me a fuckin flyin Ace
you get laced with hits, dabbed in the face and it's...
like i'll straight crack this kid....just like his bottom lip
please quit, ya verse had only 1 punch in it
So i'll bang on this A-minor, like he had notes in it
please bring it, cuz u the king when punches arise....
between any fags asshole or ya lover boys thighs...


dude you barely dissed me.....don't lecture me about commin correct...this's a cypher i ain't even bringin my best while you're tryin N i'm still kickin yo ass....lmao

Straight Ace 01-02-04 05:40 PM

Basically you dont comprehend the basics of rap..
Makin' excuses..wont cover up the fact ur still crap..
Your lines repetetive, seen one..the rest is the same..
Like Olsen twins..the first is special after that its plain..
I'll simplify my style..for a while just to make him see..
He cud switch postcounts wit Cam & still be new to RB..
Hence my wordplay in various,previous posts..
..What, i dont punch? ....then u tickle at most..

730 01-02-04 05:54 PM

Straight Ace

dude ya trippin N fa real ya ass must be playin
cuz we read all ya verses...N still don't know w/ the fuck u sayin
dude ya gay and...his skinny ass get's blown of the branch
then off the tree, through the country side N off the friggin map
duke ya none existent to me, N i'll prove it in bunches
cuz if i had nothin to look for, i'd just look at his punches
you'll get crunched kid, fucked N you'll feel the pain
Till he go nuts like i just put my fuckin dick thru his brain....

^^somethin wack for you....cuz ya verse was utterly shit....

Straight Ace 01-02-04 06:15 PM

..Time to shut a newbie up & destroy his act..
Shud put up a drop down menu in his sig..
...............Just to state all the things he lacks..
Utterly shit, or ingenius mind unable to peer..
Now prove ur worth by acceptin this right Here..
Ill annihilate this new kids fake facade..
Who's name Originates from a cheap arcade..
^highscore..

tubesteak 01-02-04 06:19 PM

oh shit i crap on my shoe
now what you ganna do
what you ganna do
when the tubesteak comes for you
better grab all that lube and start applying
cause once my fly starts popin and my bone starts popin
and no telling what i be copin
anal or oral its all the same cause my dick alread came
piss or shit it makes no difference i like corn better then lemonade


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