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CounTREE Jay 04-14-04 02:09 PM

Look at this bitch.

em-First off, fuck your songs and the shit you say
Diss my wife, but at least I got a bitch, you gay
guy-First off, Fuck the words and the shit you spit/
Diss my verse, but you just shame the game, thats it/

em-You claim to be a Muslim but you Irish White
So fuck you fat boy, drop the mic, let's fight
guy-You claim to be a rapper and you're rhymin's tight/
Your verses ain't shit so drop the mic lets fight/

em-Dilated, go ask your people how I leave ya
with your three CD's, nobody sees, when they released
guy-Annihilated, go tell ya people I defeated ya, ya little dick/
5 verses spit nobody wants to see, Nor can they give a shit/

em-Evidence, don't fuck around with real MC's
who ain't ready for no underground beef, so fuck geeks
guy-You past tense, so don't fuck around cos you ain't a real MC/
And you ain't ready for battle with me, you suck G's/

em-I let you faggots know it's on for life
but Everlast might die tonight, haha
Fat boy murdered on wax and killed
Fuck with me and take a heart pill, you know!
guy-I tell you now that this shit is on for life/
So ConuTREE jay's gona die tonight, Aussie boy murdered on a sword blood spilt/
Keep fuckin around with me an you know ur gona get killed, u know!/

em-Grab 380's when you see Slim Shady
Call the doctor to heal your heart
They shocked you back to life at the clinic(Who shot me, but you punks didn't finish) - Pac
but you 'bout to get relapsed any minute
Honkey, I hit 'em up!

guy-Enter ya car, when you see tha guyver/
No time to talk, cos he beats ya heart/
He dissed me, but the punk didn't finish/
An i'm about to fuck his mom any minute/
NIGGA I HIT YOU UP!!

CounTREE Jay 04-14-04 03:30 PM

You bitin' ass homo. Uppin' 4 Votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

guyver4mk 04-14-04 04:06 PM

What the fuck. I said I re-wrote the shit and I did you knob jockey. I didn't bite it, I re-wrote it, Jus like 'em did to tupacs version. None of the lines are exactly the same because I re-wrote them duh. That was the fuckin "surprise" i talked about in the PM u brown nosed ass lancer. Fuck you.

Uppin

guyver4mk 04-14-04 04:09 PM

thanks for the lyrics tho. I bin lookin for them :) ha ha

Killah Bwoy 04-15-04 04:37 PM

lol damn i gotta give this to countree good battle though damn this was a good battle but i gave it to countree barely justttt barely i liked his structyue and word useage more good shit yall

vote countree

CounTREE Jay 04-16-04 11:31 AM

Yo, can we get this shit closed? Vote niggaz, vote!^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

CounTREE Jay 04-16-04 12:56 PM

Yo, can we get this shit closed? Vote niggaz, vote!^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-16-04 01:03 PM

Alright Guyver4mk' .. Your Shit Was To Basic For Me' .. I Wasnt Really Feeling Your Flow' !! Althrough It Did Have A Nice Structure & Verse' ..!! Nice...!!

Alright TREE Jay Nice Verse' I Enjoyed But.. Your Structure Was Fucked Up Witch Threw Your Verse Off-Balance!!

Checck TREE Jay's Lines Though:

First off, come at me, U wannabe G, talkin' about takin' it to the Streets,/
It's hard for me to C how you could take me, When U can't even handle the beats./

^An Alright Opener 7/10

Damn, ever realize as you spittin' that this shit's already a rap,/
That's he's just another generic emcee talkin' about makin' guns clap./

^Alright Punchline 8/10

And you just an undercard, Wanna be big, but Jay the Headliner,/
Now let me show you the way out the game, you can call me your path finder./

^And A Good' Not Great But Good' .... Closer 9/10

Good Enough To Take The Win!!

Vote: TREE JAY!!

CounTREE Jay 04-16-04 01:06 PM

1 more and you can pack your fuckin' bags bitch, that I told you so be wellin' up in the back of a nigga throught. BIATCH! :thefinger

CounTREE Jay 04-16-04 01:53 PM

Uppin' 4 Votes niggaz^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

CounTREE Jay 04-20-04 07:52 AM

uppin' 4n votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^

CounTREE Jay 04-21-04 07:47 AM

Uppin' 4 votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

hydroponic_buzz 04-21-04 07:59 AM

Guyver, when you got pushed to rhyme again, yu hit back way stronger. An' Jay, sayin you'll let you're first rhyme stand is a bit too cocky.

Jay's verse seemed a lot more raw but guyver had some nice punches. This was a close one for me but i feel Jay's wordplay was slightly better, and the flow was smoother.
vote = counTREE Jay


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