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uppin for votes for my man nolost ~!1!~
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hes puttin on a show actors would love it//
and he only spit online cuz hes wacker in public// ^^^ haha...nice and funny there im havin you rained on i couldnt wait for the weather// nolost using clips??! only when he puttin papers together// ^^^um...no...wack-ish Thinkin tighter than me? Pls, i cant name a list of at least three different emcees// In disbeleif, because their notebooks still bear the mark of your teeth// ^^^ OUCH!!!...lol...funny whoa...this was a good 1 RHyme: Tie Flow: Six Punches: Six Vote: Six...muchharder punches...actually made me go OUCH lol 1 |
aight uppin for more votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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just one more vote
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flow - 7/10 ok flow could use a lil work i think u guys tied on flow
structure - 6.5/10 needs work his was a lil better than urs ur lines were really uneven punches - 7/10 ok punches hit pretty hard but again could use work overall - 20.5/30 id like 2 c more personals and better vocab NOLOST flow - 7.5/10 pretty good flow choppy in a couple places structure - 7/10 like him u need work stretched lines punches - 8/10 hit a little harder than his overall - 22.5/30 good verse a little better than his it was more consistant ur punches and flow was better by a hair close battle id like 2 c a rematch |
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