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Enhance 05-19-04 05:01 PM

UPin what the fuck this kid is wack i have no idea how he is even winning 3-2 ...........

L.I. 05-23-04 09:50 PM

havok - started off wack but good metas through out....good punches....flow was nice....jus dont use "these" around your words....okay wordplay and flow....good verse....give it a 7.7/10....fav lines were....
How am I supposed to battle someone that doesn’t “exist”//--5
Even in this battle “Jason kidd” cant throw you an “assist”//--6
You should “invest” some time in ur rhyme before it gets “mortgaged”//--11
You writing rhymes is “unsafe” like using “Los Angeles Storage”//--12

m section - another good spit....u actually had personals that hit hard.....some were gay like the banishment with out an i.....not many meta's....more complexity and creativity in ur verse....not as good a flow....give ur verse a 8/10....fav lines...
wont use euhpusim you`ll sleep quick… Flash forward when you arm drops…
And you wont get up , Resurrection impossible … even with a alarm clock..
unconfident bitch your 4 –1 , you`ll get whored son.. Man forget it…
At the previous post I laughted , minutes later.. Look How he edits

vote - m section for more complexity

Enhance 05-31-04 05:42 PM

Upin

Enhance 06-01-04 05:15 PM

Upijn

Key... 06-02-04 03:20 PM

Havok:

How am I supposed to battle someone that doesn’t “exist”//--5
Even in this battle “Jason kidd” cant throw you an “assist”//--6
You should “invest” some time in ur rhyme before it gets “mortgaged”//--11
You writing rhymes is “unsafe” like using “Los Angeles Storage”//--12

^^best lines. i had to say kinda forced wit La thang but it was ok

M-section:

wont use euhpusim you`ll sleep quick… Flash forward when you arm drops…
And you wont get up , Resurrection impossible … even with a alarm clock..
unconfident bitch your 4 –1 , you`ll get whored son.. Man forget it…
At the previous post I laughted , minutes later.. Look How he edits

^^best lines...i have to say creative and complex...



Overall: M

betta overall verse.

Crossword 06-02-04 03:32 PM

Punches-Tied
Personals-M
Creativty-tied
Metas-tied
Complexity-M

It was a good battle... nice verse from both of you. Havok had some nice punches and some good metas. But M takes this with his complexity and his personals... Good drops

V/ M


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