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UPin what the fuck this kid is wack i have no idea how he is even winning 3-2 ...........
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havok - started off wack but good metas through out....good punches....flow was nice....jus dont use "these" around your words....okay wordplay and flow....good verse....give it a 7.7/10....fav lines were....
How am I supposed to battle someone that doesn’t “exist”//--5 Even in this battle “Jason kidd” cant throw you an “assist”//--6 You should “invest” some time in ur rhyme before it gets “mortgaged”//--11 You writing rhymes is “unsafe” like using “Los Angeles Storage”//--12 m section - another good spit....u actually had personals that hit hard.....some were gay like the banishment with out an i.....not many meta's....more complexity and creativity in ur verse....not as good a flow....give ur verse a 8/10....fav lines... wont use euhpusim you`ll sleep quick… Flash forward when you arm drops… And you wont get up , Resurrection impossible … even with a alarm clock.. unconfident bitch your 4 –1 , you`ll get whored son.. Man forget it… At the previous post I laughted , minutes later.. Look How he edits vote - m section for more complexity |
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Havok:
How am I supposed to battle someone that doesn’t “exist”//--5 Even in this battle “Jason kidd” cant throw you an “assist”//--6 You should “invest” some time in ur rhyme before it gets “mortgaged”//--11 You writing rhymes is “unsafe” like using “Los Angeles Storage”//--12 ^^best lines. i had to say kinda forced wit La thang but it was ok M-section: wont use euhpusim you`ll sleep quick… Flash forward when you arm drops… And you wont get up , Resurrection impossible … even with a alarm clock.. unconfident bitch your 4 –1 , you`ll get whored son.. Man forget it… At the previous post I laughted , minutes later.. Look How he edits ^^best lines...i have to say creative and complex... Overall: M betta overall verse. |
Punches-Tied
Personals-M Creativty-tied Metas-tied Complexity-M It was a good battle... nice verse from both of you. Havok had some nice punches and some good metas. But M takes this with his complexity and his personals... Good drops V/ M |
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