thanks for da votes y'all....uppin

uppin for tiebreaker

uppin

I’m Conjesting This Vortex! Bitch, Im Fukkin This Whore Next Im Known To Surpass Your Level Like Fukkin Drugs-Blessed …
He Claim Gangsta So This Thug’s Next, Riot Claim To Be Sick… After Infected Needles With “Blood-Tests …
Im sure i saw the style of your lines before... this is okThis Hoe’s Spared He Spoke Impared I Neglect Bitches[Appearance N Leave Him “Proned-N-Scared. …
I’m Dope Here! And In-TiMe Will Propel Bitch To His [Hometown] To Prove That He’s Going “No-Where. …
this is ok
I’m Infected G! We Got Separate Dreams!! Riot States That He Legend To Rap Battles But Only When He “Wreck-The-Keys
I’ll Cut Ya Flesh For Free! But Riot’s ‘Shit’ Is Blessed Only When He Forced On Molesting-Priests. … (ouch)
Good ryhmes use
I Bomb Ya Fags Your Drama Lacks! Bitch Isn’t [Gifted]! N Just That Proves He Don’t Belong-In-(W)Rap. …
I’m Stronger Man!! Plus The Only Time This [Bitch] ‘Flows Wit Fury’ Is When (S)He On-The-Rag. …
ok but not feeling it very much

ya were very good using good vocab in all but most is just dissin him but u had some punches

Da whole time u were rhymin, I came to a conclusion/
Your "new style" is so wack, it causes da whole world confusion/
This is good
Your lines are fucked up, like Oprah doin sex up da butt/
I got a question about your verse and that is.....whut?/
not feelin it
If I were to give u a tip about spittin your shit in lines of ten/
It would be simply, read a fuckin dictionary, and make some sense/
good
It's easy to see that your shit isnt even close to bein worthy/
In this TRIAL of styles, I'll let u pick da witnesses, judge, and jury/
very good bar here
So here's your SENTENCE, u get your whole life in PRISON/
For bein a whack lyricist, like a nerd, your "punches" are missin/
this is sort of good good use of rhymin
I could bring a doped up clown in this battle and say that it was me/
Wit my pen and paper, I'll kick this nigga and punch out his buck teeth/
How u know he has buck teeth????
So finally, end of discussion, period, I'ma make sure this dude's dead/
Riot's makin sure he's DAMAGED and he's only got negative ONE lives left/
this is an ok finish thou

i liked ya flow and stucture you had kind of better disses than damaged1 but the personals were lacking with fake personals but u were good

this battle was so close!!!!!!!!
but i had to pick Mc_riot for better bars and flow and structure. both of you are good
sorry damaged1 im just froppin an honest vote :thumbup: