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uppin for votes.......

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Originally Posted by EyeDentdy

when I first red, Temps verse, I thoaght he would get my vote. but ATT got em wit about 3 or 4 personals. I dont give a fuck if he fed, if Ur verse is tight, It shouldnt matter. He kill that legless track crew reversal type shit. his openers werent all that great but the rest was much better. Ill Tempa kept it comical but too simple. niggaz luv to hear and read word play, punches, and metaphores. Try getting more of this into Ur rymes then rematching him. all in all, Atticus did ok as long as he stops that roman word Yatzee game shit. niggaz dont care about vocab if it doesnt have to do wit the battle. We all can do dat shit, but we dont becouse it wont get U too many wins. but its kewl, keep doing ya shit.

^^couldnt say it better my self
my vote goes to atticus

Ayooo ILL, K-awdik's Vote Shouldnt Even Count...
Cuz If It Is Then I'm Losing Cuz He's Ignorant...
He Said On A Bar Or Two He Didnt UNDERSTAND...
He Shouldnt Have Even Voted If He Cant Fallow The Material...
AND ILL TEMPA NEVER SAID NO FEEDING!!!...
SO STOP VOTING AGAINST ME FOR THAT...
But Ya I Got Ya PM Temp, I Sent You How To Do It...
You Didnt Get It???...
Upping...

Ill Tempa got this for the following reasons: He had a better structure his opponents was choppy and srtetched.

His punches hit harder and also had decent wordplay.

The rhyme scheme was stronger and i found quite entertaining.

And was all out for winning it by the looks.

Fav Line: Tempa
Ya "Breath" stays "Hot" so when you "Spit Lyrics" they "Reek"//
He's so dumb he takes a "Ruler" to bed to see how "Long" he sleeps//

Worst Line:
U got 40 posts and no record, garbage history//
This battles over, I win, by Flawless Victory.

/\ Could've finished much much stronger

Fav line Atticus:
And He Says I SPIT-After Cuz I Love Them-Sweet-N'-Sloppy...
But This-BASTEREDs Been On My -STEM- Like His Meters'-Used-Unproperly//3

Worst line:
Tryn Be-Defiant By Sayin I'll Do 10-16 Instead Of Within-Those-Asked-For-By-Me...
But He's-Lying About Not Listenen-See,Cuz Just Then-He-Didn't-Go-Past-Line-14!//6

/\ again another weak closer

V/ILL Tempa