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:.anxiety.:
Terrorism wasnt avoided, in fact it was invited...
It seems im the only one, that became enlightened...
Democrats and Republican, together were frightened...
What the fuck were Bush and Cheny doin makin threats...
To a bunch of motherfuckers who aint afraid of death...
So a war was started, and that tore us apart...

Those lines were tight, you had good structure and good consistancy. Although I didnt like the topic, it was decent. Your topical was tight though. Overall i'd say 8/10.

caliph
Sorry to say, but I didnt like anylines from your verse. You really need to work on your structure and vocab. I recommend elevating and then go for harder people. Anx just handed your ass. Lol, but for real, elevate so your structure gets better and work on your vocab. Overall, i'd say 4.5/10

Oh yea, peep my battles in elevated please.