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yo thanx fo the feed back ya'll but lookin fo some mo feed back
peace

Let me point out a fact that everyone who gave you positive feedback on this drop were new to RB with no battles and hardly any posts...hmmmm

hey the first verse was ok the second verse started off sick but when u talkin bout serious stuff u DONT put punch lines the third verse was cool and the fourth waz sick and yall got some talent but u just dont seem qwite focused....

so eut newbies are talented too and you n eva know

if ur dat skill'd u can use punchlines wheneva homie every ones verse 4 dis shit was hot in there own unique way n justify u barely got da rite 2 tlk bout newbieu still a rookie ur self but every thanx 4 da love n keep givin us feed back wanna kno wut 2 do betta 4 next crew drop peace uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

can yall check my shit ?? cause i dont know if its gay or not?

btw that was a nice drop

i already peeped all ur shit so far homie uppin dis piece

yo dawg dat shit was tite man, n yop dawg i gave his ass sum positive feedback n does it look like i got 20 sumthin posts? NO but ne way good piece dawg

tsss
 

that shit was nice i liked it it was ok first verse then got better and better im feelin it
could you check out mine tell me wats up with it, i seriously wanna get better and work at it thanks
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139852
peace

yo seriously rv quit sleepin on unless return da feedback i give out 2 every1 holl back n rite sumtin quit bein lazy people peace

Nice drop,,Thats the fire im talking bout,,,keep em comming
God bless all...1 love
One more thing,,,I put something down about haters,,,So if you all can relate to being hated on ,,,you might want to read this one,,,,Its the truth...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140326

thanx ya'll for the feed back but still uppin fo some mo

yo man still lookin fo some feed bhack