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Abraxas 08-13-04 11:06 AM

Voted For: For$akeN

Both were very good
For$aken: your very was tite nice drop you had very good punches that waw good and ya personals were good as well nice struvture and flow
D wun: ya verse was good, ya punches were ok and you r personals are good you lacked in some bars that i thought vould have rewording

V/forsaken

For$akeN 08-13-04 01:31 PM

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...Apocalyptic Soul... 08-13-04 03:37 PM

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For$akeN 08-13-04 05:11 PM

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50Cal. 08-13-04 06:51 PM

Voted For: Decree Wun

ok forsaken first that 1st bar is madd played out ok punches but they aint hit right on this ok flow but it seems streched out a little ok drop 4/10
decree good wordplay i seen his name in your forum too lol so the 5th line made me laugh i aint like your ending but overall it was a good drop wordplay strong personals and punches gave you a better verse7/10


Removed.. possible hate vote
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M-Eazy 08-13-04 06:56 PM

Voted For: Decree Wun

this was not a good flow to me...both was on each others level on this one, but i seen nuthin special...i didnt see any nice punches or none of that...gotta give it up to D.W. tho, cus his flow wasnt boting and he had better punches and wordplay...forsaken had some nice lines and punches, but they were boring...elevate...

drop votes on the below battles people

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For$akeN 08-13-04 08:21 PM

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M&rk 08-13-04 08:39 PM

Voted For: For$akeN

personals-forsaken, new username is the only way this fake could think he "WUN"(won)
^^best personal in the battle
crativity-forsaken, he acts all "native" but can't take all the damn "Chrit-icism"
^^^^most crative line in the battle

none of ya'lls punches really hit hard, but because forsaken won those two catagories i gotta give it to him and i liked his better because his was better. decree wun ya first bar kinda killed ya for me cuz the first line was gay and the secound was played. and......
Claims Rich, But The Truth Comes Out In His Name, He Only Makes Four $ (for$aken)
^^^this attempt at a personal was jus weak. come harder wit your punches. should hit harder some way wit that punch.


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Logic The Goonie 08-13-04 08:47 PM

Voted For: Decree Wun

hmmmm close battle fellas. vote goes to decree wun cuz of better personals and punches and basically everything else was tied but forsaken duz get the structure category. kinda seems like decree had more shit to feed off for the personals and forsaken tried but he focused on the alias subject a lil too much.also the lyrical aid "personal" wasnt correct i think u ust kinda tried to find anything to throw in there. both verses were good tho. fav lines:
decree-You Can tell He Still Misses Hwcs Cause he won't get out of our forum
For$aken's the kind of kid that'll drop the soap on purpose out of boredome
forsaken-he's a fuckin' herb but I guess he's way too ashamed to admit
like his disease thats the only thing he will ever now transmit
no hate. return the favor (links in the sig)

For$akeN 08-14-04 12:04 AM

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For$akeN 08-14-04 10:55 AM

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For$akeN 08-14-04 06:36 PM

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For$akeN 08-14-04 09:36 PM

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For$akeN 08-15-04 01:01 PM

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schema 08-15-04 01:39 PM

Voted For: For$akeN

Quote:
Originally Posted by Decree Wun
My Heaters "nick" This Kid, Raise your body temp to "98 Degrees"
Dismantle your legs, have you performin' from a wheel chair like christopher reids
it was funny but your body temperature is already above 98 degrees like normally...2nd line not so much...

Claims Rich, But The Truth Comes Out In His Name, He Only Makes Four $ (for$aken)
Detective? you can't even find your own identity like an unkown caller
decent...

You Can tell He Still Misses Hwcs Cause he won't get out of our forum
For$aken's the kind of kid that'll drop the soap on purpose out of boredome
ha this line made me laugh...nice...

fuckin Geek, only time you merk katz is when your playin GTA (grand theft auto)
Like A trained dog, you dont elevate, when i speak, this "bitch just stays"
if you switched geek and bitch it wouldve rhymed better but it was pretty good...

Jagged Objects Peirce into your arm like falling shattered Glass
spit heat u goin no where in de rap game, like a family in the desert wit no gas
ehh...

pretty good battle i just didnt think it hit that hard and I wasnt feeling some of the metas you had in there they seemed forced...ive seen you come harder in other battles this one just didnt do it for me...




Quote:
Originally Posted by For$aken
he needs to make a alias to get more respect and a better name
for the simple fact that his rhymes are more played then ACCLAIM
ha nice opener...

third tactiks as his title ya it's true he now has 3 damn users
his lyrics never in his fuckin' life hit because he's no abuser
ehh..second line not that nice

he dies over and over again but comes back just like the SPAWN
his new username is the only way this fake could think he "WUN"(won)
hah...im feelin it...

he's a fuckin' herb but I guess he's way too ashamed to admit
like his disease thats the only thing he will ever now transmit
nah...not feelin it...

this kid's gonna get knocked out faster than his metabolism
he acts all "native" but can't take all the damn "Chrit-icism"
haha nice...

nothing left he can't even hear his voice if he ever shouts
he doesn't have his "drop" in him like he "spit" it all out
weak...

his lines are washed up... like he was a new version of cascade
only reason he has twenty wins is because he has a lyrical "aid"
ha pretty good closer

you had some patchy spots but you eeked out the win here I think...some pretty good punches in there nice opener and closer. some stuff in there was real weak but the stuff that was good was cool...ehh you get my vote...



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