Voted For: calamity

SONIC
structure is good.. flow is on target.. u had some nice multis.. wordplay is pretty tight.. some of ur punches connected, but some were just wack as well.. decent personals..

Calamity
structure is also good.. flow is on target.. u had a few multis.. wordplay was pretty good.. most of ur punches connected.. personals are alright..

Overall
SONIC had more multis.. both had a good structure.. both had a stable flow.. both had pretty good wordplay.. both had decent personals.. Calamity had more connecting punches.. and seein as punches r more important then multis.. Calamity gets my vote..

VOTE - CALAMITY