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Voted For: ==>ECKO<==

yo i entered the dragon and de-flamed the flame through ya nostrils
im colossal...paintin pictures with my words like i was a drugged up picaso
^^ok not bad..no punch though
The pot smoke....The Crack Smoke...i didnt know u had an alliance
how hard is it to smoke n make friends it aint no fuckin brain science
^^i liked this
let alone people sayin that yall formed up a dynasty
village,duece,the leaders.....shit its already been a fucked up travisty
^^could've been written better but its still good
its all blasphemy....showin disrespect.... to C.S. and me...
p.S.A is like the 12 holy apostles...they already folowing we....
^^dint like this
We the C.S....smoking these bitches like they was a pound of stress
cuz that shits to E Z.....bought a ounce of chron...toss the rest
^^decent
we leavin ya bitches wit cotton mouth...we come from north to south
east to west..its game over..i jus pulld the tonsills out this dragons mouth
^^some wording issues but good

overall decent verse i thought you played on his crew a little much but it is a crew battle"right"structure was ok dipped in the middle a bit opener was ok..but no real punch..verse lacked a little with punches...but decent..nice drop...

drag~on's verse

diss cat got his name from a cloting line
"ECKO"but diss battle wont have 2 be said 1 mo time
^^ok but kinda simple
line 4 line, punch 4 punch i guess im packin more
i "rock" ECKO n da votes but da clothes i neva wore *
^^dint like 1st line but liked the idea behind the second
make his lungs collapse when i pull out straps i luv 2 clap
diss "K.O." was "E C(z)" go head n say dat back
^^ok koo but should've been written diff...
i "SINDICATE" my "CIME(s)" here fom the start like n ya sig
by hittin backflips on ya fitted cap 2 "flip ya lid" **
^^aight decent flow
den DRAG ya body ON 2 da tracks 4 "dashin"
n "run" all over u n a "sprinters" fashion
^^was'nt feelin it at all....too simple
-[P-S-A]- n we "fuck" bitches from every team
just like tissue on dat ass crack we "get n between"
^^ok funny best line in your verse....

drag~on pretty decent verse i liked some of your ideas but your verse lacked in structured punches i suggest not using
qoutations n caps it makes your verse not flow as well...
but still decent drop...nice battle

overall with flow punches n all cats considered i gotta give this ta ecko cause he came with content that was consistent in flow n delivery of punches some fillers but that created the lou for the punch....nice battle it was fairly close

aight i think that coverd it all,again nice battle ..