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DeadLYVisiOnz 08-25-04 03:29 PM

He an alias not MM..lol

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 08-25-04 03:32 PM

Ok... I Have No Idea?!!!

MaNiPuLaTiOn 08-25-04 03:54 PM

eh?.........it kinda helps to know who he is......but put im on if u want dml.......
might as well.......
ive a feelin he/she will b a vet.

MaNiPuLaTiOn 08-26-04 01:56 PM

uppin the tryouts.........
cumon peeps............

Yvonne 08-26-04 02:59 PM

iight yo...this one is from 1 of my battles....the dude still gatta get online and drop but fuck it...ima showing this as a try out..........









Intensify Effect?..thats how u getting murcked by this oustanding VET..and I’m doing this with no REGRETS (1)
son take this Spit as a 1000 holes in ya CHEST + bloods all over ur VEST,next time think twice b4 ge’in on the NET... (2)
723 POSTS..no change..you still a JOKE,you'r lines remind me of a gay in a BLOW..you would be "booed" at if this was a SHOW (3)
you aint in no CREW..nigga get a fucking CLUE..u suck and u SCREWED.cant u find somethingelse to DO? (4)
you puches r just like and old man MOUTH...how u xpeact to hurt me when u aint even got a teeth to brag ABOUT? (5)
he dosend even know wherre the fuck he FROM...you battleing me is like putting a pole up ya tinny bum BUM..(6)
8lines and im leaving peeps asking your wherre about...y'all gatta know he's right herre in the cats mouth.. (7)
i done with BUSTING YOU..next time i bitch slap think twice 'cos i'd keep CRUSHING YOU..now lets see if this spit aint worth saying "I’M SONING YOU"? (8)

iight....the rhymes r in CAP....


4)he aint in no crew and in his profile he didn’t put whats he does..no work …nothing

6)in his profile he didn’t put where he from

peace

1

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 08-26-04 04:15 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by XxXtayve
iight yo...this one is from 1 of my battles....the dude still gatta get online and drop but fuck it...ima showing this as a try out..........









Intensify Effect?..thats how u getting murcked by this oustanding VET..and I’m doing this with no REGRETS (1)
son take this Spit as a 1000 holes in ya CHEST + bloods all over ur VEST,next time think twice b4 ge’in on the NET... (2)
723 POSTS..no change..you still a JOKE,you'r lines remind me of a gay in a BLOW..you would be "booed" at if this was a SHOW (3)
you aint in no CREW..nigga get a fucking CLUE..u suck and u SCREWED.cant u find somethingelse to DO? (4)
you puches r just like and old man MOUTH...how u xpeact to hurt me when u aint even got a teeth to brag ABOUT? (5)
he dosend even know wherre the fuck he FROM...you battleing me is like putting a pole up ya tinny bum BUM..(6)
8lines and im leaving peeps asking your wherre about...y'all gatta know he's right herre in the cats mouth.. (7)
i done with BUSTING YOU..next time i bitch slap think twice 'cos i'd keep CRUSHING YOU..now lets see if this spit aint worth saying "I’M SONING YOU"? (8)

iight....the rhymes r in CAP....


4)he aint in no crew and in his profile he didn’t put whats he does..no work …nothing

6)in his profile he didn’t put where he from

peace

1



^When You Tryin Out You Should "HAVE" To But Your 'WORDS' That Rhyme Togetha In "CAPS" ... - Fucks Up Your Whole Flow.. And I Really Aint Feelin It

-Work On Structure
-Work On Wordplay
-Work On Vocabulary
-Work On Your Stretched Lines... (Etc; Etc;) ...

(Good Luck)

Imma Say (Out)

Yvonne 08-26-04 05:05 PM

iight then fuck it....

telling me "you still on the basics" would have be easier i guess....

anyhow..

manip im out.......................

1 sis

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 08-26-04 05:15 PM

^ No Need To Get All Violent And Shit..!! I Was Giving You Feedback... Not Saying Your Whack.. Or Anything Like That' ...! (Calm Down) ..


-But Like I Said (Good Luck)

Yvonne 08-26-04 05:27 PM

:huh: *looks at my post once again*

was i violent?


ohhh prolly its cos i didnt say thanx for the feedback..well thanx

1

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 08-26-04 05:34 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by XxXtayve
:huh: *looks at my post once again*

was i violent?


ohhh prolly its cos i didnt say thanx for the feedback..well thanx

1



No Worries

-Your Straight!

MaNiPuLaTiOn 08-26-04 06:22 PM

like i said u elevated since we battled x...............
keep workin on ya shit.u`ll get there sis...
stay up, n holla back in a while.....
peace

uppin the tryouts.........
rosters lookin pretty aiight so far...

Turnheads 08-26-04 07:50 PM

Yall keep holdin it down.

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 08-26-04 07:57 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Turnheads
Yall keep holdin it down.



No Doubt' ...!!!!!

Adam 08-26-04 08:02 PM

yo, whos all on this roster right now?

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 08-26-04 08:07 PM

Leader: Manipulation
Co-Leader: DangerousMyndLuantic
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Princess -Fluidmoon
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