your a fool...we decided on this topic way before you did...check the date of your post..and check the date of when this battle started..

This was feedback posted for WildFire
 

just checkin the polls n stuff on the newest council member...

upping for some fucking votes...........................

lol...damn..wasn't dis set up like 3-4 months ago??lol

fuckin uppin....got damn sleepers...................

This was feedback posted for ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..
 

Checkin Polls...

...Uppin This Battle :P.......

Voted For: WildFire

Aight i read this before and i reread it again Am going wit...Invasion

why?

Because his emotions in his piece were real......and it was felt also imagery...he didnt had smooth flow...as for that Hope takes that catagory but fo an topical those 1st 2 catagory's are important

V/InV

Vote:In-vision

aight my vote goes to in cuz his piece was more complex it was deep it had a really unexpected twist which made it hotter than it was..it flowed nicely..good use of multi's....i liked it..it as real....sorta...and the use of you being peer pressure in itself was awesome real good thinkin on htat one

hope-ok u had a really good verse too....i felt the emotion more in your verse....had good flow in it....a lil predictable at points like towards the end i kinda saw the crash with your "friend" coming so that kinda lost you the win....very deep....you complexity lacked a lil too..but it was a real nice piece....

i liked the topic a lot for this topical....it was really deep and emotional too i felt this one...keep it real pplz...
peace~1

return the favor honest and explained

battle in my sig..peace~1

Voted For: WildFire

good close battle


Hope: good verse all around, u had the better vocab, had some nice creativity, stuck to the topic all the way through, what i think lost u the match is that it seemed to much like true story, i know it wasn't but it seemed like it, i think peeps wanna see more creativity, but u had good flow going, structure was better then wildfire/in-vision, overall 8/10


Wildfire/In-vision: i was feeling this more then hope's verse, she had the better vocab, structure, and ya seemed close on the flow, u had good creativity and that's what won it for u along with wordplay, ya ending just took the win, i like how u made it seem that u were a kid just peer pressuring him but u were really peer pressure ya self, that's what won it for u, overall 8.5/10



v/in-vision


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