that was hot shit paramik, it had everything that was needed, flow, structure, eveything was on point, nice topic to, no ones really youched on that subject.
10/10

Our open mic is up now check this dope shit out....

ok ender could improve beginning and middle fire dopeness this shit is fucking good nice shit

If Worthy Vote This For Open Mic Of September....

pretty dope...9/10...lots of writing in this must of took awile...good stucture...but your flow fell a lil but you used multis in some parts but not bad...pretty good


check my open mics links in the sig

This was like a storyline//script it also=brilliance. Well at least I thought so, you had your concept well developed and you had great grammar and structure.

Definetly one of the better drops this place has seen.

This was dope. I'm surprised you didn't get jinxed by G_$peed being the first to leave open feed back . lol. But this was a dope one. The best. I've read half of this when I first joined but never left feeb back. So now i do. Goo drop. Hey return da favor in my sig nigka.

Ight ill do it later..

7.0 out of 1.0 its good if your under 20yrs old give yourself an extra 1.5

nice drop ill give it a 8/10 but kinda long

man this was hot, excellent drop, imagery was great as well as everything else, i don't usually rate stuff, but this is a 10/10 most definite, keep it up man