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Ice Pick 09-28-04 04:28 PM

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granmastr chi 09-30-04 05:43 AM

This was feedback posted for Paramik
 
haha for sure you got this one in the bag too bad i cant vote

Yvonne 09-30-04 04:29 PM

Voted For: Paramik

iight...

paramik came up with harder punches and his structure was better...i felt his flow all thru..and his wordplay was decent...but i gatta say both stretched their lines a lil bit...cos ice had all the self glorigication and paramik foucsed more on ice's name..besides all this paramik was still able to rock the mic..nah mean?...ice had a larger vocab but paramik..gets this for a better verse filled with tight punches,better structure,better personals...in short a decent verse....


holla at my battle yo...

thanx


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Mistic-Rogue 10-07-04 11:34 PM

Voted For: Paramik

vote goes to Paramik!!

I liked your punches mate, they were nice and original, they had nice word play and were delivered well

your flow was good aswell, lines were all even, structure was good.

Vocab was good, and the verse was funny, enough said!

please return honest vote on one of the battles below!

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Cocaine 10-11-04 08:29 PM

Voted For: Paramik

vote goes to paramik.. ice pick im not feeling ur verse.. lackin punches.. it was a good battle tho.. Paramik just came harder.. he had better flow.. and ice pick make ur font smaller it would be easier to read.. no hate ice in my opinion Paramik took it.. good job to both though.. paramik just had better punches pz..

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50Cal. 11-28-04 04:16 PM

Voted For: Paramik

ice opener no real punch there but funny i.e do suck lol second punch good also self glory bar 4th dont do that punches ok flow was streched as fuck structure was off disses aight here far from your best a 5/10
paramik opener also no punch second bar ok funny though kill himself good diss funny shit also 3rd bar no dont do that lol dope punch ice ages punches dont stick dope wordplay there lol nate dogg good diss too lol good ender good flow and structure a 7/10
basically i think paramik took this with ease here betetr set up flow and punches more personals and better disses icepick i think will own you he really tried but he slacked and you got him


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