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D-ICED 09-25-04 09:29 PM

This was feedback posted for [.:Diabolic:.]
 
this dude is fucking whacked he must win by fucking dr votes all he has is vocab and no punches or fucking good personals at all fucking whacked

D-ICED 09-25-04 09:33 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Daclassic
Voted For: [.:Diabolic:.]

shabba their is nothing fantastic really about this. A few punches but they didnt hit hard. Your verse was funny. but it look real simple like you rushed to do this ...the structure was not good

diabolic. nice structure it was okay. you have witty wordplay. very complexed well complexed enough. flow was nice. No hard hitting punches either. you'll both got personal on this one...but nothing outstanding. I'm a have to go with diabolic on this one.

return the favor

^do you fucking know what wordplay is you fucking idiot??!!he didnt have any wordplay is to say something like 'you suck harder then monica'' he had multis and vocab which count for 8% of the vote read the fucking how to vote thread by c progresss asshole i see hes joined your vote for me fanclub fucking faggot :gfy:

MaNiPuLaTiOn 09-26-04 11:39 AM

Voted For: Shabba Ranks

Looks close heres the breakdown

Your "rank" is inferior, so hands down gimme my praise
I have prosperity, witout havin thuggish internet ways
^Not a hard hit...more a statement 5/10

You are a hazard, "diseasin" members wassup wit that
Cuz Shabba and Kyro be runnin around givin niggas the "Clap"
^Ok if it wasnt played.....hmmm 6/10

Cant equalize my complexity, searchin for lost answers
Shabba couldnt Speak sick even if he endorsed cancers
^Again u couldnt b sick punches are played...6/10

Continue to free post, battle statistics give explained reasons
Verse's transform ya E-Style code, Ranks commitin Treason
^^^Not feelin it 6/10
Truth is, Shabba is overrated, im here to portray the truth
gonna have to attend "counciling" after this "verbal Abuse"
Again not hard enough..too simple 6/10

Overall-29/50


Mike hawk
Why should I try…when this kids gonna come weak and played…
Named yourself Street Legend, cuz you’ll never be a household name.
decent wordplay n hit........7/10

You on the wrong terrain, your even a shame to the site’s newbs…
I don’t care about your location dog, Ill always Bmore than you.
^^Not feelin it 6/10
I’m whoring this dude, your gonna lose, you getting ya ass kicked…
Better off not showing up here…just like your sig graphics.
^ok wordplay 6/10
We all know it…. there’s now way you stand tough…
Think your cool, cuz you joined the ‘Hate Empire’ fan club.
ok 6/10
Your whack my nig, go ahead and drop, it is your choice…
I hope you do, so you can just prove my point.
^NO 5/10

Overall-30/50

basically mike took this with one decent punchline,ranks u came terrible compared to how u can drop......mike lotta ur lines didnt rhyme but im go wit u coz u had the beta wordplay n ur punches were more creative


Switched

[.:D:.] 09-27-04 03:46 PM

dan....dis shit is close.....uppin

Pop Lotty 09-27-04 05:36 PM

wtf....why is this open again?

Triple_N 09-27-04 06:06 PM

Voted For: [.:Diabolic:.]

Breakdown for diabolic:

Your "rank" is inferior, so hands down gimme my praise
I have prosperity, witout havin thuggish internet ways

Good personal....7/10

You are a hazard, "diseasin" members wassup wit that
Cuz Shabba and Kyro be runnin around givin niggas the "Clap"

LOL..not very strong but funny...6/10

Cant equalize my complexity, searchin for lost answers
Shabba couldnt Speak sick even if he endorsed cancers

Nice spin on a played concept neva heard it like dat..8/10

Continue to free post, battle statistics give explained reasons
Verse's transform ya E-Style code, Ranks commitin Treason

Eh..I see where u going but didn't work..5/10

Truth is, Shabba is overrated, im here to portray the truth
gonna have to attend "counciling" after this "verbal Abuse"

Good not great for closer but fair...6/10
Overall: 32/50


Breakdown for Hawk:

Why should I try…when this kids gonna come weak and played…
Named yourself Street Legend, cuz you’ll never be a household name.

Decent wordplay, opener was blah..7/10

You on the wrong terrain, your even a shame to the site’s newbs…
I don’t care about your location dog, Ill always Bmore than you.

eh nice try but needed more to hit hard..5/10

I’m whoring this dude, your gonna lose, you getting ya ass kicked…
Better off not showing up here…just like your sig graphics.

Again worded differently woulda been harsh..5/10

We all know it…. there’s now way you stand tough…
Think your cool, cuz you joined the ‘Hate Empire’ fan club.

dats not even a diss....3/10

Your whack my nig, go ahead and drop, it is your choice…
I hope you do, so you can just prove my point

Doesn't really rhyme an is a sorry closer....3/10
Overall: 23/50

Both opened nice, an both started fading towrds the end, but hawk faded alot harder than diabolic...last 4 lines for hawk weren't even disses to diabolic...not a good way to close out a battle so I give it to diabolic for a better verse.

Vote: Diabolic


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