i agreed wit calamity...but i think you gotta try harder than dat....
ill wait till i can play it in hi-fi

i cant even play it.....soundclick be freezin up and it p[lay choppy...i wanna get a laugh....:(

O i got it to work.....and i got my laugh... :laugh:

flow is off sonny...bars stretched

uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp pppppppppppppin

EMPIRE glad we in da same krew
shit was hot keep droppin shit like
dat we'll take over audio dawg
good shit

good look on all the feedback that wasnt hate or dickriding i appreciate it :thumbup:

damn i had a bad record guess im dope now though :thumbup:

yup were dope now :thumbup:

^hes pretty dope too we should jump him

well get him tommorow :thumbup:

it was pretty good i dont like carson tho hes wack he edits his voice to much prob cuz hes a nerd and has that gay ass voice.
empire you should save it as mp3 then it wont sound gay and turn up the speakers so we can here the beat cuz yer voice takes over the beat:
punches: 8/10
flow: 9/10
vocab: 5/10
wordplay: 7/10
nothing else to say:)

^good look on the feedback NOW PLACE A VOTE other people too and it will sound better in hi fi after they approve it:cussing: :thumbup:

^tru ya thats what it is what am i saying :laugh: man empire you realy helped me elavate just by reading yer verses in text :) thanks for that

when i make my verse in text for carson can i put the link in here to? im gonna write half tonight and half tomorrow.
its so damn easy to make punches on him theres so much wrong with him:laugh: but his lryics are dope but his audio nope nope nope he aint got anything dope:laugh:

your welcome but im retiring soon start work on my demo in 2 weeks i wont be here much nomore maybe once a week and im resetting my full r.v record ill be 40-19 or some shit thats alot of battles and i aint even a battle rappper shit but im ghost in 2-3 weeks fo sho

Yeah you got potential.. Need to be a bit more consistant with ya flow.. And that was short as hell.. Im lookin forward to seein more of ya shit tho.. So keep it up gutter slut..