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Dirty Nigga 09-19-04 04:53 PM

Final What The Hell?

lil C.A.L.I 09-19-04 04:54 PM

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

ok u got this 1 cuz of your punches and your structure and your rhymes so punches = 10/10\ structure=10/10\ and your rhymez = 9/10 so u got this one

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OrEo da cookie 09-19-04 10:54 PM

Voted For: Jay-Z

creative gots this battle just cuz shottaboy aint swing as hard, he got him with the dick suking lips but he got you with x-mas eve
honest vote

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Pop Lotty 09-19-04 10:58 PM

This was feedback posted for Jay-Z
 
lmao...v/Jay-Z

untouchablekilla 09-19-04 11:03 PM

This was feedback posted for sHoTTaBoY
 
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...Nemesis... 09-20-04 08:08 AM

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

oh shit i usually dont say this about battles but this one was so weak. both u guys need to step it up. ur guy's vocab was horrible.but if i had to vote for someone i would have to say creative cuz he had better vocab and better punches. and shottaboy u have 21 wins u should know how to rap by now.

vote creative

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...Nemesis... 09-20-04 08:09 AM

that was for creative i posted it in the wrong one my b.

Dirty Nigga 09-20-04 09:09 AM

Upin....

Lyriclesolja 09-20-04 10:48 AM

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

Aaight battle.....Creative-I wasnt feelin your verse....nore you style....wack personals use personals that people can do research on like his sig or sum shit not about how "fat" he is....Opener was good...closer was alright......No metas. make your lines shorter so it will be easier to read cause thats some bad structure.........Shotta-Opener was really good....closer was aight....no personals.....very good vocab........nice structure....and better punches.......V/Shotta.........drop an unbias vote on me vs. eveo its on my sig......Peayce

Dirty Nigga 09-21-04 08:07 AM

Upin..............................

Dirty Nigga 09-21-04 04:45 PM

Upin...................

Triple_N 09-21-04 07:37 PM

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

Creat:

Wottaboy.. a shottaboy?.. man he knows he's going down...
Ya rhymes make me laugth & are krusty.. like the simpson's clown (illl)

NO.....weak

It's business. Who is this?.. I'll shoot the mac from distance eaze...
U could only "WRAP" better than me if this... was christmas eve..

Seriously played..weak

Call the ambulace.. this bitch dont even stand a chance.. he'll fall
& i wont make u drop that verse... cos u havent even dropped ya balls..

Weak

& Shottaboy is a FATboy.. it's true bitch .. stop hating...
AYO BIG PUN DINT DIE.. fattyboy over here just ATE HIM...

u can't be serious


Shotta:

Lemme Proceed To The ''Starter''... (Opener)
Lyrically Stomp The Shit Out You In Ya Own ''S.Dot Carters''..

No weak

This Dumb Fuck Runnin Round Callin Me A ''FAGGOT''..
''You Was Funny Til U Was Born'' Like ''Bob Saggot''...
This Lyrical Assualt U Cant ''Hack-It'' U Lil' ''Maggot''..

wack jus useless multies

I'ma ''Stick You'' For Ya (Rappers)Money n Be Like ''Fuck You Pay-Me''..!
Dick Suckin Lips Is All U Got In Common With ''Jay-Z''..
U ''P.m.s'' So Much Its Hard To Tell Is You's A Nigguh Or A ''Lady''..

decent wordplay nothing great but only real line of whole battle.

I gave it to shotta cuz he had the only line worth mentioning in whole battle
Vote: shotta

HOLLOW_TIPS 09-21-04 07:43 PM

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

aiight shottaboy got this one mayn he alwasy comes hard with his vocab and his punches decent structure like always he dawged that other nigga no doubt


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