who wnats ot tag team bash some noobs cuz im bored???
LI???

shabba???

chase do you really need help to noob bash??......lol

Hmmmm, I think I might post something in here

Oh know this is really wack, for you and for me, lol I dropped hella weak and payed the price, but cuz of this ima be really angry wit this battle and k.o Red Bull wit a hot verse (wich will be in here when I finish) so just peep this for now, it was vs. Fiya Spitter

Bit his name off Lady Fiya, you disgrace a good name//
Nottin mo then a 'bitch', i'll leave you out in the rain//

Imitate the guy in headgames sig, i'll strangle you wit a piano wire//
Didnt know wack was 'hot' these days, guess thats how u spit fire//

I'll fite 'Fiya' wit fire, merk this name bighter//
You may spit fire, but i'm a fuckin fire fighta//

Wack noobs on R.V., ya you are all the same, another rook who just spits lame//
I'll pour gasoline down your througt ignite it wit a lighter so you can mimic yo name//

Bit his name off Lady Fiya, you disgrace a good name//
Nottin mo then a 'bitch', i'll leave you out in the rain//
Its just a statement...really...what signifigance does it have saying your gonna leave them out in the rain?...

Imitate the guy in headgames sig, i'll strangle you wit a piano wire//
Didnt know wack was 'hot' these days, guess thats how u spit fire//
Decent...ur getting the concept...just needs a better delivery...so work on that...

I'll fite 'Fiya' wit fire, merk this name bighter//
You may spit fire, but i'm a fuckin fire fighta//
looool NOOOOOO...

Wack noobs on R.V., ya you are all the same, another rook who just spits lame//
I'll pour gasoline down your througt ignite it wit a lighter so you can mimic yo name//
Very, very, very stretched...its really a boring punch...=\

hmm that shits hard ya ill need to do it in time im so actice it will be done soon:) anyone wanna check out my openmic and give feedback on it :) and then tell me what needs fixing:)? speicialy L.I

Bit his name off Lady Fiya, you disgrace a good name//
Nottin mo then a 'bitch', i'll leave you out in the rain//
Its just a statement...really...what signifigance does it have saying your gonna leave them out in the rain?...
Cuz a bitch is a female dog, they get left in the rain, rain puts out fire

I think thats what he meant

'I'll fite 'Fiya' wit fire, merk this name bighter//
You may spit fire, but i'm a fuckin fire fighta//'
rofl...duke is dope.

k heres a song with a punchline in it a punchline basically im gonna make one with eyr name its only simple to do it but it dont meen anything jsut for a example here it is:
this crazy ass bitch diabolic tryin to teach me a little sumin, sumin...
but all as he needs to do is shut up and stop his frontin/
^^^thats weak but is it a punchline? i can do better

k heres some wordplay:
i can take words, put them into linez and create a brand new picture...
you will lose i gurantee it cuz i already made you run cuz im more sticter/
^^^that wordplay? i kno its weak but w/e is it?

^^^that was from the diabolic thingy hes tryin to elavate me but sense yer better i wanna she what i get for this???

this crazy ass bitch diabolic tryin to teach me a little sumin, sumin...
but all as he needs to do is shut up and stop his frontin/
Telling them shut up doesnt deliver a punch...say sumtin witty..

i can take words, put them into linez and create a brand new picture...
you will lose i gurantee it cuz i already made you run cuz im more sticter/
No...i dont see the wordplay...u attepmted a meta...a weak one...keep practicing and read the vets battles and try to imitate their syles...

^alright thanks and ya i get the punches now and im starting to leanr wordplay triple N is teaching me in my crew hes good with punches but i wanna learn wordplay but i will soon ya ill take eyr advice and read other vets battles:) but here ill try another punchline:

relizing that ruff tuff thug is hella weak with everything he says and dos...
taken him and throwing him into the back of a garbadge truck would be done with ease/
^^^^^^dos that work for a punch and i kno it dosent rhyme but dos it work for a punchline? i can make it rhyme but i dont realy got to much time:)

No..its just saying ur gonna do sumtin...

I want Empire to help me elavate aight L.I :thumbup:

^L.I is better then empire but L.I sucks at audio empires only better then him at audio