This was feedback posted for Verbal Phenom
 

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Voted For: Diabolic_aka_134

diabolic 134 won diz better flow an i luvd dat still clean line dat wuz tight u got flow i like u do u want 2 battle

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Voted For: Verbal Phenom

this battle here goes to Verbal cause in every category he owned Diabolic.Wordplay was funny on his side cause of the "W"erse line,the D-Feet line,shopping carts and basically his whole verse.The structure wasn't bad,and as for the personals,there weren't any but the wordplay was enough.
Diabolic,you need to work on your wordplay a little cause it was kinda basic and weak.Not too bad of drops from both,Diabolic,I felt that some of your punches couldve been reworded.
Good job to both.
V/Verbal Phenom.

Voted For: Verbal Phenom

voting for Verbal.....

Verbal has a nice drop, his punches hits hard, he had nice flow and structure, nice wordplays and vocab, and etc.....it's not his best but still pretty tight....the only negative thing I'm gonna say is that even though you had nice flow and structure, your lines are pretty stretched...for example...

This Fag Is Burnt Out Leave Him Twisted With infinitely Exposed scars(17 syllibles)
This Battle Is A Farce The Only Time u Be On A Roll Is Sitting In Shopping Karts(22 syllibles)

otherwise you had a tight drop, keep doing ur thing :thumbup:

While Diablic(spelling?)'s verse, you could use some more sylliebles into your verse, some of ur lines was stretched hard out compare to the 1st line of your bar....

your punches are played, and you definately need to fix your structure and flow....and only newbs leave spaces between each bar....

so I'm voting for verbal for a better overall verse

Voted For: Diabolic_aka_134

aight...
diabolic wins this battle, hands down....
the punches were crazy! decent flow, personals were right on point, no need for the explanations, i understood ya rhymes anyway.......

verb, ya flow was too predictable, ya lacked creativity, although ya had some decent metas, ya didnt focus on personals enough, pretty tight battle but dia got this...

return the fave
p e a c e

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Voted For: Verbal Phenom

(134)

If this was a chess game this move would b "check-mate"
jus like ya chance in fame all they say is son "your-fake"
<Good worplay, WEAK punch

You betta retire now while ur records "still-clean"
Or ill jus do the impossible n "spit-ur-spleen"
<Sloppy, Elevate man.....


(Verbal)

This Battle You Won't Pass This Test Coz You Aint Got Tha Answers
Ya Death Time Limit Is Shaved Like People Being Cursed With Cancer
<Hella line man, LOL,haha, Nice punch

Imma Make Ya Lungs Burst Call Me Bewitched The Way I Leave Ya Cursed
The Only Time Ya Verse Gets A "W" Is Because You Allways Come Off "W"erse
<LOL, Nice finisher

Wordplay: Verb
LMAO factor:Verb
Multis:Verb

V/ Verb

No hate, Just honesty

Hey guys return the favor on me and mindscapes battle plz.
Honest votes if voting

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