uppin this for another time........................ vote peeps

damn how many times do I gotta up a battle to get a damn vote!

uppin again damn 4 pages and only three votes this = sad, vote you faggots

uppin people.............

uppin peeps for another vote

This was feedback posted for 9th Degree
 

9th degree i want a piece of you i called you out check it

Voted For: 9th Degree

aight philo-started off nice kept to the point, but round the middle end you lines started to fall off a lil n ya story line fell apart not enough emotion n to much raw story....i liked your concept but the ending couldve been written alot better...
take your time with a topical ..think it out backwards<
sometimes it helps...
9th,good flow nice story ya ending was the best part...wordin was good)held it together throughout the verse i like how you had more content in the piece, overall a better drop..
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meh im koo with both"props on ya drops"
at least you kno its honest..

well it's a crew vote.......... nut whatever I know it's honest

oh shit i forgot i was in his crew...lol
srry hg, wow im stoned..lmao

Lol well Philo seems cool with it. Besides, this has been open for quite some time...

Werd man, just fucking close it...................

uppin once again

Voted For: ~philosopher~

ok 9th degree good vocab and structure story was not as emotional ender was not that good but ok basically you both had the same idea which was the wrong topic but philosopher had a better ending as well as a more visual and entertaining story so i have to say he won 9th good also but your story was too direct and to the point while philosopher gave a more vivid story and that wins topicals.
v- philosopher

both you return honest votes

ok i'm back in this....... 3-2 let's go uppin this shit...........

Voted For: 9th Degree

vote: 9th degree... too short for a topical.. but pretty good still... u need more time to tell a story but i got the vibe from 9th's.. i think philosophers was rushed.... u need to use more emoiton and vocab.. but overall 9th takes htis..