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can we get some decent fucking votes here???.....................
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Voted For: intensify effect
everytime i called you out ya ducked n got offline... fiend ya so addicted to crack u got a pac an tim roth shrine!.. wasnt feeling it my texts'll make u blind but thats good cause ya raps are ass.. i'll brake ya rhymes like glass... not feeling the 2ed line un-even bars but it was ok an with just one of my punches ya seein double vision.. you should know never to try rhyming without proper hip hop supervision.. ok i'm on a one man mission to help intensify your flows effect... but theres no help for you like a penis that cant errect!.. weak penis lines like this are gaya nd useless livin off past glory, ''violent types still on fire'' keep ya mouth ''canned''.. i'm some unsigned hype stompin you out an signin the partician to get u banned! now that was a good personal if its true i'll be damned if this dwarf gets the win... like the afgan soldiers your gon go thru torture as i stick a axe to ya foreskin..! decent ending dopeman, diss me?.. said i been ducking.. but i've been waiting for ya skill's to rech a settlement... cuz i'll murder ya drop befor it happens,.. like shell' poping stomach.. during a fetal development... *ouch* 2ed line streched but preety witty Don't care if you think you ill, your punches can touch me?.... hardly.. Wouldn't put ya "nuts on the table"... if you were hostin a... "fuckin party"... ha i like that Wanna ride my dick and battle ? Well,.... I bet you'll fall brother.... But please loosen up ya grip dawg,... ya hardness bearly fills a extra small rubber.... *ha* decent im rippen your ligemints in three N creamating the Remains Of ya physical.. basic.... so stop quickly ' My verbal Abuse is Metal bound like Rappers with Braces.... like the meta in the 2ed line decent your more Herbish then "empire" in a pink slip, dog what type of Brain Patterns Are yours?.... your executed ' no props ', left hangin like Hinges on Large Doors... dont know who empire is but 2ed line was decent Im so Ruthless ' I'll switch your hearts Blood supply with Mental Confusion Sending simple Illusions.. ' you get crippled an booted like handicap kids kicken an feuden..BITCH!!! *ha* not a bad ending multis and a dent hit i thought he was more focus and had better punches but a good battle it was indeed to see |
Voted For: :::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..:::
structure dope flow dope lol get it jk rhyming dope opener-closure tie hits dope multi dope imagry dope vocab dope hit up on my link peace. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: intensify effect
V/Intensify Effect.....very close battle but ima have to give this to IE cause he was more creative wit the punchs an his vocab was also good his structure on point....dopeman u had a good verse also but not as creative as IE in Punchs u had sum good lines but u weren't consistent wit the punchs...... punchs=IE Vocab=IE multis=Tie Structure=tie overall=Intensify effect *RETURN THE FAVOR* |
Voted For: :::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..:::
well im gonna say this battle was wack....both of oyu need to elevate...alot IE: you are alomost there just elevate a lil more.....none of oyur lines where good..none of oyur lines caught my eye........you had wack personals and you structure was nasty looking....work on punches adn metaphores...then personals...but first fix your structure..all in all...4/10 DOPE: you where far form dope....you need to elevate alot...the only reason why you one was becuz oyur structure was better than IE....you need to work on everything also.....i was bored fo your verse......add some better punch lines......and also up your vocab... both you guys need to elevate and up your vocab...you also need to put atleast one nice line in both of your verse.... vote=dope |
^^^ how can u hate on they verse? when they verse was good but I.E made more sense and hit harder? atless show respect dont just blowen off like that it was a decent read
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Voted For: :::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..:::
everytime i called you out ya ducked n got offline... fiend ya so addicted to crack u got a pac an tim roth shrine!.. decent opner here…punch landed my texts'll make u blind but thats good cause ya raps are ass.. i'll brake ya rhymes like glass... make yo flow longer 4 both lines… an with just one of my punches ya seein double vision.. you should know never to try rhyming without proper hip hop supervision.. nice punch here… i'm on a one man mission to help intensify your flows effect... but theres no help for you like a penis that cant errect!.. decent punch here…& persona livin off past glory, ''violent types still on fire'' keep ya mouth ''canned''.. i'm some unsigned hype stompin you out an signin the partician to get u banned! meh…pretty decent here…wasn’t feelin it much tho i'll be damned if this dwarf gets the win... like the afgan soldiers your gon go thru torture as i stick a axe to ya foreskin decent closer here…pretty much landed Overall You had a decent drop…punches were pretty much hard hittin & make your flow equal wit both ur lines n’ shit diss me?.. said i been ducking.. but i've been waiting for ya skill's to rech a settlement... cuz i'll murder ya drop befor it happens,.. like shell' poping stomach.. during a fetal development... decent opner…kinda stretched here though Don't care if you think you ill, your punches can touch me?.... hardly.. Wouldn't put ya "nuts on the table"... if you were hostin a... "fuckin party"... nice punch here Wanna ride my dick and battle ? Well,.... I bet you'll fall brother.... But please loosen up ya grip dawg,... ya hardness bearly fills a extra small rubber.... meh…kinda decent but weak though im rippen your ligemints in three N creamating the Remains Of ya physical.. basic.... so stop quickly ' My verbal Abuse is Metal bound like Rappers with Braces.... weak punch here…I get it tho…but I was kinda weak here your more Herbish then "empire" in a pink slip, dog what type of Brain Patterns Are yours?.... your executed ' no props ', left hangin like Hinges on Large Doors... decent punch here… Im so Ruthless ' I'll switch your hearts Blood supply with Mental Confusion Sending simple Illusions.. ' you get crippled an booted like handicap kids kicken an feuden.. decent multi’s here…but the punch didn’t land here… Overall You had a decent drop too…much of yo punches I wasn’t feelin tho…vocab needs improving but overall decent drop from you though |
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