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I think 2X4 got this, both were kind of whack though...Phil, man, keep trying, i see some potential... But you need to focus on punches at least as much as personals... Two By Four... Better Meta's... Pce...

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stfu..... :) n e ways uppin for one more vote damn..... and what metaphors?

Uppin Once More, Damn X Stop Dq'ng My Votes

sorry man, Drunk bad mood, n e ways uppin

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this battle was bad no offense..

both of ya punche's we're basiclly the same..

parallel: your sturcute was very good, flow was iight but only alittle stretched... your vocab was pretty good, and nyce personal.

philosopher: you know ur my boy from L.R.I. (Low Ryders Inc.) but man, i thought i helped you get better, it's been like 3-4 months since that crew went away.. but neways, you really need to work on ur structure, your punch was iight, but i'd same jst about the same as parrallel, and your flow was off man.. but neways

vote: par

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Parallel - good spit man, it flowed well and your punches were hitten hard.

Best Line - How can you get “respect” saying you’re the only philosopher…
Why you study males ejaculate, how did this “interference” occur…

Worst Line - Word got up you fluked out getting into the “council” you dog fucker…
When you stepped to the “press box” you got the mad chills, burr…

~philosopher~ good spit man, you had good punches to but flow was off.

Best Line - Xclusive with girls reminds me of handicaps playing in the N.B.A., he can't 'score' (6)
Site is his life, cuz last time X was out with freinds...
... He was in a computer store!

Worst Line - Like 'gay men' addicted to 'druggs' this kid likes 'crack' (3)
And the "..." after your name leads to: "At being wack"

OVERALL - Close battle here but I gotta vote for Parallel. He had the better flow and his punches were hard. ~philosopher~ you dont need to explain line for line word for word.. lol, anyways.. your shit was good but the flow was horible. I guess that whats happens when you dont try.

Vote - Parallel

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damn it should be 3-1, cuz of fuckin d/r, and prallel stop, this d/r votes are pissing me off, and don't fucking deny you aint gettin d/r this battle

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I'm either dumb, stupid, or tired...maybe all 3...cuz i don't get the wordplay, [unchlines, or anything else...so Im not gonna vote


offer explanations for us "average" people next time

^^ he didn't have wordplay he just put (" ") over random words