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This was feedback posted for String9487
hmm good battle but i think string took this bcuz of punches. Lyricals verse was really good too tho he had a really good closer n good structure. but to me string had more quality punches and good flow
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Voted For: ..Lyrical..
No contest... open: string did take this tho, "eh yo, u against me, its a pitiless effort a forensic team couldn't find a win on ya record" close: definately lyrical, "You spit basic…left this kid wasted…but tha breathalyzer said sober… Not to mention this whole site went to shit…cuz of you…in October…" String's structure; i know you said it was deliberate but it was quite weak in my opinion, seemed all over the place there bro. There wasnt really a great deal of vocab either and personals were lacking. Some funny punches tho, a couple of them landed. Lyrical; had a real good verse, packed with vocab, multi's, personals and a good flow and structure. I was definately feeling this. Unlucky string, your verse would have beaten someone worse than lyrical |
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That's Fucked Up String's Verse Was Tighter,His Flow Came Out Good And His Structure Wasnt To Good But Punches Made Up For That,I Think String Really Got This Vocabulary Was Way Better Then Lyricals Dam
Lyrical Come On Nigka Your Vocab Was To Basic Get It Right String Had This Hands Down The Flow Just Came Out And Followed Threw The Whole Thing... |
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Voted For: ..Lyrical..
Lyrical obviously won this one. Overall way better flow, and vocab, and punches. The rhymes you made were overall better than the other guy... |
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