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Oh...my Bad...good Shit (exclusiv G)...but I'll Up This Again For Yall...werd
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why the fuck is this battle gittin slept on so bad????
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This was feedback posted for Terse
hard hittin punches in my case, but i'm elevatin too. keep it up terse. i need to post more in order to vote
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Voted For: Elusiv G
i voted for acuity cause he had better wordplay andy his syllabels were tight rhyming was really nice flow was kinda choppy but still good punches hit nice hard and fast best line- Im learnin gradually, makin rhymin n beatin ma expertise Ur ass so stupid still askin mama bout wats the "birds and tha bees terse ya verse was good but it lacked a few things a nice flow but ya rhyming was good words were well put together good battlein both of u best line-ya rhymes is ass...lemme show u how you're surpassed jack puttin ya verse in uppercase, will only leave ya ASS CAPPED Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Terse
This Kid Took It Easily... Elusiv Lacks The Hard Hitting Punches... In All The Battles I've Seen She Hasnt Really Possesed Them... Aiight Here's The Beak Down... Quote:
Here's Is The Verse Break Down For Terse Since He Won... Quote:
Aiight And Thats Whats Up... Not Really All That Great Of A Battle But It Was Aiight... Some Decent Punches Thrown... But Overall You Both Need Some Elevation... And Terse You Need To Work On Verse Consistancy... G, Work On Strengthening Your Punches And Getting More Original/Creative Wordplay... Maybe Try Shortening Up Your Bars A Bit Too... Your Structure Was Alittle Strechted... .One. |
Voted For: Terse
Terse...you owned this battle..it was one sided for sure....you came with dope punches...good personals...good structure and flow... and had a enjoyable to read verse. the wordplay was intellegent...dope drop....8/10 Acuitym -ehh came pretty weak compard to the verse spit by Terse...you gotta step up on your wordplay and on your punches and personals...your opener was wack...and the rest of the punches weren't to strong either, you had good structure and flow though...elevate fam and you be aight...6/10 v/Terse Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: Elusiv G
vocab-neither punches-acuity multis-acuity strcuture-tie my vote goes to acutiy...barely though. Terse's lines sucked ass and acuitys was aiight...barely decent...but your closer killed all of terse's line..."Tearse go home, disperse, return once uve rehearsed Ill hit ur newbie ass, make u bleed, like a virgin on her first//" one..... |
Voted For: Terse
wack battle by both.. one sided Flow:Terse Punches:Terse Multis/Laughter:None. |
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