Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ

to me this was an easy one lol

Flow: Mista
Vocab: Mista
Style: Mista
punches: mista
personals: mista
opener: mista
closer: mista

tips: all to infurno. like read good peoples shit and good luck

Voted For: Infurno

aight you win

MIS..you had weak personals...although personals always win battles this time it didnt..oyu need to elevate alot..work on your metaphores and expand your vocab......other than that just work on the basics...structure..metaphores..punches....shit like that

IN..you have mad potiential....just take the time to elevate and you will be actually pretty nice.........your punches where nice(not the best but for a newb good) also your metaphores where also good for a newb..onvce you elevate you will be good..
vote=inferno

This was feedback posted for MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ
 

nicely dun fam...................................uppin

Voted For: Infurno

wow.. I know neither of you- no hate to anyone, but Infurno just shitted all up on mistas grill... lemme break it down.

Infurno u pursue fire well my punches are cold I’m gonna take your fire out
My rhymes are sweet, giving you cavaties, putting multiple holes in your mouth
simple simple rhyme-- out and mouth... punches were basic- no real thought necessary to your lines... very cut and dry.
Kid you cant handle me. Like your basketball home team, they cant handle balls
They cant even shoot, like your punches you wont connect through an net dawg
balls and dawg is a forced rhyme-- maybe u could pull it off on a track.. but not here... dissin the chicago bulls?
Like your Chicago bulls jerzey I’ll leave multiple holes with bloods all over your body
I’m leaving you with no power like Michael Jordan left the bulls, and also like scottie
if you spent some time and re-worded this- you could have had a nice bar... as it is its real basic, no wordplay anywhere, nothing hit hard... keep writing, and peep some of the assistance threads.


AuTh3nTiQ? this fake's a swingman he cant throwback a punch/
im like a football playa the way im fuckin AuTh3nTiQ's up/

I felt this bar alone could win the battle... its a pretty funny punchline- it struck well... your 3 bars all had decent punches... you could tell you just have more experience than your opponent here... keep doin it... vote infurno.

Damn seven, broked down the facts, lol. Alright good honest vote. let's see some more, uppin.

Voted For: Infurno

Infurno u pursue fire well my punches are cold I’m gonna take your fire out
My rhymes are sweet, giving you cavaties, putting multiple holes in your mouth
decent punch here, it landed
Kid you cant handle me. Like your basketball home team, they cant handle balls
They cant even shoot, like your punches you wont connect through an net dawg
decent, hardly rhymed thought but it was aight
Like your Chicago bulls jerzey I’ll leave multiple holes with bloods all over your body
I’m leaving you with no power like Michael Jordan left the bulls, and also like Scottie
punch was okay, hardly landed though


im scorchin dis faggot RV watch as i blaze this herb/
my verse like a crossword puzzle.....ill beat u with a maze of words/
decent punch, it landed here though
his intentions ill, but my comprehension kills/
and hes thrown in the Infurno when eva u mention skills/
nice multi’s punchline was weak though
AuTh3nTiQ? this fake's a swingman he cant throwback a punch/
im like a football playa the way im fuckin AuTh3nTiQ's up/
LOL…punch was aight, kinda weak though

Voted For: Infurno

infurno too this one...better personals, harder punchlines, and mettas...just a all around better verse. what more is there to say...good drop infurno
mista-aight verse, but lacked originality. some of ur lines were play'd, but some aight mettas in there, and aight structure, but couldnt come as hard as infurno in this one...
overall-good battle...keep elevating..infurno took it...

plz RTF on battle link in sig. plz pick a crew battle, and vote on it, and xplain it, cause i took my time out to vote on this..

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