o fuck that bull shit vote....i don't bother lookin at this shit anymore but fuck that bull shit vote
uppin

uppin votes someone finnaly close this.............

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hahaha...ayo you gotta becareful sometimes when you write dumb shit for newbies...but anyways thought you won...

Voted For: Ruffridah187

Ruffridah187-
took this easy he had harder punches better persnals came good i liked his rhymes and puches structure was a little of flow was nice it was kind of dope few more punches n persnals that wud have been sik

DJ-M-C -
came on punches was alright didnt come as hard persnals were knd of shit flow was ok struck was a bit off didnt come very hard

OA-
Ruffridah187 gets this easy he came harder had better persnals he get my vote easy he has better flow and punches and vocab

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Sovereign i aint a newbie i was here WAY longer than you, you're the newb.....not me
let's see the difference
I've been here around 8 and a half months....
You haven't even been here a month so stfu
uppin for this last vote
and finally win....AGAIN

u can return the favour soon as soem1 checks in my battle :-p

Voted For: Ruffridah187

nice battle, pretty even matchup

winner-ruffridah

flow-ruff
punches-ruff
vocab-dj em
finisher-tie
opener-ruff
multies-ruff by a little bit

both verses were good, ruff just came a little harder in this battle

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2ND MOTHA FUCKIN TIME!!!!! my GOD! just let this shit fuckin go....if i beat you i beat you if you beat me you beat me.....i aint gonna go reopening cuz i'm a sore fuckin loser......this is getting riesome.....learn to accept you messed up one time and lost....now you know one more thing not to do in battles....damn seriously stop reopening it!

Voted For: d.j em sce

DJ
when i get in the textin section everybody knows im legendary
I win battle bcuz when it comes 2 spitten evrything else is secondary
kid im fresh and ur stale.....but ill admit it u got balls`
if ur a stable person im bout to make sure u take a fall`
Even if u smoked a blunt on a train u still couldn’t blaze a track
U like a sperm guzzling hoe da way u never spit any cum baks
this kid is lame he is to plain all your rhymes are basic
i up the vocab and acuzate that you cant envison my phisical matrix

pretty cool verse - you had some aight punches - attempts at wordplay - a little creativity and your structure was aight - 6/10

RR
Half asleep, 13, i'm still whoopin your ass
Ya rhymes break mine like cement and shatter ya glass
Ya lines is a brutal crash you a 2 sided bitch flip flopping
The farthest you'll ever go in music will be a disc jockey
This bitch cocky sayin i'm wack but only looks at his reflection
How you even set this up when you postin Open Mics in the Audio Section
I'm teachin you a lesson, correction records don't mean shit
You only got a good rec cuz you battle newbies or ya rhymes is bit
You can't see me not even a glitch your rap ability is deductible bitch
Even if it wasn't it'd still be destructible shit

your verse was kinda weak - i kinda wasnt feelin some of your punches - your wordplay wasnt hittin and your verse was a little to basic - 4.5/10

return the favor in one of my battles in my sig....

uppin for voters..................etc....................... .......

Voted For: Ruffridah187

Voted: Ruffridah -cos i think he really had it up in his verse.

dj em cee: your opener was real good man. that kicked ass. His was also real good tho so i think they came off even in my eyes. Your vocab was good and the bar was clever and entertaining. Closer was good but to be honest with you i think you tried too hard to get in the good vocab you forgot about making it a really good hard hitting punch. It definately wasnt. Overall ya verse was good, had good vocab selection of words generally used well. Lot of metas in there and some good punches that didnt seem to come off very personal.

Ruffridah187: Won this battle for sheer entertainment level and selection of hard hitting punches that were personal and definately hitting him where it hurts. there were no problems with ya vocab and ya metapjors were used well. Good verse bro. Good things could come of you.

Voted For: d.j em sce

Ruff- You had some basic lines, punches were good. Words was basic. Flow was chopped up in some places. Wordplay didnt see any. I did seeked personals (dissing his rec). Punches was good, words was just too basic.


Dj- Alright the opener, you started talking about your-self. Punches Throughout the verse was good, and decent. Flow was good. Wordplay with punches was decent. Personals was "eh" ok, (dissing his writings saying its basic).




overall= wack ass battle, both heads needs to elevate. Ruff you had some good punches with "eh" ok wordplay. Words was just too basic, meaning your punches was basic. Dj stop glorifying yourself, when you do openers hit at your opponent not talking about yourself. You had good punches, with sgood flow. Add some more personals in your verse. You still got it with harder punches. Ruff your punches was basic, not really effective. sorry. no hate.


peace