i think dis was a good drop i like da structure yo vocab decent verse

thanks.....uppin

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this shit was hot i can relate to how you feel me parents like that dis the was good as a bitch man ill like you structure and the concept of the verse really got me into it i gotta check out more of your stuff

word thanks....

word.....much appreciated....but shit i have way more better shit den this...

uppin...........

shit was straight, on point, vocab was bout a 7/10. i like the true story aspect i give that a 9/10 so overall i'd have to give you a 8/10 keep shit real

word thanks.......uppin

this definatly has a good flow and carried through-out the verse...vocab was pretty nice and lyrics were also aight overall...but nice shit all around, i was feelin it
keep droppin ~1~

Man this was garbage. All you did was tell a boring story with a few big words. Flow was offffffffffffff. Emotion wasn't there, you don't use words like "Whack" when you're trying to be real. Did I already say how bad the flow was? Horrible. Dont center your shit cuz it fucks up the reading abilities, I don't care how pretty it looks. You gotta get more fuckin creative and get deeper into the lyrics, cuz this was TRASH.

3/10

^tru......but this was one of my wack ones..ive started to use metas in my lines more now..and i also rushed this too...but socrates you couldnt do any better;)...upin