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Why do people "check the polls"? Why not just say freepost.................... Same thing basically. At least leave feedback.

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Voted For: Personify

I think personify took this topical,
I felt his emotions more on this one as if I was getting stripped of my freedom scary huh
his strucutre was good his worplay was iight tho it could work on it but it was ok his rhyming was good vocab was execellent and these are the things I liked in this topical.

They strip us and tell us how we should look a European bully
They speak in a foreign tongue so we do not understand fully
Life within this room is all of my thoughts
I ponder on the pain and pleasure that it has brought
These chains depress me and keep my personality shadowed
I am not the leader of this trend and yet I am still followed
Emotion repressed by people's unneeded fears,
It cannot be stopped because of their shedding of tears.
My feelings and body are exposed as I am whipped like a slave

8.1/10

return the fav on my links peace

Voted For: Personify


Final
Good Ish Kid, Your Rhyme Scheme Was Decent Some Parts Kind Of Faded But Others Came Back, Your Vocabulary Was Nice, Some Multi's Was Here Not Alot But Pretty Decent In A Way
Your Opener Was Very Good, But Your Middle Was Best Part Of Your Verse, I Really Enjoyed Reading This Verse Coz It Was True All Through Out It...9/10

Personify
Alright, Man Nice Your Opener Came Out, Basically You Lined Every Bar Up In Order To Make It So Ppl Could Understand, One Of The Things Final Lacked, Also Had A Copious Ammount Of Good Vocabulary, Your Rhyme Scheme Was Decent In Some Bars, But Not All....Also Some Multi's In Here...And That Meta Made It Well, I Enjoyed Reading This More Then Finals Coz In Reality You Made More Since In Your Verse...And The Use Of Reality To Describe Reality Was Deep, For You Get A Perfect 10 Man Nice Verse...10/10

Vote=Personify

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checking pollz....dont feel like voting....sorry :\