uppin fo some votes so i can close this battle playas

uppin fo some votes people what the fuckkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

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checkin pollz......................................

Voted For: OMEGA*

ok lol this is a classic case of quality over quantity. omega merked on this dude phive. those punches were just ko's freal. especially the one about arab's at airpoints that shit was hard lol.
structure=both
multies=phive
punches=omega
flow=omega
vocab=omega
creativity=omega
phive needs to work on the quality of the bars he spits n not just trynna spit a whole bunch of bars. so my vote goes to omega
holla back at me and RTF
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well u know u could dq'ed diz fool 4 going ova da line limit

uppin fo some votes to close this battle ill return the favour

Voted For: OMEGA*

Omega got this one easily.. his first bar alone was so sick that it eat phive's whole verse..

Phive work on that structure, put it into lines not a sentence like you got em, it messes up the flow the structure and its harder to find a punch like that.

overall: 4/10

Omega your first and last bar were your best ones.. you had good metas in all your bars and some dope punches.. good wordplay here and there.. you should try using more personals though, they really grab the readers attention but you had a dope verse either way

overall : 8/10

Vote: Omega

Return the favor with a honest vote please!

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=2011362

fuck off dumb nigga i werked this fool man

Voted For: OMEGA*

Punchlines: Omega
Multis (that weren't forced): Omega
Personals: I didn't see many...
Wordplay: Omega
Delivery: Omega

Vote: This was a pretty one sided battle, as you can see from the breakdown....Omega dominated this - omega