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Voted For: (x) CeEd

damn...................x u got killd her G.............u wak son

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Voted For: (x) CeEd

X Cee Took This, Nice Punches Decent Vocabulary, Also Had Some Creative WordPlay, Need Some MEta's But It Altight, Both Of You Need Work On Your Structure, DIplosive You Need Work On Your Rhyme Scheme Buth X Ceed You Need Help In Multi's You Had Some Alright Punches Though
Over All
Punches-X Ceed
Meta's-Tie
Multi's-Tie
Personals-Tie
Over All X Ceed To This Battle Return The Favor Man Link In Sig Me Vs Death And Only That One

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Voted For: Diplosive

STYLE:
cant feel either; poor closers in both cases, need to step it up here

PUNCH:
(X)eed, ur punches made sense, but were way subpar and elementary, Elvis Presley, Gwen Stefani... sour cream? DISNEY? i rest my case
Diplosive, some good ones, some were just wack

FLOW:
cant find the flow here guys, somewhat awkward rhythm

TECHNIQUE:
(X)eed, "like, like, like, like, like, like, like"... u need to expand ur vocab
Diplosive, this a battle, not a poorly grammared essay, lets hope this was actually "something keyed up real quickly"

S: (X)eed > Diplosive
P: =tiE=
F: (X)eed > Diplosive
T: Diplosive > (X)eed
OVERALL: i found myself not weighing out which 1 of the 2 being the better, but rather which 1 of the 2 wasnt as bad... need some work guys, this was a hard vote
VOTE: Diplosive

ps:
(X)eed, expections (in ur sig) is not a word, by the way is it (X)eed or (X)CeEd, people know u by ur name, they cant if u dont even have 1
Diplosive, anorexic is the word ur looking for, dont make up words just to rhyme! while we're on this topic, its losses not losts, plagues not plaques, sense not cents

using the right words is a major part of being lyrical.

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Voted For: Diplosive

displosive haha wow i think you tore him a new one.. but yea i liked ur drop it had alot of good vocabulary.. cept u didnt really need to waste it all on him youcoulda beat him in 6 i think haha. but yea you kept it up nice .. not to complex but not retarded nice vocab and personals
7/10

x-eed wow . umm where to i start? ok first your vocab was nice you just need to learn how to make it work and actually make ur punches into punches.. this is rap not slap boxing ha. but yea you had some good ideas you just didnt make em work for ya.. you got the ideas just learn how to use them ...elevate no hate though

vote//displosive return the favor with a honest vote .. link is at the bottom of my sig