bump for votes....................................

assas-sin up thys too you punk ass bitch. Choke on a dick you know I'll win just get it over with.

Uppyn thys shyt...................................

uppin this shit...................................

Voted For: Legend

cali-could have came betta u had weak punches didn't
really come hard...u had only a few..vocab was good
a few multis..structure could have been betta but ur
balance & flow was ight 8.5/10
legend- u came harder in this battle..u had the betta
punches that landed..vocab was good..more
multis...structure was good..balance & flow was
on point that's y legend gets my vote 9.5/10
make sure 2 return the favor

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CALI wtf uppyn thys battle........................

Hello, I need votes people........................

Voted For: Legend

legend won with better vocab and better punches they hit hard and direct to the point nice flow and structre good metas

best line-Compared to digital cameras with low resolutions I'm distorting ya image
Got you frightened of finish lines so you wont come close to winning
7.5/10

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uppyn thys shyt,..................................

Voted For: Legend

Prolifik:
C'mon fam da *Punches* i spit will leave ya *Black-Out* fella
Cuz my 2 *Fist* be like Jayz and *Rip* lika *Roc-Fella*
Weak opener, punch didn't hit very hard
And its only *Legend* of me to put ya in place
Thatz in front of ya lil sis when she gettin me sum face
Weak attempt at a personal, didn't hit
How're ya a legend if ya record is 11-9?There must be a mistake
Maybe you need to be like that *Dick*in your*Hand* and take a *Break*
If it weren't for the explanation, it comes off as though you're saying his dick broke.
Shit nigka how you rockin 50?Oh I see he makes ya look *Rich*
Since ya only gettin *Pennies* by bein da Legend of suckin guys *Dicks*
Weak...
Me merkin you,isnt that so true,Talkin shit get ya body caught up blue
Tek 9's be bustin,Seein you on da block hustlin,NAW!!you da kinda nigka no1 be trustin
I sure hope this was 2 bars that you just forgot to space out, otherwise it's stretched to hell. Nothing hit either
Thiz battle mine so take action and run away till dis *Loss Catches Up*
^^And get 50 cents thrown in ya *Cup*
Fairly decent punch, understood it without the explanation
And ya rap skillz will never be *Notorious*so stop lying to ya self
You being a *PIMP* shit do pigs fly?Or are you just dreaming to ya self
Blah, could've been worded a lot better.

Legend:
Lyrically bomb shit, spit twice as nice, as if my tongues' split
Like dollar bills Assas-Sin beating me is definitely non-cents
Decent meta, aight opener overall
Compared to digital cameras with low resolutions I'm distorting ya image
Got you frightened of finish lines so you wont come close to winning
Setup was decent, 2nd line didn't deliver.
Assas-Sin spit hot?.....not even being of dragon decent..
Bowel movements during your happiest hour wont help you drop some nice shit
Weak...
Watch your face cave in from ways that my fist and your head is mergin
Rolling blunts with Bible pages wont help you create dope verses
Weak, but better than most of the other bars in this battle
Mad instincts compromise any efforts you make to defeat me
Facing me with two drumsticks couldn’t give enough props to beat me
Weak closer.

Overall, I'm gonna have to give this one to Legend, although this was a wack battle. Assas-Sin, most of your lines were stretched, and the ones that weren't had other problems. You dropped 2 consecutive bars talking about dicks...that's played as hell. Stop explaining your punches too, it's booty.
Legend, your verse was weak too, punches weren't hard and you had some played shit too. Both of you need to elevate quite a bit, but no hate. Keep it real:thumbup:

Oh, and return the vote here. Do it honestly and explained.
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Uppyn thys shyt...................................

Voted For: Legend

Legend
structure is decent.. some of your lines are stretched though.. your flow falls off a little due to the stretchness.. you had a few multis.. wordplay was pretty good.. some of your punches connected.. no good personals..

.Grafh.
structure is good.. flow is on target.. no multis.. take away the **'s from your wordplay.. its mad newbish.. your wordplay on the whole is average.. dont explain your punches.. that really takes away from the punchlines.. a few of your punches still connected though.. you attempted a few personals.. they just didnt connect..

Overall
.Grafh. had the better structure.. the better flow.. and attempted more personals.. Legend had more multis.. better wordplay and more connecting punches.. so, basing off of that.. i see multis, wordplay and punches as more effective then structure, flow and personals.. so im going to give this to Legend.. good battle though fellas.. keep elevating .Grafh..

VOTE - LEGEND

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Voted For: Legend

legend takes this........


he had some multies, better punches....and his tructer was alot better...it wasnt a great verse or anything but it wass coo..... :thumbup:

assasin....your verse had simple punches wernt any good either....your struc was a lil off....and u had no multies.....

so my vote goes to.........Legend