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This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 

I don't know who took this one. I'm leaning more towards OSB because I was feeling his personals and structure wayy better, but then Buck had some nice mettas and half descent punches that I seen in his verse. So I don't know. It kinda evens out. I'm just not guna vote....uppin...sry

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uppin..... this has been open forever.............

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

meh, i wasn't really feeling either verses, to tell you the truth, both came out dry, seriously, both have done waaay better, but this is a hella old battle....haha......im giving it to onestep, because i chuckled at a few more of his lines, i dunno buck, i think your verse was plagued by poor set up lines, and non-creative punches, no hate or nothing, just wasnt too interestin, i liked your intro, that was a good personal, but nothing was good after it, and i really hated your closer, no-show lines are stupid......so, onestep gets it for having a little more creativity, but kept it consistent......oh, critique onestep too.....meh, kinda basic, up vocab and wordplay, but you still edged this out

v/onestep

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uppin for fuck sake...............................

uppin this for some closage......throw up your diamonds

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lmfao...this battle has been going on for a long ass time....damn!!!!!